Pokemon Universe RPG sign ups (My last try)

[Uysl]

This is my final try at a successful RPG. Please have mercy on me because I am not that good. I'm sorry that my last 2 have been failures (TV trainer's was the worst) but this time I have compiled up some data and TV trainers has been updated changed with a new name and a new plot.

--------------------rules---------------

1. no controlling other characters
2. No spamming
3. no bumping
4. no swearing
5. Have fun!

--------------------plot----------------------

All over the television universes people want to become true pokemon trainers. From Disney shows, to Cartoonetwork shows, to nick shows, to KidsWB shows everyone wants to become a pokemon trainer.

Pokemon are majestic creatures. They are great creatures with awesome powers. Some are mysterious, others are very common. Some pokemon are friendly and pure of heart, some can become vicious and cruel. Pokemon has been heard over every tv universe everywhere and they want to join in the fun.

For the people who join in the fun must do the Orre challenge. They must win all 8 gym badges and win the pokemon league. Friendships will arise, enemies will form,evil will turn. But they can also breed pokemon and become pokemon coordinators.

Team Snagem are back with their worst plan yet. They want to controll pokemon using a satelite system beaming into strange collars which will be put on the pokemon thus enabling total control. It will make their minds, hearts, emotions and memory cloudy thus making them go outta control.

Back to the point the only way to get to the pokemon world for these new trainers is going to Boston. In Boston is a hotel called the Tipton hotel. No one knows this but several people Zack Martin, Cody Martin, Maddie Fitzpatrick, London Tipton, Marion Moesby, Carey Martin, Esteban Rodriguez, Muriel the maid and Arwin Hawkhowser but there is a machine called a PU which Arwin built. It can put you in any universe including the pokemon universe. By the way the reason everyone knows about pokemon is Arwin told everyone about it. Arwin will transport you to the HQ Lab in Orre to get a catalog of every pokemon and your starter of course.

One of the kids that knows named Zack Martin is going on the trip to become a pokemon master. He wants to then come home so his brother can go later. This adventure will be the best adventure ever. No one has ever tried this before but 8 chosen ones will get to go.

The 8 chosen ones who gets to go gets to choose any basic pokemon except legendaries as their starter. This is going to be a tough decision because they just learned about pokemon. They will each recieve a book that pictures every pokemon (including 4th generations) and they will choose one and be on their way.

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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Name of TV show:
Description: (3-4 lines)
Personality: (3-4 lines)
History: (before this happens and how they found out about pokemon; has to be 3-4 lines)
Starter:

Here's my character.

Example.

Name: Zack Martin
Age: 13 (almost 14)
Gender: Male
Name of TV show: The Suite Life of Zack and Cody
Description: Zack has long blonde hair down to his eyes though he can see. His blue eyes are almost a cerulean color and are kind of pretty. He has freckles on his cheeks unlike his twin brother Cody who has a mole on his left cheek. Zack also has a wider jaw than Cody. Zack will be wearing a black shirt and a red jacket over it. He will also be wearing blue jeans with a dragon on it and a silver cross necklace
Personality: Zack isn't like his twin Cody. Cody is very smart and makes all As (except in woodshop). Cody is also kinder and gentler than Zack. Zack makes Cs, Ds and an F in most everything except woodshop which he always makes As. Zack is a little more greedy and flirting than Cody. Zack always flirts with girls by saying "Sweet thang." Of course it usually backfires in his face.
History: Zack lives in the Tipton Hotel with his single mom and twin brother Cody. His mom is divorced from Kurt Martin who is a guitarist. Strangely Zack's mom Carey is a singer. Maybe they hooked up at a concert, I wonder? Anyways, Zack has made many friends at the Tipton and has gotten in many misadventures. One day Zack and Cody travelled in the PU and went to a universe where everything was topsy turvy. They convinced Arwin about it about a month later and they took a short trip to the pokemon world which Arwin learned about. Zack then decided he wanted to become an Orre pokemon Master.
Starter: Electrike

OK, we have 5 more places left so start signing up.

