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Pokemon the Great Adventure

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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
Hello everyone! This is my new comic (actually first ^^). I know most of you don't like journey comics but I will make this one good. And tell me if its too "journey like". Also please dont spam. Well here it is! BTW, Please post!
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Season 1: Hoenn Series
The beginning of a new journey
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Protecting Nic and Stone Hard Battles
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Special Episodes:
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Fan Stuff:
Send me some if you have some!

Sprites:
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Joining Rules:
No more people! I have enough!

Credit:
dabou8(For joining)
Dafearo(svenks)(For joining)
Beco(For joining)
PK(For joining)
Spriters resource
pokemonelite2000
Meganium XD (For joining)
ashgirlsmayandmisty (For joining)
Ivymoonrose (For joining)
Pyramid King Brandon(For joining)
Silver Fusion
lotadlover(For joining)
Legendaries(For joining)
Chikorita III
Coronis
Yoshinichi(For joining)
Entie 26 (For joining)
Russian May (For joining)
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Pokefan26

Woot! SSB!
What!?
Your doing the Hoenn plot...not a surprise...
Sprites are recolored terribly...
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
Pokefan26 said:
What!?
Your doing the Hoenn plot...not a surprise...
Sprites are recolored terribly...
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Sorry.....I'll improve. Thanks for telling me! Oh yeah and the Hoenn plot it will be good trust me...^^ But is Brandon bad recolored because all I did to him is color the red parts on a Brendan sprite blue..?
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
Pokefan26 said:
Well I hope you make a big improvement.
And maybe you can give the plot a twist...
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Yah...The plot may be a little like the game but I'll give it a twist. And also on my next episode when you see the ugly sprite I'm going to make its suppose to be ugly!
 
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Pokefan26

Woot! SSB!
SoulGuardian said:
Yah...The plot may be a little like the game but I'll give it a twist. And also on my next episode when you see the ugly sprite I'm going to make its suppose to be ugly!
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Ok...I'll be keeping an eye around here...
And, I'm impressed that you didn't take my 'crit seriously. WOW SOMEONE DIDN'T START FLAMING ME...HALELUJAH!
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
Controller of Flames said:
Bad recolours, game plot, starting in Littleroot, keeps comic like a generic pokemon game, text outside of pannels do you people ever read sticky's?

And one that isn;t on that guide, too many people.
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Um sorry! Its my first comic so it sucks at the beginning...But COF I said I'll make the plot a little different and some other peoples comics have text out of panels and they dont get in trouble. I'll improve. (BTW, in the 2nd episode i'll make an ugly sprite and I want it to be ugly)
I think I need help with my comic...
 
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Sakura Haruno

May
wow really good , its way better than what i can do , i like it ... oh i have a question for you soulguardian i will pm you it .anyways really good comic , and the reclouring is good ,in overall i give it a 5/5 .
 
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Sakura Haruno

May
wow,that was better than the last .BRAVO. i thought it was hilarious !i hope i get to travel with that brandon boy ! anyways,my mom looks wierd ,but i like it,the story overall its really good !keep up the great work .
 
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Angelic Elf Ivy

Well-Known Member
I like it! *claps* Can't wait until I come in. ^_^ I think that you did really good for this being your first time. Here! *gives a Christmas cookie*
 
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kapslock

Well-Known Member
*Bangs head on wall numerous times* Another flipping journey comic? I hope your ready for some serious constructive crit. First of all, a journey comic, couldnt you of thought of a more original idea? Were`r already gonna know what`s gonna happen.Second, The whole 2 comics were like "I wake up, I brush my teeth,I eat, I eat again,I eat yet again, I brush, then i go to sleep".
Third, Text next to pannel, learn to use speech bubbles kay? Fourth, No humor at all.Atleas I try in my comic. Unless you try to make it humourus, Then Idoa`t think you`l make it.Also,ashgirlsmayandmisty Ivymoonrose don`t praise it just because your in it.Give him/her c+c.
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
pok*e said:
*Bangs head on wall numerous times* Another flipping journey comic? I hope your ready for some serious constructive crit. First of all, a journey comic, couldnt you of thought of a more original idea? Were`r already gonna know what`s gonna happen.Second, The whole 2 comics were like "I wake up, I brush my teeth,I eat, I eat again,I eat yet again, I brush, then i go to sleep".
Third, Text next to pannel, learn to use speech bubbles kay? Fourth, No humor at all.Atleas I try in my comic. Unless you try to make it humourus, Then Idoa`t think you`l make it.Also,ashgirlsmayandmisty Ivymoonrose don`t praise it just because your in it.Give him/her c+c.
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I understand. I can take crit' (don't know how to spell). Later it will get better.

New Episode!
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Sakura Haruno

May
i don't praise it because i am in it , i praise it because its good and because he does a much better job than i can ever do , i can't even make a comic yet , and i like it ,its my opinion , and i have a right to express my opinion .
so do me a favor pok*e ,LEAVE ME AND IVYMOONROSE ALONE !
BTW, an apostrophy looks like this ' ,not this `.

oh and soulguardian ,i liked the new episode ^.^,and see i don't like it cause i am in it i like it overall !
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
ashgirlsmayandmisty said:
i don't praise it because i am in it , i praise it because its good and because he does a much better job than i can ever do , i can't even make a comic yet , and i like it ,its my opinion , and i have a right to express my opinion .
so do me a favor pok*e ,LEAVE ME AND IVYMOONROSE ALONE !
BTW, an apostrophy looks like this ' ,not this `.

oh and soulguardian ,i liked the new episode ^.^,and see i don't like it cause i am in it i like it overall !
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Thanks but ignore pok*e so a flame war won't start. BTW, you're right, pok*e shouldn't have said that.
 
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Sakura Haruno

May
thankyou for agreeing with me ! okay, i'll stop to avoid a flame war.
can't wait till the next episode, by the way ,i thought it was funny .
 
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SoulGuardian

PICHU ROXORZ!
ashgirlsmayandmisty said:
thankyou for agreeing with me ! okay, i'll stop to avoid a flame war.
can't wait till the next episode, by the way ,i thought it was funny .
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I'll probably make it right now:D! BTW, you will travel with Brandon!
 
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+Erin+

Banned
a good comic but the recolors suck and the plot is so boring
 
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