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Pokemon: The Odyssey

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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Pokemon: The Odyssey (new comic)

Welcome all to:
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My new comic, Pokemon: The Odyssey, will updated once every week, or whenever I can.

Synopsis:
The story follows Alex Malis-a young storyteller-in-the-making destined to save the world. He is aided in his journey by PokeKnights Brooke and Brad (the heroes of Ruby and Sapphire) the Champion Wallace, Dido (a girl who Alex meets) king Dave and Steven, who is now king. He must use his Pokemon to save the world from Armageddon, which is drawing closer and closer....

Prologue:
The story so far...
Season 1:
Chapter 1: Alex's destiny
Chapter 2: The birth of a new champion.
Chapter 3: Decisions are gay
Chapter 4: Arrival
Specials:
Special 1: Bullychu
Misc.:
Characters

LATEST:

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Blivsey

DATA_ERROR
Oh, boy, where can I start?

First of all, you saved it as a JPEG. That makes the comic look like it's gritty, lowering the quality. Second, the text size is inconsistent. It needs to be the same size. Third, you've already been reduced to using an author character, and one that's a half-assed recolor at that. Fourth, you're using gay jokes, which are NOT funny (nor have they ever been) and you need to come up with original ideas. (Merging teams? Legendaries hating their jobs? Evil in space? All been done to death.)

I also have a problem with your sig. Maybe if I picked Snagger's rant apart it'd make more sense?

The majority of the Fan Comic forum are idiots.
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Note: MAJORITY, not all. She hates the noobs that crawl aroudn the forums and think they know everything when all they can do is copy and paste and draw.

I hate making sprite comics, I hate dealing with dumb suckups, and most of all I hate having to live up to some selfish moron's expectations.
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Basically, she hates idiots that fall in love with everything they see, and therefore have no sense of quality. She also hates having to be better for someone else that she doesn't even really know, and hates making comics for all the reprecussions people unknowingly force on her.

You fans suck. I hate making comics, so why do I do it anyone? I dunno, maybe because I don't want idiots with poorly recolored sprites taking over?
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She has stated her reasons why she so strongly dislikes you people, and explains that the only reason that she continues regardless is to keep quality up. Honestly, it's people like you who think that they can go and put no effort into a comic and get instant praise that make the comics forum so disrespected.

Yeah. Choke already.
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Just reinstating the fact that she wishes you to stop screwing up these forums.

Oh, and a little something from you that I need to sort out:
I mean, Who cares what this guy thinks?
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First of all, if you'd bothered to find out about this person before you bash them, you'd know that Snagger's a gal. Second, lots of people care. Just because she shows less restraint towards you noobs doesn't mean that nobody cares. In fact, I think that more of us with decent comics should speak our minds out more.

Yes, you just got served in every way possible. Thank you for coming to Oblivion's, would you like some ice for those massive 3rd-degree burns?

...yes, I know that I'm being harsh, but I just saw you running around and simply HAD to crush you underfoot. You do understand, of course, that it was deserved?
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Well, that's your opinion. Thanks for the concrit regarding the comic itself, but:

The sig has nothing to do with the comic. I don't even read most of the comics in this forum, so these are all my own idea. And proof that you're being biased is: The author isn't a recolour. It's made by the Pokemon company themselves.
For even bothering to waste so much of your time writing about the sig regarding Snagger Outlaw, YOU are the very thing she hates: A dumb suckup.
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Chapter 2 , The birth of a new champion, is now up.
Chapter 2: The birth of a new champion.
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Chapter 3: Decisions are gay

New chapter!!

I've decided to use speech-bubbles now. And please people reply! I need some concrit!
 
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Mastercougar

The Infinite Fire
The thing that really irritates me about this comic is the gay jokes. I'm sorry, but making fun of homosexuals is just rude.
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Sorry, I'll cut down on the gay jokes. It is a bit rude and discriminative.
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Thanks. I'll have it up as soon as I can.

In the latest issue, there is a small hint of who the main evil fighting Pokemon is.
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
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Hey guys! I'm currently hard at work with the 4th issue, which will focus back on Alex again,
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who will have arrived the new region, Nikus.
I have instead provided a Special episode revolving around Pikachu:

Special 1: Bullychu
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Thank you! In this issue, there will be things that the fan-comic forum have never seen before! Alex really has his work cut out for him!
 
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Blues

Monkey Dragon
Ok... Where shall I begin?

First of all, your comic's too big. I'm all for spacing out the panels, but I think you did it a little too much.

Second, the jokes. I didn't laugh once when I read this. Plus the same "Gay joke" has been done to death, with every time resulting in a flame war, or someone at least getting mad...

Third, this plot is cliche. You're breaking the fourth wall in having the author ask about things from places he isn't in. Plus this plot is terribly cliche. Another kid in some prophecy that no one's heard of is destined to save the world? Get a better, original plot.

I would like to say I think this comic has at least some potential, but seeing how well you take crit, I'm not exactly sure...
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Ok, that's cool. I won't use any gay jokes anymore and I'll try not to screw up the plot. Thanks for your crit, Blues.

Anyway-Episode 4 is now up!!!

Chapter 4: Arrival
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
Bad news-I probably won't have the comic up until tomorrow night. I may have a special episode up today, but in the meantime I'll give some character bios!!!

Characters

I haven't finished Wallace and Steve's pokemon, but you know them anyway.
 
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Sahaqiel

Angel of the Skies
: My God, man. You're comic is,...I can't even say it! First of all, I don't even know why his mom knows that about him, cameras? The weak attempt to be even slightly dramatic, or funny has been ruined! The Rayquaza person thing was not even near ok, the health bars sucked. Get a grip, man! You need to stop acting like an immature child who thinks he knows how everything works.) There, how'd that feel? Snagger was right, like 80% of the fancomic section are idiots. The so called "Gay jokes" are also messed. I never even finished reading this comic because I was disgusted. (Next time, put your panels closer together.) Make something 2% better and it'll be below average,
Sahaqiel
P.S-(A retalliation to your flame, I've put up my flamethrower up for good now.)
 
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Saorio

Mario+Sonic=Saorio
That's cool. *chuckles.* Yeah, it does suck. It's my first comic, ok? But that's alright, I don't care what you say. It's your opinion, I respect it and thank you for replying.
 
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