Places taken.

1. Zack Martin (Uysl)
2. Yoh Asakura (Lostsoulz0)
3. Nami (Crystal Zephyr)
4. Jack Spicer (The Shadow Dragon Zetrono)
5. Elyon Brown (BAndanna)
6. Shadow the Hedgehog (E-102 Gamma)
7. Reserved for May Maple
8. London Tipton (blueeyedangel)

 

[Lostsoulz0]

this sounds like a fun rpg i think i'll join.

Name: Yoh Asakura
Age 14 (Maybe 15 not sure)
Gender: Male
Name of TV show: Shaman King
Description: Yoh has brown hair that comes down to his shoulders. he has brown eyes too. he wears a white shirt which is always open and wears basic jeans. he carries a sword with him to protect him from any one who seeks to take him out of the Shaman King tournament.
Personality: Yoh is a lazy guy who loves nothing better than having a nap during the day. he is always making jokes about things leaving people to think that he never takes thinks seriously however when he must he becomes extremely serious.
History: Yoh lived with his grandad for the first 10 years of his life where his grandad trained him in preperation for the Shaman King tournament. when he was judged ready to leave he moved to a different part of Japan where he lives with his fiancee Anna and best friends Rio and Morty. he has entered the pokemon universe as it is the final round of the tournament and if he becomes the Orre Pokemon Master he will have become the Shaman King.
Starting pokemon: Cyndaquil

 

[Uysl]

losrsoulz0- accepted, enjoy the rpg.

 

[InnerFlame]

Uysl I'm not here to cut you down but give you some criticisms. First I'll start with some quotes and questions...

All over the television universes people want to become true pokemon trainers. From Disney shows, to Cartoonetwork shows, to nick shows, to KidsWB shows everyone wants to become a pokemon trainer.

How did these people from different shows learn about Pokemon?

Why do they want to be pokemon trainers? Why not breeders, coordinator, team rocket members or another profession?

Are they going to stay here and put their dreams from their own world behind them?

And if they have a power do they still have in the pokemon world?

Pokemon has been heard over every tv universe everywhere and they want to join in the fun.

Okay but how was it heard? Was their just a strange signal that just suddenly appeared on their tv? Or maybe a video from was found and it contain pokemon battling one another?

For the people who join in the fun must do the Orre challenge. They must win all 8 gym badges and win the pokemon league. Friendships will arise, enemies will form,evil will turn.

Why do they have to do the Orre challenge? Is something going on in the other regions to cause this?

Team Snagem are back with their worst plan yet. They want to control pokemon using a satellite system beaming into strange collars which will be put on the pokemon thus enabling total control.

How exactly does this collar control pokemon? By inflicting pain upon them and forcing them to listen? Is by strong radio waves that enter their mind and block out their emotion, their memory thus making them easier to control?

Back to the point the only way to get to the pokemon world for these new trainers is going to Boston. In Boston is a hotel called the Tipton hotel. No one knows this but several people Zack Martin, Cody Martin, Maddie Fitzpatrick, London Tipton, Marion Moesby, Carey Martin, Esteban Rodriguez, Muriel the maid and Arwin Hawkhowser but there is a machine called a PU which Arwin built. It can put you in any universe including the pokemon universe.

How do the people get to Boston if there are from different worlds?

If only those people know how do those other people know to come there?

Why did Arwin built the PU? Was it accident?

The 8 chosen ones who gets to go gets to choose any basic pokemon except legendaries as their starter. This is going to be a tough decision because they just learned about pokemon. They will each receive a book that pictures every pokemon (including 4th generations) and they will choose one and be on their way.

How do they get their basic pokemon?

If they are just learning about pokemon then how do they get a book with pokemon pictures in it?

Okay those are just some questions that haven't been answered. Like I said I'm not trying to discourage you. I know this may not mean much but I don't think you should give up. If you work hard and improve you will be able to make a RPG that people will like to join. I'm sure there are some people who wouldn't mean helping you out, I would feel honor.

