Dzentelmen
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"Hi. I'm a pretty lazy person who likes to come up with stories but never has enough time or energy to write them. I finally managed to write a story I've been thinking about for a couple years and I'm hoping to retain the speed at which I'm writing now." That's the description I have on my FanFiction net profile(I'm known as Leinil there). It's not entirely true now. I've been writing this story since May of 2018 and I have slowed down a lot in the past year but I still haven't given up on it. I figured that there are probably people who don't visit that site or do it and never noticed this story because of the abundance of works posted there every day, so for these people I decided to post it here.
Every chapter has an afterword but looking back at some of them I recognize that they're pretty cringy since they're pretty much just a stream of consciousness, so I won't be posting them or any of the additional stuff, just the chapters. There are three classifications of chapters; regular ones, side stories and special chapters. Side stories are the chapters that are usually shorter than regulars ones and are used to expand upon secondary and tertiary characters. Special chapters are way longer than regular ones, take place entirely in a certain setting and feature a seperate supporting cast and enemies much like a Pokemon anime movie would. There are currently 48 regular chapters, 6 side stories and 1 special chapter.
I used Microsoft Word for a long time but switched to Google Docs since it's more convenient. I don't have anyone to proofread the chapters so I do it myself but when I go over older chapters for reference I still catch one or two mistakes(stuff like accidentally using plural instead of singular) and edit them. I do have a problem with remembering some things that I establish and I inadvertently hinder myself. One example of that is deciding a Pokemon's gender but reverting back to calling all Pokemon "it" instead of "she" or "he".
As for what this Fan Fic is about, it's my interpration of the games from the first generation, although I have vague plans for stories covering the remaining gens. It draws inspirations from not only games but also from the anime and the manga, but I try to give my own spin to everything. Besides focusing on collecting Pokemon and battling with them, it's also Coming-of-age story so there's some drama and romance. The first chapter isn't too thrilling but it should be enough to fill you in on the premise
I'm not going to throw everything at you all at once. Instead I'll try to remember to post a new chapter every Sunday, until I catch up to the newest chapter at which point You'll have to wait until I write more. Anyways, here's the first(and probably the worst) chapter. I was weirdly snarky at the beginning but that disappears entirely in the second chapter so please bear with me.
Chapter 1: Ready.
This is a story. That is true. This certainly can be called a story. It has a beginning, a middle and... Scratch that. It does not have an end. It does not really have a middle yet. There are things that will happen after the beginning, but how can one say if something has a middle if it does not have an end? That's pretty confusing to me. But then again, I'm not a naturally bright person. But, you know what is bright? The sun. And it was bright all the same on that day that a certain teenage boy decided to embark on a journey that would define his whole life.
His name was Red, which gives you an insight into how imaginative were his parents. That kinda name can really influence a kid. Red's favorite color was red. His jacket was red, his hat too. Not his pants though. That's just bad fashion sense.
Red lived in the Kanto region. If somebody is not sure where that is, the only clue is this that it's right next to Johto region. But at this time in the story it's not really important. Red himself was too preoccupied with other things to even know about the existence of other regions. He rarely even had the chance to live his hometown, Viridian City.
His parents were a pretty average couple. His dad had a small grocery shop and his mother worked at a local office. They were pretty carefree and let Red decide what he wanted to do with his time. Sometimes, he attended the local school, but at other times he would wander around doing all kinds of stuff that relaxed him; fishing, playing football with friends, exploring the forest.
One day, when he was about 13 years old, he got hurt when he was attacked by a wild Mankey. His mother was pretty worried and wanted to start setting some rules as to keep him safe, but his father was more lenient and instead chose to provide Red with a partner that would help him during any future dangers. This partner was an Eevee. Red and the Pokemon quickly formed a strong bond. This kinda alienated Red from other teenagers, because most of them did not have Pokemon. It was fairly normal that a person who got their first Pokemon would set out on a journey to become a Pokemon trainer. Red wasn't too interested in it. He had loving parents, a great friend and all the time in the world to do whatever he wanted, so there really was no reason for him to begin a journey that would limit him to going from city to city and gathering badges.
One day, when Red was at his friends birthday party, all the other kids were preoccupied with the presents that the boy received. Red knew that the only reason he was invited was because the mother of the other boy pressured him into it, since she felt bad for Red. While others were playing outside, he went into the house to get himself a snack, and he noticed the boy's dad watching television. Luck would have it, that it was the semi-finale of the Kanto Pokemon League. Agatha, a famous trainer who was part of the Elite Four was using her Gengar in a fight against another trainer's Nidorino. Gengar was trying to hit the opponent with a Shadow Claw but Nidorino managed to avoid the attack and used Peck. At that moment, the father noticed Red and asked him if he needed something. Red remembered why he went into the house but was kinda embarrassed so he left without saying anything. He didn't go for the snacks. He left the party entirely.
