YankeeFan2
Number 1
Disclaimer: I don’t own Pokemon. I just like to be in the story.
This chapter is an intro, so if you don't like it! TOO BAD!
A Typical Day at School
Eddie Harrison sighs and puts his head on the lunch table. The cafeteria was loud and filled with 8th, 9th and 10th graders in the high school. Being in the high school is okay. He really didn’t care for it. Eddie packs up his books, finishes eating and heads upstairs to the library where his friend Spike Matthews comes in and pokes him in the shoulder.
“Hey, Eddie. What’s wrong?” Spike asked.
“Oh, nothing. I was just heading toward the library,” he said.
“Oh, okay,” he said.
Then, a ghetto kid came in and pushed Eddie. The guy had a knife in his pocket and used it against Eddie. Eddie was really worried because this kid does not take no for an answer.
“GIMMIE YOUR MONEY, SON OF A *****!”
“NO! GET YOUR OWN!”
The Ghetto Kid was about to stab him when someone punched him in the eye
Spike decked him.
“You threaten him one more time. It will be you, dickhead. Ed, do the honors,”
Ed picked him up and decked him in the face. Blood splattered out. Before the teachers came he quickly ran up to the library.
Ed was walking up the main staircase to the science wing. That’s were the library was until everything went black and white. He disappeared from the library, his books were on the ground. Ed froze for a second, scared at first. But suddenly calmed himself when he landed on green grass. He looked at hands.
“Oh, cool. I’m animated!”
Ed looks around. To his right, there is a big grassy slope going up. He can’t see what’s beyond it. To his left, there seems to be a large body of water. He went over to look at his reflection; his hair was black, well combed and clean. His eyes were black, but his clothes changed. He was wearing a red vest, a black t-shirt under it with blue jeans. He was wearing red sneakers with black socks. He kept ran into a town not that far up the road.
‘Welcome to Pallet Town’ the sign said. “Yay, I am in the Pokemon World!”
“I guess I better run and find the Professor,” he said. He took off. An elderly man looks out his window as he passes by.
“Wow, a new kid in Pallet, that’s kind of awesome, we never have new kids. Ever,”
So, what do you think? I think this chapter is kind of short. But, that’s my opinion. Now let me hear yours! Review!
This chapter is an intro, so if you don't like it! TOO BAD!
A Typical Day at School
Eddie Harrison sighs and puts his head on the lunch table. The cafeteria was loud and filled with 8th, 9th and 10th graders in the high school. Being in the high school is okay. He really didn’t care for it. Eddie packs up his books, finishes eating and heads upstairs to the library where his friend Spike Matthews comes in and pokes him in the shoulder.
“Hey, Eddie. What’s wrong?” Spike asked.
“Oh, nothing. I was just heading toward the library,” he said.
“Oh, okay,” he said.
Then, a ghetto kid came in and pushed Eddie. The guy had a knife in his pocket and used it against Eddie. Eddie was really worried because this kid does not take no for an answer.
“GIMMIE YOUR MONEY, SON OF A *****!”
“NO! GET YOUR OWN!”
The Ghetto Kid was about to stab him when someone punched him in the eye
Spike decked him.
“You threaten him one more time. It will be you, dickhead. Ed, do the honors,”
Ed picked him up and decked him in the face. Blood splattered out. Before the teachers came he quickly ran up to the library.
Ed was walking up the main staircase to the science wing. That’s were the library was until everything went black and white. He disappeared from the library, his books were on the ground. Ed froze for a second, scared at first. But suddenly calmed himself when he landed on green grass. He looked at hands.
“Oh, cool. I’m animated!”
Ed looks around. To his right, there is a big grassy slope going up. He can’t see what’s beyond it. To his left, there seems to be a large body of water. He went over to look at his reflection; his hair was black, well combed and clean. His eyes were black, but his clothes changed. He was wearing a red vest, a black t-shirt under it with blue jeans. He was wearing red sneakers with black socks. He kept ran into a town not that far up the road.
‘Welcome to Pallet Town’ the sign said. “Yay, I am in the Pokemon World!”
“I guess I better run and find the Professor,” he said. He took off. An elderly man looks out his window as he passes by.
“Wow, a new kid in Pallet, that’s kind of awesome, we never have new kids. Ever,”
So, what do you think? I think this chapter is kind of short. But, that’s my opinion. Now let me hear yours! Review!