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pokemon The Ultimate Quest

how good is this comic?

  • YOU'RE AMAZING!!!!!

    Votes: 8 30.8%
  • you're pretty good at this

    Votes: 6 23.1%
  • you're kinda good, just a few tweaks

    Votes: 8 30.8%
  • Ouch! I don't want to be mean, but you suck

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • 0Mg Yu0 $uCk a** !!! St0p RiGhT nOw!!!!

    Votes: 4 15.4%

  • Total voters
    26
  • Poll closed .
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dabou

Pokemon Master
lo' peoplez,this is the comic about me and my friends, exept we're in a pkmn world and we're younger, we gots pokemons and everythin', so enjoy!

if no one postes, i will have to stop this comic
I LOVE IT WHEN YOU POST


CHARACTER BIOS
INTRO
.:CHAPTER 1 NEW FRIENDS AND NEW ADVENTURE:.
EPISODE 1
EPISODE 1 PT 2
EPISODE 2
EPISODE 2 PT 2
EPISODE 3
EPISODE 3 pt 2
EPISODE 4
EPISODE 4 PT 2
EPISODE 4 PT 3
EPISODE 5
.:CHAPTER 2 STONE BADGE:.
EPISODE 6
EPISODE 6 PT 2
EPISODE 7
EPISODE 7 PT 2
EPISODE 8
EPISODE 9
EPISODE 10
.:CHAPTER 3 KNUCKLE'S AND CONTESTS:.
EPISODE 11
EPISODE 11 PT 2
EPISODE 12 [warning! pb = prof. birch, he's a fan of brawly]
EPISODE 13
EPISODE 13 PT 2
EPISODE 13 PT 3
EPISODE 14
EPISODE 15
EPISODE 15 PT 2
.:CHAPTER 4 ELECTIC FIESTA:.
EPISODE 16
EPISODE 17
EPISODE 17 PT 2
EPISODE 17 PT 3
EPISODE 18
EPISODE 18 PT 2
EPISODE 19
EPISODE 19 PT 2
EPISODE 19 PT 3
EPISODE 20
EPISODE 20 PT 2
EPISODE 20 PT 3
.:CHAPTER 5 CONTEST TROUBLE:.
EPISODE 21
EPISODE 21 PT 2
EPISODE 22
EPISODE 22 PT 2
EPISODE 23
EPISODE 24
EPISODE 24 PT 2 [WARNING! PG-13-ish: blood ]
EPISODE 25
.:CHAPTER 6 The Ninjas and the Dynamo badge:.
EPISODE 26
EPISODE 26 PT 2
EPISODE 27

special episodes

Halloween 2005
Veterens Day 2005
X-mas 2005
contest entry [for winter themed contest]
Valentines Day Art

Quiz

episode 1-14

fan stuff

Jake by _Akitty_!

Trailers

first movie:
part one
part two
part three

Maps

maps for movie:
okami town
route with lake
route with forest
route with ranch
route with ocean
plz don't steal! or else...

other

Dabou by me
Shad by me
Christine by me
Sophie by me
Jake by me
Trainer Cards 1 [according to chpt 20]
Trainer Cards 2 [according to chpt 20]
page on shipping[accordong to episode 20]


thx to:
coronis for some of the overworld sprites
me for the smallest fractions of overworlds
spriters resource for most of the sprites and some maps
thx to vgmaps for the maps
pokesho for other overworld sprites
mewga for the helicopter
joshr65 for some other sprites
silver fusion for the shad sprite
the people who gave 5 mins of there time to read this
the people who inspired me to do this

IMPORTANT

ok, i'll only take the 2 next people that wanna be in, alright?


comment away
 
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superjolteon

TEH-MEH!!!
OK. First of all The title definitely NEEDS changing. So if its an "Ultimute Quest" why are the characters speaking? It should be "Ultimate Quest" if im correct?
Your spriting is pretty good so no crits there.
You need to use links to the page and not "plunk" the comic into the thread because it will stretch the page.
Grammar needs improving in some places.
And you also need to give credit to where you got these sprites and resources.
 

dabou

Pokemon Master
superjolteon said:
OK. First of all The title definitely NEEDS changing. So if its an "Ultimute Quest" why are the characters speaking? It should be "Ultimate Quest" if im correct?
Your spriting is pretty good so no crits there.
You need to use links to the page and not "plunk" the comic into the thread because it will stretch the page.
Grammar needs improving in some places.
And you also need to give credit to where you got these sprites and resources.