On his way home, during dinner and when laying in bed, he was still thinking about the fight he saw. For the next couple of days, Red mostly stayed indoors, watching various videos on Pokemon on the internet and reading books about tactics used in Pokemon fights. Soon, he and Eevee would spend a lot less time playing around and a lot more, venturing out into Viridian Forest to fight the wild Pokemon there. Finally, Red decided to talk to his parents about the possibility of being a Pokemon trainer.
"You're going to be a Pokemon trainer?" his dad responded in surprise "Well, if that's what you want to do, you should go for it."
"What are you talking about?" the mother interrupted angrily "I know that we have decided to allow him a lot of freedom but I thought that was because you wanted him to have a satisfying childhood, so he would have no problem with taking over your business down the line."
"I mean... that kinda was my plan... but I don't really want to limit him. My father worked in a coal mine and wanted me to do the same, but I knew I wouldn't be suitable for that kind of job so I decided to do what I wanted to do and hoped it would work out. That's just how people in our family do it."
"I guess... but... Red, are you really sure this is what you want to do?"
The boy held up his chin with a hand and made a focused face while humming all the while to finally respond "Yes. At least for now. I don't want to set a specific goal for myself but if I at any point realize that this Pokemon trainer thing is not working out, I will return home. How about that?"
The mother, still visibly concerned, looked at her husband, then back at her son and nodded.
"If you are going to be a Pokemon trainer" said the father "there is something that I could arrange that would help you."
"What is it?"
"I don't want to make any promises so give some time, and when I'm sure whether this thing will work out or not, that's when you'll be free to go on your journey. Till then, just focus on preparing. We will give you some starting money, but it'll be good if you can learn to earn some yourself before going on a journey. Is that okay with you?"
"I guess... But what do you want me to do?"
"I didn't really have anything in mind... but... you are pretty good at fishing. You could try selling the fish you catch."
"Okay. I'll do that."
Some time passed. It's been already 2 years since Red got his Eevee but only a couple months since he started being interested in becoming a Pokemon trainer. Over that time, his previous friends showed more interest, noticing him constantly training with his Pokemon and earning money. They felt too embarrassed to talk to him about what he was doing so they learned from his parents about him becoming a Pokemon trainer. They all started to feel bad about how they treated him and also kinda jealous. Many of them were inspired by Red deciding to take fate into his hands and working towards something. A lot of them still did not know what they wanted to do with their lives and weren't too keen to find any goals for the future, so seeing how Red was the only one doing something at that time, they started to feel bad about themselves.
However, soon a couple of them started to focus more on their studies, realizing that they need them to get the future jobs they wanted. Others began helping at local businesses to get a feel of what it means to be a working adult. Even though Red was the first one to take initiative, it actually seemed like his future was the one which was most unstable. Nevertheless, they were grateful to Red for the unwitting inspiration that he provided them. As a show of gratitude, when the day on which he would start his journey arrived, they threw him a big farewell party. There were many hugs, tears and apologies. Finally, it was time for Red to learn what his father hoped to arrange for him and if the whole thing worked out.
"So, you're gonna be on your way soon" said his dad, with a voice filled with pride but also a hint of sadness.
His mother was standing behind the father, holding a tissue she used already several times to wipe her tears.
"Yes. Me and Eevee have been doing a lot of training... I'm really excited for this" Red responded.
The father had to do a double take, because for a second there, Red seemed much taller than he really was, and his eyes looked almost ablaze with raging fire.
"Have you heard about Professor Oak?"
"Of course. He came up many times during my studies. I didn't really get much of the sciency stuff but he's supposed to be some kind of genius from Pallet Town."
"Yes. That's him. I heard from a friend that Professor Oak was creating something like a scholarship. He provides beginning Pokemon trainers with Pokemon and in exchange they have to regularly send him data from their Pokedexes."
"Poke-wha?"
"Yeah... I also don't get the "sciency" stuff. Anyway, I was worried that Professor wouldn't want to have you work for him because you've already got yourself a Pokemon but it turned out that he still had one Pokemon left to give out. Normally he wouldn't give it to somebody who already has a Pokemon but this one is a special case."
"How come?"
"I heard this one is a real pain in the a..."
"Honey!" his wife interrupted him.
