Pokemon: The Witness (PG 13)

[StrayedBullet]

Hey, here is a new comic... Episode one is here.

<<Story>>

A young boy called Jack comes into contact with Professor Oak in his hometown, Laera, and is given a Psyduck that is under the Witness Protection Program, however it is not yet known why...

<<Characters>>

Jack: Jack is a young boy who is known the guardian of a Psyduck. He is very intelligent, however quite immature at times.

Psyduck: The Psyduck here has witnessed a heinous crime, and is now in severe danger. Although he looks cute, this Pokemon is actually the most stupid living being on the planet.


~Chapter 1: The Witness~

Episode 1


Credits

*Coronis
*Mewtwo Man
*Koopaul

-SB ;001;

 

[Comis Patronus]

Good start. Love to hear more but the link doesn't work.........

 

[StrayedBullet]

sorry. it should now.

-SB ;001;

 

[Sahaqiel]

It's a "meh" comic in my opinion. It's ok though. (try making the speech bubbles in timed order) Why is Psyduck's background Jupiter?
Sahaqiel
Also tired.

 

[Zero Nexus]

not bad,keep it up!

 

[Untamed Fear â„¢]

Since so far theres no plot, it's to early to judge it, but it looks promising.