But remember Roman wasn't built in a day and neither are a RPG it takes time patient and sometimes a little help to make a good one... and even then they died before they reach the end of its story. Despise that most of those people don't give up, they may take a break from it but they will try again making a new one. Okay I'm not guaranteeing that people will just start rushing to play your RPG just like that but with improvements and interesting plots some people will come. Unless you just feel that you just aren't up to the disappointment of a fail RPG and rather just join and play some instead while that just up to you.

That's all and I hope you have a nice day.

 

[Uysl]

Uysl I'm not here to cut you down but give you some criticisms. First I'll start with some quotes and questions...



How did these people from different shows learn about Pokemon?

Why do they want to be pokemon trainers? Why not breeders, coordinator, team rocket members or another profession?

Are they going to stay here and put their dreams from their own world behind them?

And if they have a power do they still have in the pokemon world?



Okay but how was it heard? Was their just a strange signal that just suddenly appeared on their tv? Or maybe a video from was found and it contain pokemon battling one another?



Why do they have to do the Orre challenge? Is something going on in the other regions to cause this?



How exactly does this collar control pokemon? By inflicting pain upon them and forcing them to listen? Is by strong radio waves that enter their mind and block out their emotion, their memory thus making them easier to control?



How do the people get to Boston if there are from different worlds?

If only those people know how do those other people know to come there?

Why did Arwin built the PU? Was it accident?



How do they get their basic pokemon?

If they are just learning about pokemon then how do they get a book with pokemon pictures in it?

Okay those are just some questions that haven't been answered. Like I said I'm not trying to discourage you. I know this may not mean much but I don't think you should give up. If you work hard and improve you will be able to make a RPG that people will like to join. I'm sure there are some people who wouldn't mean helping you out, I would feel honor.

But remember Roman wasn't built in a day and neither are a RPG it takes time patient and sometimes a little help to make a good one... and even then they died before they reach the end of its story. Despise that most of those people don't give up, they may take a break from it but they will try again making a new one. Okay I'm not guaranteeing that people will just start rushing to play your RPG just like that but with improvements and interesting plots some people will come. Unless you just feel that you just aren't up to the disappointment of a fail RPG and rather just join and play some instead while that just up to you.

That's all and I hope you have a nice day.

Here's da answer to the questions.

1. They learned because Arwin called every phone number in the world telling them about his discovery
2. You get these occupations in the rpg as well. You get to do these things while becoming the Orre master
3. Look at Lostsoulz0's character. He made it that Yoh's dream is in this rpg.
4. Yes the powers are there

5. Like I said Arwin called every phone number in the world telling about pokemon and his discovery
6. I chose Orre because Orre isn't chosen for any pokemon challenges
7. Radio signals makes their minds, emotions and heart cloudy which they go outta control

8. Arwin transports them there.

9. Arwin transports them to the Pokemon HQ lab in Orre and they recieve them there.

10. They get it when they get to Orre.

11 and 12. Thank you for those words of encouragement.

I will fix this now.

 

[crystal-zephyr]

Name: Nami

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Name of TV show: One Piece

Description: Nami has shoulder length orange hair. She will usually wear either a dark blue sleeveless shirt ot a blue and white shirt. She also always has a short yellow mini skirt on. She usually had dark brown boots on. She would occasionally be seen carrying a long staff she uses as a means of defence as is strapped to her legs in three pieces. She has a tatoo near her shoulder blade.

Personality: Being a theif she has a pretty cold heart and would push anyone out of the way to get money. She is however good to her friends and will stand up for them if they need it. She's also pretty carring. She is most known to be a good leader to some as she is pretty smart and uses her smarts well.

History: Nami was formerly a renowned female thief who would steal only from pirates. She is quite greedy and hot-tempered, but can also be very intelligent and kind. She is anything but interested in joining Luffy's crew at first. But after an incident with Buggy the Clown, Nami forms a temporary alliance with Luffy.

Nami is an orphan found by Belle-Mère, a female Marine, on a battlefield as an infant. The marine adopted her along with Nojiko, another child, and the three became as close as a real family. However, this ended when the infamous Merman Pirate Arlong took over Cocoyashi Village (Coco Village), their adopted hometown.