"Sorry... Anyway, he will give you the Pokemon and if you can manage to tame him, you can take him on your journey."
"That's... that's awesome! You hear that, Eevee?!" Red yelled excited as he picked up his Pokemon and spun around a couple times.
"But remember Red, be care..." his mother begun, but she was too late.
Red was so ecstatic that he already ran off without even saying goodbye to his parents. After about 10 meters he realized that and turned around to yell "Don't worry! I'm gonna become a great trainer!"
"He seems a lot more sure of what he's doing than before" the mother commented.
"I said it many times already. When someone in our family decides on something, they won't change their mind, they won't stop until their achieve their goals... Even if these goals are kinda hard to define."
Red stepped onto a great boulder, inhaled powerfully and declared "The southern wind is blowing. 'Tis the scent of adventure."
A moment later, a cloud of dandelion seeds, caused by a nearby Spearow, flew into his face, causing him to sneeze and fall off the boulder. Eevee, who was previously playing with one dandelion himself, ran to his trainer with a worried expression on his face. Red quickly got up and proceeded to massage a bump that formed on the back of his head.
"Owww. Darn it. Whoever is responsible for that will answer dearly to... oo... oo... Aaah! It still hurts!"
Red run around the boulder with Eevee following closely behind. When he noticed the Spearow playing in the grass, he pointed angrily at him "You!"
The bird, previously oblivious to the teenagers presence, and clearly not intending to do anybody any harm, looked at both of them in confusion.
"Eevee, give him a what for!"
This time, the dog Pokemon also looked at his trainer with a face that clearly showed that he had no idea what "a what for" is.
"What? You know what to do. You give him... like "a what" and then... like "fo..." after a while Red realized that he was not getting through to his Pokemon "Just... Just use Tackle."
When he finally received a command he could understand, Eevee quickly ran through the field of flowers and slammed into the bird Pokemon with such force that he flew a couple meters, not using his wings, mind you, and hit a tree standing where the flowers ended. Red and Eevee waited a couple seconds to see if the opponent would get up.
Finally, the Spearow got on his feet and gave Eevee an angry look. Right after that, he mustered his strength, clearly showing that the attack affected him greatly, and took to the sky. He gave out a couple of long screechy cries. After that, there came more cries. Reverberating like an echo, they deafened Red and Eevee.
Soon, they realized that the sounds came from a whole flock of Spearows who made that tree, and a couple other ones, their homes. About 50 angry birds were getting ready to attack, and Red realized that one stupid move could be the thing that would cause his journey to end prematurely.
Every chapter has an afterword but looking back at some of them I recognize that they're pretty cringy since they're pretty much just a stream of consciousness, so I won't be posting them or any of the additional stuff, just the chapters. There are three classifications of chapters; regular ones, side stories and special chapters. Side stories are the chapters that are usually shorter than regulars ones and are used to expand upon secondary and tertiary characters. Special chapters are way longer than regular ones, take place entirely in a certain setting and feature a seperate supporting cast and enemies much like a Pokemon anime movie would. There are currently 48 regular chapters, 6 side stories and 1 special chapter.
I used Microsoft Word for a long time but switched to Google Docs since it's more convenient. I don't have anyone to proofread the chapters so I do it myself but when I go over older chapters for reference I still catch one or two mistakes(stuff like accidentally using plural instead of singular) and edit them. I do have a problem with remembering some things that I establish and I inadvertently hinder myself. One example of that is deciding a Pokemon's gender but reverting back to calling all Pokemon "it" instead of "she" or "he".
As for what this Fan Fic is about, it's my interpration of the games from the first generation, although I have vague plans for stories covering the remaining gens. It draws inspirations from not only games but also from the anime and the manga, but I try to give my own spin to everything. Besides focusing on collecting Pokemon and battling with them, it's also Coming-of-age story so there's some drama and romance. The first chapter isn't too thrilling but it should be enough to fill you in on the premise
I'm not going to throw everything at you all at once. Instead I'll try to remember to post a new chapter every Sunday, until I catch up to the newest chapter at which point You'll have to wait until I write more. Anyways, here's the first(and probably the worst) chapter. I was weirdly snarky at the beginning but that disappears entirely in the second chapter so please bear with me.
Chapter 1: Ready.
This is a story. That is true. This certainly can be called a story. It has a beginning, a middle and... Scratch that. It does not have an end. It does not really have a middle yet. There are things that will happen after the beginning, but how can one say if something has a middle if it does not have an end? That's pretty confusing to me. But then again, I'm not a naturally bright person. But, you know what is bright? The sun. And it was bright all the same on that day that a certain teenage boy decided to embark on a journey that would define his whole life.
