Pokemon Xtreame Journey

[PK]

Hey, I'm made a new comic thats replacing extreame journey. I'm sorry all Extreame fans, but this ones better than the last comic belive you can tell. Welp here it is.

note: refresh once or twice. And for all text box lovers you'll love this. The following comic is PG-13

Text key:
Blue:Kevin
Pink: Hannah
Orange: William
Brown:Jak
+ any other color sutibale for characters.

Chapter 1: the begining of a Trainer
Cover
Comic 1: The begining of a crazy journey Oh sorry about the Kanto error, its supose to be Hoenn. SORRY
Comic 2: Eevee attack.
comic 3: On the way to Odale
comic 4: Kevin's ID card.
comic 5: Rivial battle 1
comic 6. Anton gets a Chikorita.
comic 7. Kevin vs DA CORPISH.
Chapter 2: the path to the stone
Cover
Comic 8: How Kev and Hannah met <--- Warning: has major wierdness
comic 9: An odd incounter.
comic 10: Kevin vs the guy part 1
Comic 11: Extreame wierdness case 1 dun dun dun
comic 12.Kevins bad judgement/the bad dudes are introduced.
comic 13: Hannah vs the Grunt
comic 14: Hannah vs the Grunt part 2
comic 15: Extreame wierdness case 2 DUN DUN DUN.
comic 16: The noob/panzi enters.
comic 17: THe gymleader.
comic 18: The "ultimate" attack
comic 19: Geology crap (PG-13) thank netkun for the ripp of Brendan manga pic.
comic 20. vs Roxanne the nerd *gets slaped*.
comic 21: Vs Roxanne, Nosepass nightmare mwahahahah *coughs*
comic 22: Da joy of victory
Chapter 3 the LONG road to Dewford.
cover
comic 23: An utterly pointless battle and victory.
comic 24. Remember kids don't play with cyndaquils.
Comic 25: Kevin vs the CYNDAQUIL OF DOOM
Comic 26: The victory
comic 27: Kevin gets his chance
comic 28: The shortest issue in all time.
comic 29: Notice the stupidity.
Comic 30: The deadlyness.
Chapter 4 Granite Frenzy
Cover
Comic 31: I don't know what to call this but its a new issue
Comic 32: Aarons 2nd battle in this comic.
Comic 33: Makuhita appears... (he needs a diet)
Comic 34: Makuhita's mad side...
Comic 35: And you thought Stupidity can't get much worse.
Comic 36: Now we know what happens to Jak...
Comic 37: All ways look out for things...
Comic 38: Steven appears at last...
Comic 39: Kevin vs Emerald grunt #99,9994
Comic 40: The end of the chapter... I know its only about 10 issues long -_-
Chapter 5
Cover
Comic 41: Kevin's first Challenge in Dewford.
Comic 42: Yay Anton battles
Comic 43: Kevin makes it... in 3 comics o-0

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Fan art:
OMG A HEAD by Brinda
Another big head by Brinda
Woot Woot 25th comic by Brinda.

Sprites.

Character profiles
Kevin
Hannah
Anton

Gymleader profiles

credits:
*******
Spriters resource
Shyguy kingdom
VG maps
Avatar
Coronis
Neopolis
Beco
Jindai
legendary colecter
Eureka 7
silver fusion
Mutanton_91
╬HyPnOtIk╬
Serebii.net sprite resource
New001
Abraace
and last but not least those who inspired me to make sprite comics

 

[SoulGuardian]

You spelled Birch wrong...

 

[Euphoria]

Well, I'm a 'text-box' fan, but I'm not a fan of yours. Leave the fill white, or else it hurts the eyes.
I'd work on your grammar and spelling, and also, don't use chatspeak; use proper sentences.
I'd give it a 6.5/10 so far. Keep trying!

 

[PK]

Thanks for the comment people. Well Its kinda annoying to make the text boxes white, but I will do it. and sorry I spelled Birch wrong.

 

[SoulGuardian]

Thats ok that you spelled Birch wrong!

 

[Davis the Gamer]

I'd love the text boxes if they were good.
and you resized the sprites bad.....
Spelling & Grammar. MSWord can help with that.
And when a charater talks to the audience, that's breaking the fourth wall. Not good.
3/10. You are improving, however.

 

[PK]

Well my pokemon sprites are SMALL so I have no choice but to resize it. But if you can find a way to help me re size my sprites it would DEFENITLY HELP

 

[Davis the Gamer]

right.
When resizing stuff in paint. Use the Strech/skew option in paint. Resize by a multiple of 100 (200, 300, 400, etc).
Use my paint diagram to find what you need to find.

 

[Eric]

One your colors burn my eyes, two, your comic need work.
Plot: It's cliched. Your a pokemon trainer who wants to be a pokemon master. I could click any where on this section and find a comic with the same plot. Try something new. You know what I would love to see, a comic based on, "Clerks". Damn that would be funny. But maybe you want to stay with pokemon. Why not a comic about a trainer who is just a trainer you fight on the way? Tell about the life of the trainer on route 46, you would have a whole new plot in that.
Sprites: Horrible recolors. Not only that, badly resized recolors. Recolors in gerenal are bad things, like Loitering, Lattering, Lootering and everything else that cause Peer to Teen Choice Behaviors?
(Reynold) But how do I avoid Peer to Teen Choice awards, Eric?
(Eric) But not using recolors, and instead using well done scratch sprites or heavy edits. GO CHEATCOMANDOS! ROCK, ROCK ON!
Also, if you want to make a sprite bigger just use the stretch/skew option when you right click. And never use anything besides 50, 200, 300...
Textboxes: (Ninja) You have destroyed my village and honor with your badly made textboxes. Prepare to fight!
Seriously though, does the last panel look GOOD to you? Look at bobandgeorge's textboxes. It's not a comic to base yours on but it's textboxes are good.