Because Belle-Mère could not pay for her entire family's monthly fee for living, Belle-Mère resisted Arlong and was killed. She was taken to Arlong's dungeon and presumed dead. Then Nami was kidnapped and forced to become a cartographer for Arlong. However, Arlong struck a deal with Nami: if she brought him one hundred million beli (the form of currency in One Piece, or known as berries), he would free her village. She spent eight years making maps and stealing treasure from Pirates in order to buy back her village. It was during this time that she met Luffy during the situation with Buggy in Orange Town and temporaily joined up him with the reasoning that she will get most of the treasure that is found.

After helping defeat Captain Kuro in Syrup Village, and reaching the Baratie restaurant with Luffy, Nami took off with the crew's loot and ship and headed for Arlong Park. Nami was only 7 million beli short of fulfilling her end of the deal, but Arlong shamelessly used a corrupt Marine captain to steal all of the money, thus ensuring that Nami would forever be in his crew, without breaking his promise.

Later, Luffy arrives and seeing how distraught Nami is, goes and defeats with Arlong, yelling out "Nami! You are my crewmate!" Nami's village is freed, and she rejoins Luffy's crew as a permanent member. In her way out of the village, Nami wished to say goodbye to no one. She left the money back in Nojiko's house, and runs onto the Going Merry after stealing all of the villagers' wallets at the same time.

She found out about pokemon from when she was accidentaly knocked off her crews boat. She wound up on an island where an old man told her legends of these mythical beasts and how they were extremaly rare to be seen around this area. From then she sought to find these. Money did come first though however.

Starter: Tangela


The history is too long i think.

 

[Uysl]

Crystal Zephyr- accepted. Nice sign up!

 

[the shadow dragon Zetrono]

Name: Jack Spicer

Age: 14

Gender: male

Name of TV show: Xiaolon Showdown

Description: Red-headed young teen with pale skin. Always wears a black jacket, pants, shoes, and a black cape.

Personality: Aspires to be the evil genius who rules the world that he knows someday will happen.

History: After being neglected by his parents he decided to show eveyone how evil he could become by taking over the world. Soon his father sent him a puzzlebox from Hong-Kong as a belated birthday present and thus found an evil haylin spirit named Wuya. Wuya told Jack about mystical items called She-gon-whu that if he obtained all of them he could rule the earth.

After they set off to find the shen-gon-whu they found about about ancient Xiaolon dragons also looking for them. Eventually the Xiaolon dragons prevailed and retreived all the shen-gon-whu and trapped Wuya in another puzzlebox. Jack soon hid on an island where he could work on his robots in peace, when a strange old man came and told him abourt creatures with elemental powers. At first Jack merely thought he was talking about the Xiaolon warriors, but after explaining further Jack knew they were not.

Jack knew if he could find these mystical creatures he could rule the world.So he set his life on this mission and this mission alone. Find these "Poke-ei-mom"* and rule the world with them.

Starter Poocheyena

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*I spelled it wrong because Jack had to sound it out.

 

[Lily]

Here's da answer to the questions.

1. They learned because Arwin called every phone number in the world telling them about his discovery
2. You get these occupations in the rpg as well. You get to do these things while becoming the Orre master
3. Look at Lostsoulz0's character. He made it that Yoh's dream is in this rpg.
4. Yes the powers are there

5. Like I said Arwin called every phone number in the world telling about pokemon and his discovery
6. I chose Orre because Orre isn't chosen for any pokemon challenges
7. Radio signals makes their minds, emotions and heart cloudy which they go outta control

8. Arwin transports them there.

9. Arwin transports them to the Pokemon HQ lab in Orre and they recieve them there.

10. They get it when they get to Orre.

11 and 12. Thank you for those words of encouragement.

I will fix this now.

You might want to edit that in your first post, in case you haven't done so already..