. . .
His name was Red, which gives you an insight into how imaginative were his parents. That kinda name can really influence a kid. Red's favorite color was red. His jacket was red, his hat too. Not his pants though. That's just bad fashion sense.
Red lived in the Kanto region. If somebody is not sure where that is, the only clue is this that it's right next to Johto region. But at this time in the story it's not really important. Red himself was too preoccupied with other things to even know about the existence of other regions. He rarely even had the chance to live his hometown, Viridian City.
His parents were a pretty average couple. His dad had a small grocery shop and his mother worked at a local office. They were pretty carefree and let Red decide what he wanted to do with his time. Sometimes, he attended the local school, but at other times he would wander around doing all kinds of stuff that relaxed him; fishing, playing football with friends, exploring the forest.
One day, when he was about 13 years old, he got hurt when he was attacked by a wild Mankey. His mother was pretty worried and wanted to start setting some rules as to keep him safe, but his father was more lenient and instead chose to provide Red with a partner that would help him during any future dangers. This partner was an Eevee. Red and the Pokemon quickly formed a strong bond. This kinda alienated Red from other teenagers, because most of them did not have Pokemon. It was fairly normal that a person who got their first Pokemon would set out on a journey to become a Pokemon trainer. Red wasn't too interested in it. He had loving parents, a great friend and all the time in the world to do whatever he wanted, so there really was no reason for him to begin a journey that would limit him to going from city to city and gathering badges.
One day, when Red was at his friends birthday party, all the other kids were preoccupied with the presents that the boy received. Red knew that the only reason he was invited was because the mother of the other boy pressured him into it, since she felt bad for Red. While others were playing outside, he went into the house to get himself a snack, and he noticed the boy's dad watching television. Luck would have it, that it was the semi-finale of the Kanto Pokemon League. Agatha, a famous trainer who was part of the Elite Four was using her Gengar in a fight against another trainer's Nidorino. Gengar was trying to hit the opponent with a Shadow Claw but Nidorino managed to avoid the attack and used Peck. At that moment, the father noticed Red and asked him if he needed something. Red remembered why he went into the house but was kinda embarrassed so he left without saying anything. He didn't go for the snacks. He left the party entirely.
On his way home, during dinner and when laying in bed, he was still thinking about the fight he saw. For the next couple of days, Red mostly stayed indoors, watching various videos on Pokemon on the internet and reading books about tactics used in Pokemon fights. Soon, he and Eevee would spend a lot less time playing around and a lot more, venturing out into Viridian Forest to fight the wild Pokemon there. Finally, Red decided to talk to his parents about the possibility of being a Pokemon trainer.
"You're going to be a Pokemon trainer?" his dad responded in surprise "Well, if that's what you want to do, you should go for it."
"What are you talking about?" the mother interrupted angrily "I know that we have decided to allow him a lot of freedom but I thought that was because you wanted him to have a satisfying childhood, so he would have no problem with taking over your business down the line."
"I mean... that kinda was my plan... but I don't really want to limit him. My father worked in a coal mine and wanted me to do the same, but I knew I wouldn't be suitable for that kind of job so I decided to do what I wanted to do and hoped it would work out. That's just how people in our family do it."
"I guess... but... Red, are you really sure this is what you want to do?"
The boy held up his chin with a hand and made a focused face while humming all the while to finally respond "Yes. At least for now. I don't want to set a specific goal for myself but if I at any point realize that this Pokemon trainer thing is not working out, I will return home. How about that?"
The mother, still visibly concerned, looked at her husband, then back at her son and nodded.
"If you are going to be a Pokemon trainer" said the father "there is something that I could arrange that would help you."
"What is it?"
"I don't want to make any promises so give some time, and when I'm sure whether this thing will work out or not, that's when you'll be free to go on your journey. Till then, just focus on preparing. We will give you some starting money, but it'll be good if you can learn to earn some yourself before going on a journey. Is that okay with you?"
"I guess... But what do you want me to do?"
"I didn't really have anything in mind... but... you are pretty good at fishing. You could try selling the fish you catch."
"Okay. I'll do that."
. . .
Some time passed. It's been already 2 years since Red got his Eevee but only a couple months since he started being interested in becoming a Pokemon trainer. Over that time, his previous friends showed more interest, noticing him constantly training with his Pokemon and earning money. They felt too embarrassed to talk to him about what he was doing so they learned from his parents about him becoming a Pokemon trainer. They all started to feel bad about how they treated him and also kinda jealous. Many of them were inspired by Red deciding to take fate into his hands and working towards something. A lot of them still did not know what they wanted to do with their lives and weren't too keen to find any goals for the future, so seeing how Red was the only one doing something at that time, they started to feel bad about themselves.
