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pokemon warz

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metal gear solid

Dont mess with snake
IF YOU VIST HERE PLEASE POST ABOUT WHAT YOU THINK.

-Plot-
Well some pokemon saw a poster about how to win £5000 but in order to win it they have to compet agaist other teams to retive the golden stick and bring it back and they win £5000 so we will look over every team and see who will win the golden stick and win themselfs £5000.Also the pokemon that runs the compertision, has sent out pokemon to battle them to slow them down so only the strongest can win.....
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season 1
INTRO
episode 1
episdoe 2
episode 3
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Current Episode:
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Credit
jackster-for MD sprites
cooltext.com-for cooltext
me for the world of Manto

fan art
feel free to pm me your fan art and i will put it on the thread.

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just for fun^_^
 
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metal gear solid said:
Well some pokemon saw a poster about how to win £5000 but in order to win it they have to compet agaist other teams to retive the golden stick and bring it back and they win £5000 so we will look over every team and see who will win the golden stick and win themselfs £5000.Also the pokemon that runs the compertision, has sent out pokemon to battle them to slow them down so only the strongest can win.....
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Well... your still pouring out D-class comics...
1)Grammar issues!(Ones in the spoiler are in bold)
2)Plot didn't appeal to me.
3)You used effing paint default colors!XP
4)You had no build up.(They just appear and start the contest, not even a simple explanation of the characters)

SERIOUSLY! TAKE MY ADVICE! You never take anyone's and thats why you always just post D-class comics without evening knowing it!
Please take our advice and read the tutorials before you post another comic!
 
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metal gear solid

Dont mess with snake
Desperate Milotic said:
Well... your still pouring out D-class comics...
1)Grammar issues!(Ones in the spoiler are in bold)
2)Plot didn't appeal to me.
3)You used effing paint default colors!XP
4)You had no build up.(They just appear and start the contest, not even a simple explanation of the characters)

SERIOUSLY! TAKE MY ADVICE! You never take anyone's and thats why you always just post D-class comics without evening knowing it!
Please take our advice and read the tutorials before you post another comic!
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dont post on my comics your really pi**ing me off.
now i do tack advice.ok!
never post on my comics again.
 
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metal gear solid said:
dont post on my comics your really pi**ing me off.
now i do tack advice.ok!
never post on my comics again.
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Jeez, Your so sensitive.
It doesn't work thay way, I have the right to Critisize your comics if I see something wrong with it.
If you don't liek what I post, then fix it and I won't post about it.

P.S:You didn't take my advice because you spelled "Take" wrong...
 
M

metal gear solid

Dont mess with snake
ok then tell me what you would think needs improving?does the background need improving, does the grammer need improving, does the speech bubbles?
 
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I already said it.
See, you don't take our advice because you don't read our crits.

Also make the text boxes an oval.

PS: YOu spelled grammar wrong...(irony)
 
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Tbone2356

ᵀᴴᴱ ᴼᴿᴵᴳᴵᴻᴬᴸ
Your fourth?

Yeah this comic needs alot of improvment and it was way too rushed...

Get the crappy golden paint-colored stick.... That sounds so fun (Insert Sarcasim Here, what the heck does it do, why does hitmonlee need it and why is hitmonlee ordering them too do stuff).

They were in a hitmonlee's office and then Pikachu was in another room?
You shouldv'e built up too it, have Pikachu intorduce the comic in a way like getting up from it's den and going too the corportation or what ever it is.

The grammer is horrid and the paint effects... just no... just... no....

If this really is your 3rd/4th comic then I suggest you start listening too people's advice instead of banning people for critiscing.

If you can't take the critisicm, than stay out of the Fan-Comic section.
 
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Arahabaki

Come at me bro.
man..i was gonna call my comic pokemon wars
 
W

Wild Cherry

Magma Commander
I very much agree with Desperate Milotic and Tbone.

Grammer needs to be heavily looked on - What are you? A 6 year old?

Take a little critisim - you need to listen to it well.

You skip important frames of the comic, like the no-build-up way you use.

Plot is rather, well, dull and boring, a pokemon contest should be exciting.

Paint colours... do I say more?
 
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AerialAce!

Inconceivable!
THE BAD: It seems a tad rushed, and the grammar/spelling are atrocious. I don't really like your Paint effects, but that would be the bias of someone with the privilege of Adobe Photoshop.

THE GOOD: The plot is excellent. I haven't seen anything like this before. I think I'll follow this comic for a while, simply to see where it goes.

Do try to take (not "tack" lol) the advice of the other post-ers, and you should probably fix the grammar problems before continuing.
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
I agree with DM, TB, and DD:

GRAMMAR NEEDS IMPROVEMENT!

I've told you that since you started your first of like 10 is it now?

My oppinion is, STICK WITH ONE COMIC! You post like two three episodes and then trash it. Also type everything in WORD, or any other word processor b4 you put it dialogue in a comic. It is so annoying that you always mispells things,

Untill I showed you how to spell 'episode' you always spelled it 'episoed'

Anyway, please stick to ONE Comic, improve your grammar, and please for the Love of That person over there, PLEASE PLEASE stop this aweful humor, you try to hard, let the humor come to you with ease....Sometimes if you imput humor hard, it begins to sound very stupid, and people laugh at how stupid it is, just let the humor come to you naturally.
 
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