 

[Davis the Gamer]

Damnit Eric, that post was one of the funniest posts I've ever seen on this forum.
Oh, I did forget about the recolors.

Edit your recolor plz

really. Recolors are bad. Either use ripped sprites, edits, or customs. Though customs are hard......

 

[PK]

One your colors burn my eyes, two, your comic need work.
Plot: It's cliched. Your a pokemon trainer who wants to be a pokemon master. I could click any where on this section and find a comic with the same plot. Try something new. You know what I would love to see, a comic based on, "Clerks". Damn that would be funny. But maybe you want to stay with pokemon. Why not a comic about a trainer who is just a trainer you fight on the way? Tell about the life of the trainer on route 46, you would have a whole new plot in that.
Sprites: Horrible recolors. Not only that, badly resized recolors. Recolors in gerenal are bad things, like Loitering, Lattering, Lootering and everything else that cause Peer to Teen Choice Behaviors?
(Reynold) But how do I avoid Peer to Teen Choice awards, Eric?
(Eric) But not using recolors, and instead using well done scratch sprites or heavy edits. GO CHEATCOMANDOS! ROCK, ROCK ON!
Also, if you want to make a sprite bigger just use the stretch/skew option when you right click. And never use anything besides 50, 200, 300...
Textboxes: (Ninja) You have destroyed my village and honor with your badly made textboxes. Prepare to fight!
Seriously though, does the last panel look GOOD to you? Look at bobandgeorge's textboxes. It's not a comic to base yours on but it's textboxes are good.

Dude, Its ether you have a REALLY bad day but dude I just need what I need to improve on, but you don't have to be THAT curel, you mean I'm not the best comic maker in the world I have to admit but I just need the improvements not just some lamo insults made by you, Don't treat this like I'm being mean to you but, again I just need the improvements

Oh Davis PKMN master ( I know you hate being called that hehehe) but what you think is funny may not be funny to other people. But then again I guess your teachers never thought you that.

 

[Eric]

Being "curel"? I wasn't being that or cruel. In fact I wasn't to be cruel or anywhere close to it. If there are any old post back when I joined, that was mean. Nothing is cruel in fact. To be cruel would have to be continuely mean and abusive to someone. I wasn't even mean.
Lamo insults? **** man, you need a sense of humor. A lame insult would be, "Man you suck like cat" or some **** like that.
You need to be better accepting of critizim, because not everyone is suck up to you and call you special.

We can never know what his teachers thought to him, but teachers don't TEACH that everyone has a different sense of humor. And I don't see him doing as you say above. All he said was I am a funny mofo. What you said, however, is what you want him to do.
"That's funny."
"IT'S NOT FUNNY! NOT EVERYONE HAS THE SAME SENSE OF HUMOR!"

 

[Flygon]

You know what I think is funny? Cronstructive critism! Hahaha! Laugh, fool! Laugh! *evil laugh*

Don't call people by the names they don't like to be called. That's a quick and easy way to lose future friends. You spelled Extreme wrong (you can call it Xtreme, but no "a"), the recolours such because you used the defult MS Paint colours, and those are HORRIBLE to sprite with, and Noland wasn't quite a Pokemon Master. He was the leader of the Battle Factory. Do you even know what that is? It is a place where you RENT Pokemon to use. This comic has an utterly terrible plot. And don't you dare report me or Eric, little n00b, or Davis. Not sure 'bout Eric, but I've been through a flame war, and Davis has been through that AND something else. Don't turn this into a flame war.

 

[PK]

You do realize you can be banned for calling me offensive crap like a NOOB, just so you know so your delema. And its suppose to be spelled that way and I KNOW NOLAND'S THE LEADER OF THE BATTLE FACTORY. Ok so what If I don't have a good sense of humor. Deal with it.( So Flygon if you get banned for calling me a noob don't blame me ok thank). Oh I don't remeber calling peoples names like you do ok thank you.

 

[Euphoria]

*ahem*. What I've learned from 'cruel people' and 'Flamers' on comic boards..


IGNORE 'EM.


(Not saying that people in this thread are, just some people in general.)

Someone say something you don't like about your comic? Take it with a grain of salt; not everyone's gonna like it, and not everyone has the same views as you. 'Tis better than starting a flame war and getting your comic deleted.
*cough*.

 

[PK]

Wow some one with a points out the unobvious, to some people that is.

 

[Matt Silver]

I dont think the sprites are very well done and they look weird in this comic. You dont have to have capitals all the time and please put WHITE in the speech bubbles. Makes it look better.

Anyway i hope you can do better. THat's the nicest i can put it. 4/10

 

[Davis the Gamer]

Two things:
1. Everybody on this thread stop flaming the kid. He tried his hardest.
2. I dont think the sprites are very well done and they look weird in this comic. You dont have to have capitals all the time and please put WHITE in the speech bubbles. Makes it look better.

Anyway i hope you can do better. THat's the nicest i can put it. 4/10

Eric never flamed this time.
Neither did I.
And Flygon, He's not a n00b either. No one in this thread is a n00b. Cept bribri93, but I won't get into that.
Some people might not find Eric's humor funny. But when someone uses the Cheat Comando's in a review, come on! That's funny stuff.
Lets jut hope Champ Kevin uses our advice to make a better comic.

 

[Beco]

Why did you start all over?
The comic was going well...
I like whathappens in the episode, but you resized them wrong...

 

[Anton_91]

Mee, why did you start it over? Anyway, first comic should need improvment cause first, of the textboxes should be just white and maybe smaller text. Second, it's not nessecary to make such big pics either. And to make it bigger maybe was a mistake to.

Remember, just trying to help you, good work, besides what I just said.