Pokemon Wars (Formerly Mystery Dungeon Wars)

[Arahabaki]

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Spoiler: Episode List

Season 1
0.The Legend Unfolds
1.Capture
2.The Valley of Hell(VOH)
3.Break Out
4.New Friends
5.Discovered
6.Judgment
7.Tyranitar Vs Eevee
8.Tyranitar vs Cyndaquil Pt.1
9.Tyranitar vs Cyndaquil Pt. 2
10.Tyranitar vs Cyndaquil Pt. 3
11.The Dream Zone
12.Tyranitar vs Treecko
13.Reinforcements
14.The Shadow Tunnel
15.Armies, Evolutions, and Escapes
16.Discovered...Again
17.Eevee&Squirtle vs the bad guys
18. Resistance Army Scouts
Season 2
19. On Board The S.S. Riptide
20. Assasin Job
21. Kingdra
22. Combusken, Breloom, and Squirtle VS Kingdra pt.1
23. Invasion Plans
24. Reunion
25. Escape
26. Explanation
27. Prof. Venomoth
28. Seviper Attack
29. Toxica
30. Secret of the Potion
31. Breloom and The Explosion Fruit

Spoiler: Specials

Gender Differences

credit to
Abraace-for sprites
brockman5-for sprites
Avegaille-for sprites
ForeveDes-for sprites
Pikachu Masta-for sprites
Mew!-for sprites
Mesqueeb-for sprites
and others-for sprites
11-12-06
MDW put up

2-11-07
Mystery Dungeon Wars changed to Pokemon Wars

fan stuff

 

[.Bright Side.]

This is better than a lot of begginner comics I've seen, but just a couple things:
Change you link by putting like this:

Your comic linkTitle of episode[/url

But inbetween "link" and "title" put a "]" in.
So if you do that it should look like this [url=http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9217/fdwq4.png]The Legend unfolds

You don't have to use the same title, I just thought it was fitting.

Also your world picture needs some work, it looks kinda messed up.

Other than that its pretty good, I'd like to see some more.

 

[Arahabaki]

hpw do i make the link a picture like yours

 

[.Bright Side.]

I already said it:


But inbetween "link" and "title" put a "]" in.

 

[nattydbzmaster]

its not that bad

 

[Arahabaki]

hers episode 1:Episode 1

 

[.Bright Side.]

Pretty original using the HP bars, keep it up.

 

[Arahabaki]

Pretty original using the HP bars, keep it up.

yeah, i do 2 a week and starting on ep. 2,how come its just you and me that post here?

 

[Arahabaki]

really sorry to double post, but heres ep. 2
Episode 2

 

[.Bright Side.]

Ooo, Valley of hell, sounds cozy.

 

[gundam_remake]

^^; is this a comedy? because truely. i find it very funny, and almost choked on a held in laugh. the screen usage is kindof poor, but at least you have the pokemon's names right! ^^

i like mystery dungeon, so i'm sortof critical on the themes for the comics it is based on. you could definitly put more work intot he action of the comic. the dialog... i'm sorry, but it stinks. if you know anything about mystery dungeon, it's that dialog is the general majority of the game. it is very full of lush flavorful dialog that builds a picture in your mind and places you there in the story. i know it might seem hard, but more dedication into this comic couldmake it much better. people will be proud of the effort you put into it, and you'll feel good about what you have when you're finished!

 

[Arahabaki]

^^; is this a comedy? because truely. i find it very funny, and almost choked on a held in laugh. the screen usage is kindof poor, but at least you have the pokemon's names right! ^^

i like mystery dungeon, so i'm sortof critical on the themes for the comics it is based on. you could definitly put more work intot he action of the comic. the dialog... i'm sorry, but it stinks. if you know anything about mystery dungeon, it's that dialog is the general majority of the game. it is very full of lush flavorful dialog that builds a picture in your mind and places you there in the story. i know it might seem hard, but more dedication into this comic couldmake it much better. people will be proud of the effort you put into it, and you'll feel good about what you have when you're finished!

well, I'm new at this

 

[Arahabaki]

heres ep.3,its pretty much filler
Episode 3

 

[MegaTravis]

This is a cool comic. I like how your team starts out as four Pokemon. Its a pretty original idea having a war going on. Can't wait untill the next episode.

 

[Arahabaki]

Episode 4-
Episode 4

 

[ludicolo_kid]

nice. pretty good considering this is your first one

 

[Mewchirio]

I'm really sorry but you have done one thing wrong. This is (and don't call me picky) your spelling. Seriously, you need to check it.
Apart from that it's fine and I love the tornado!!!

Mewchirio

PS. the reason I told you to get the spelling right is that people look at this and it looks better if it is spelt right

 

[Infinity]

Okay, you really need to improve upon your speech bubbles. There are a few tutorials lying around in the tutorial thread *shameless plugging*.

I find it really hard to do effects in Paint alone, my advice to you is to draw it or to scratch sprite them.

Your plot seems to be rushed a bit too. Leave some time open for plot/character development.

 

[Arahabaki]

sorry and my spelling's fine

 

[pokemon rulez!!!!!]

Nice job,I can't wait for the next chapter.

~PR!!!!!