 

[Bandana]

Like the sound of this one!
Name: Elyon Brown
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Name of TV show: W.I.T.C.H.
Description: Elyon wears her straw blonde hair in two plaits that fall in front of her. She is seen wearing blue and white dress like clothing. Elyons eyes are a blue colour.
Personality: Elyon loved to sketch pictures but she was one of those people that was fought over. Her head has been filled with lies once before so she is a bit more careful now of who she trusts. Elyon is quite a cheerful person but can be protective and scary when she wants to.
History: Elyon found out about Pokemon when she was believing her brothers lies. She had ordered a TV and ot one. She basically got everything she wanted from her brother so she wouldn't see him as evil. Elyon one day saw one episode of Pokemon and from that day on she was addicted. And she still wouldn't miss an episode with her corination drawing near. Elyon was addicted to it powerfully. After her brother was locked up Elyon decided to try to create Pokemon out of plants but when that failed she found out that she could go to the Pokemon universe and become a Pokemon Trainer. The Guardians of the Veil are left with ruling Meridian during Elyon's absence. But the main reason for Elyon going to the Pokemon universe is so that she can relax and escape the fact that her brother tried to murder her.
Starter: Nidoran Female.

If your character has powers is he/she able to use them during this RP or not?

 

[the shadow dragon Zetrono]

If your character has powers is he/she able to use them during this RP or not?

yeah because my character has robots to help him. can i do that?

 

[E-102 Gamma]

Name: Shadow the Hedgehog

Age: Um... he's ageless and immortal, but he seems to be around 15

Gender: Male

Name of TV show: Sonic X

Description: Shadow, looks remarkably like Sonic, only, he's black, with crimson eyes, crimson-tipped spikes and crimson on the corners of his eyes. He has a patch of white fur on his chest, and has power rings on his gloves. He has a yellow-ish muzzle and red-and-white hover skates, with another pair of power rings on his shoes.

Personality: Shadow, is a lone wolf, who stands out from Sonic and his friends. Likes to stay away from others, he is kind, but, it's hard to show people his good side. He has every intention of carrying out a threat, and, is sometimes mean to others. Shadow, unlike Sonic, will kill to get what he wants.

History: (Okay, you probably know about the Space Colony ARK incident so, I'll just skip straight to the Pokemon bit) Shadow, had been spying on Sonic at Chris's house, and was staring at a T.V, he didn't know what the creatures on them were, but, suprizingly, he didn't mind them at all. He found "Pokymon"* quite fun, so, he decided to train these creatures, and make some friends that were like him.

Starter: Duskull

(*He can't say: Pokemon that well...)

 

[Uysl]

All accepted! I'm gonna start us up. 2 LSu's are accepted and will start with us later in the RPG.

 

[Bandana]

But you haven't answered my question. Can our characters use magic powers if they have them in the cartoon they come from? the shadow dragon Zetrono, you use robots. Your character doesn't have magical powers as far as I know.

 

[Uysl]

Yes they can.

 

[Bandana]

Yay! Even though I don't quite know exactly what Elyon's powers were but I know what they included.
Thank you! *hugs*

 

[Uysl]

One more person!

 

[blueeyedangel]

Name: London Tipton
Age: 16
Gender: female
Name of tv show: The Suite Life of Zack and Cody
Description: London has kind of tan skin, and long black hair. She is wearing a frilly pink dress with a hot pink boa around her neck and pink sandals with a metallic pink purse.
Personality: London has a bubbly personality. She isn't a genius and she loves fashion. She is rich and loves to buy clothes. Her rival is Maddie Fitzpatrick.
History: London is a rich hotel heiress to the Tipton Hotel. Her dad doesn't live with her so sometimes she is sad. She has made many friends like Zack, Cody, Maddie and Carrie.
Zack, Cody and Arwin told her about the pokemon world. She wanted to become a great pokemon master because she needed a hobby.
Starter: torchic

Can I join?

 

[Uysl]

You are in and this sign up is closed because there is no more spots. Thank you all for joining.

 

[the shadow dragon Zetrono]

oh...sorry i am late, hey banana my person also uses magical items. *looks around* hey where is everybody?