ya im still working on that stuff... thx for commenting (and thx for the grammer stuff) and i was testing imageshack

edit: its all better now
 
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PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
dude treecko can't use razor leaf. even if it can I don't know how. whats a zigzagoon doing in birches lab any ways. how come team x is out to destroy humans, you mean arn't they human too?. GOD, this comic has a lot potential I'll give you that just make your comic make a little more sense
 

dabou

Pokemon Master
Champ Kevin said:
dude treecko can't use razor leaf. even if it can I don't know how. whats a zigzagoon doing in birches lab any ways. how come team x is out to destroy humans, you mean arn't they human too?. GOD, this comic has a lot potential I'll give you that just make your comic make a little more sense

ok treecko shots the leaves from its wrist (sorry for the confusion)
zizagoon is birches pokemon
team X ... there leaders crazy (HE despises humans) and will destroy any human who wont like to be on there side
 
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PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
ok still confused about this comic, by the way how can where does treecko get the leafs. and 2nd of all in episode 2 part 2 how can a mere lvl 5-8 treecko beat 3 lvl 12 or so tentacool. GOOD I'M MORE CONFUSED THAN I WAS THIS MORNING
 
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superjolteon

TEH-MEH!!!
Champ Kevin said:
ok still confused about this comic, by the way how can where does treecko get the leafs. and 2nd of all in episode 2 part 2 how can a mere lvl 5-8 treecko beat 3 lvl 12 or so tentacool. GOOD I'M MORE CONFUSED THAN I WAS THIS MORNING

OK so how the hell do you know that the tentacools are lvl12? He hasn't shown the levels so don't "assume" the levels or whatnot.
And the treecko could be higher in level and if it was really strong it could easily defeat the tentacools but yes generally I'd have to agree with you about 1 V 3 so treecko would be outnumbered. Needs explaining Dabou!
Also, Kevin, can you at least write with better grammar and spelling? I think you need to make sense! And you need to make comments about the actual comic and any criticisms made about it, not just about the story and analysing every bit of detail!
 

Beco

Beware...
I think the story is very great, to bad you save it all as gif. Try png for a much better quality of the pics.
Good luck.
 

dabou

Pokemon Master
striker said:
this is good i like it i hope to see more improvements doug but still good
thx for all the comments people

oh and thx for the tip beco!

about the tentacool thing: treecko is just a bit stronger so therefore he beat them with ease (tentacool lv 7) (treecko lv 8)

and if anyone has a tree secret base sheet , could you be so kind to lend it to me ,plz?
 
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PK

SO BEAUTIFUL!!
man havn't posted here in a while, god new issues. I think that wierd colored gastly was a shiny one.
 

dabou

Pokemon Master
Pixilated Penguin said:
I believe that there wasn't a single grammatically correct sentence made by you in this topic. Way to go.
*sigh* ya thats almost right but plz try to be a little more positive. I aint JK rowling!

Champ Kevin said:
man havn't posted here in a while, god new issues. I think that wierd colored gastly was a shiny one.
that's right! he caught a shiny! more coming soon
 

dabou

Pokemon Master
Pixilated Penguin said:
Why is it so hard for people to use a spell checker? You want me to be positive? Okay, the story of the comic is kind of good. I don't see much more positive.
i dont have spell checker thingy mabober!

ya i know i suck but thx for the good comment Pixilated Penguin... i guess
 
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lone_wolf816

Guest
First of all the story right now seems like another story about a hero who stops an evil organisation. 2nd things are going by to fast and there are some spelling errors. Try fixing it up a bit and it will get good

;197;- Lone Wolf
 

dabou

Pokemon Master
lone_wolf816 said:
First of all the story right now seems like another story about a hero who stops an evil organisation.

what story?

and ya i know about the grammer
 
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lone_wolf816

Guest
Im talking about the plot in your comic. It just seems like any other comic. try making something different to seperate it from every other comic.

;197;- Lone Wolf
 

dabou

Pokemon Master
lone_wolf816 said:
Im talking about the plot in your comic. It just seems like any other comic. try making something different to seperate it from every other comic.

;197;- Lone Wolf

ill try... :s god its gunna be hard
 
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lone_wolf816

Guest
Nice chapter and it shows that Norman is a bit ..... weird in the head:p Hardly anything blows me away so it better be good!

;197; Lone Wolf
 
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lone_wolf816

Guest
Interesting but you spelled Norman wrong.Oh well

;197;- Lone Wolf
 
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