However, soon a couple of them started to focus more on their studies, realizing that they need them to get the future jobs they wanted. Others began helping at local businesses to get a feel of what it means to be a working adult. Even though Red was the first one to take initiative, it actually seemed like his future was the one which was most unstable. Nevertheless, they were grateful to Red for the unwitting inspiration that he provided them. As a show of gratitude, when the day on which he would start his journey arrived, they threw him a big farewell party. There were many hugs, tears and apologies. Finally, it was time for Red to learn what his father hoped to arrange for him and if the whole thing worked out.
"So, you're gonna be on your way soon" said his dad, with a voice filled with pride but also a hint of sadness.
His mother was standing behind the father, holding a tissue she used already several times to wipe her tears.
"Yes. Me and Eevee have been doing a lot of training... I'm really excited for this" Red responded.
The father had to do a double take, because for a second there, Red seemed much taller than he really was, and his eyes looked almost ablaze with raging fire.
"Have you heard about Professor Oak?"
"Of course. He came up many times during my studies. I didn't really get much of the sciency stuff but he's supposed to be some kind of genius from Pallet Town."
"Yes. That's him. I heard from a friend that Professor Oak was creating something like a scholarship. He provides beginning Pokemon trainers with Pokemon and in exchange they have to regularly send him data from their Pokedexes."
"Poke-wha?"
"Yeah... I also don't get the "sciency" stuff. Anyway, I was worried that Professor wouldn't want to have you work for him because you've already got yourself a Pokemon but it turned out that he still had one Pokemon left to give out. Normally he wouldn't give it to somebody who already has a Pokemon but this one is a special case."
"How come?"
"I heard this one is a real pain in the a..."
"Honey!" his wife interrupted him.
"Sorry... Anyway, he will give you the Pokemon and if you can manage to tame him, you can take him on your journey."
"That's... that's awesome! You hear that, Eevee?!" Red yelled excited as he picked up his Pokemon and spun around a couple times.
"But remember Red, be care..." his mother begun, but she was too late.
Red was so ecstatic that he already ran off without even saying goodbye to his parents. After about 10 meters he realized that and turned around to yell "Don't worry! I'm gonna become a great trainer!"
"He seems a lot more sure of what he's doing than before" the mother commented.
"I said it many times already. When someone in our family decides on something, they won't change their mind, they won't stop until their achieve their goals... Even if these goals are kinda hard to define."
. . .
Red stepped onto a great boulder, inhaled powerfully and declared "The southern wind is blowing. 'Tis the scent of adventure."
A moment later, a cloud of dandelion seeds, caused by a nearby Spearow, flew into his face, causing him to sneeze and fall off the boulder. Eevee, who was previously playing with one dandelion himself, ran to his trainer with a worried expression on his face. Red quickly got up and proceeded to massage a bump that formed on the back of his head.
"Owww. Darn it. Whoever is responsible for that will answer dearly to... oo... oo... Aaah! It still hurts!"
Red run around the boulder with Eevee following closely behind. When he noticed the Spearow playing in the grass, he pointed angrily at him "You!"
The bird, previously oblivious to the teenagers presence, and clearly not intending to do anybody any harm, looked at both of them in confusion.
"Eevee, give him a what for!"
This time, the dog Pokemon also looked at his trainer with a face that clearly showed that he had no idea what "a what for" is.
"What? You know what to do. You give him... like "a what" and then... like "fo..." after a while Red realized that he was not getting through to his Pokemon "Just... Just use Tackle."
When he finally received a command he could understand, Eevee quickly ran through the field of flowers and slammed into the bird Pokemon with such force that he flew a couple meters, not using his wings, mind you, and hit a tree standing where the flowers ended. Red and Eevee waited a couple seconds to see if the opponent would get up.
Finally, the Spearow got on his feet and gave Eevee an angry look. Right after that, he mustered his strength, clearly showing that the attack affected him greatly, and took to the sky. He gave out a couple of long screechy cries. After that, there came more cries. Reverberating like an echo, they deafened Red and Eevee.
Soon, they realized that the sounds came from a whole flock of Spearows who made that tree, and a couple other ones, their homes. About 50 angry birds were getting ready to attack, and Red realized that one stupid move could be the thing that would cause his journey to end prematurely.