Pokemon: War Of Legend

[Leviathan_Rebirth]

Thousands of years ago before there were humans living on the planet, Pokemon were the dominant species. For each type of Pokemon there was a legendary Pokemon. According to legend a cataclysmic battle between the legendaries began when a dark creature ruptured the balance they all shared. After that peace began and humans now live with Pokemon on the planet. Now there is a disturbance in Hoenn and several trainers are starting to journey through the land trying to stop this disturbance. These trainers are destined to tame the legendary Pokemon and defeat the shadows that are spreading across the land....Will they suceed? or fail and become lost in the shadows.....

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Sample rpg paragraph. i'll post mine later.
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Trainer Card info will be posted by Ace557 , my second in command.

 

[Raider Phoenix]

Please can you read the rules?: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=107376

 

[enflamedsteelix]

According to legend a cataclysmic battle between the legendaries began when a dark creature ruptured the balance they all shared.

What was this dark creature and why and how did it rupture the balance, and what made the legendaries fight in the first place, just for the heck of it, or did this dark creature have something to do this all it says is they began battling when the dark creature thing came

After that peace began and humans now live with Pokemon on the planet.

What peace when did this happen, what happened to this dark creature that messed the balance up, when did the humans come into play here?

Now there is a disturbance in Hoenn and several trainers are starting to journey through the land trying to stop this disturbance.

What disturbance, why are several trainers starting to journey to stop the disturbance, how do they know of it in the first place?

These trainers are destined to tame the legendary Pokemon and defeat the shadows that are spreading across the land....

Why are they destined to tame the legendary pokemon and defeat the shadows? What makes them different then all the other trainers in the world, and what shadows are spreading in the first place?

Pokemon:
Light, Dark, or Neutral.

So basically they have pokemon and fight to save the world from an unknown dark thing that may or may not have caused the legendaries to fight, and if these chosen trainers are so special why are some dark wouldn't that make them not special or "chosen ones"

Please explain yourself some more

 

[TheTurquoiseTauros!]

Look dude, you need to preticapate in some RPG's first, then you can think of opening your own RPG. But right now your NOT ready. You also should send your RPG to a mod(Lady Myuu)before you post it. Also....READ THE RULES!

 

[Dias]

Yeah, other posts have said what needs to be said. Read the rules. No one is going to join with a plot that isn't very imformative or substansial. enflamedphoenix has done the job of pointing out potential plot holes and bits of the plot that are vague and uniformative. Your sign up form also doesn't follow the rules, lacking required areas. Read the rules stickied at the top of this forum and the advice threads in the Cafe.