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Pokemon Xtreme: Hunt Begins

Boonge

Cascade Trainer
Well this is the prologue for Pokemon Xtreme: Hunt Begins, I really want to continue this story, the others I’ve created I have just lost interest as there was little plot.

Chapter 1, will be up tonight.


Prologue​

“Son, here is your first Pokemon, treat it with great care.”

“I will, daddy.”

The little kid’s farther had tired brown eyes, you could tell he had been through much, to much horror, something some people wouldn’t even dream about in there dizziest daydreams. He was wearing an old black leather jacket, with holes that had been patched up, he had blue jeans, which were dangly and ripped in various places and he had a mop of brown hair.

The little kid had wide open brown eyes, busting for some excitement, he was wearing a new blue t-shirt, that had a Pokeball printed on the front, and he wore black pants. The kid wanted some excitement, he wasn’t the lazy type, and he wanted to go on an adventure.

The farther, threw the Pokeball and his son caught it with his hand.

“Now your lucky Dale, you’re still six years old, yet you’re getting your 1st Pokemon four years before required time.” Dale’s farther pointed out, to his little son.

“Yes daddy, I want to go to all the Pokemon gyms, collect badges, then become a Pokemon master.” Dale said happily, looking at his dad.

“NO! Son, you will do no such thing, you will train with me, and then when you reach the age of 15...”

“Then I can try and become a Pokemon master?” Dale said, interrupting his dad.

“Yes…son…” Dale’s dad said softly.

“Not in a million years…you have a much more important purpose to fulfill…it might be tough…but that’s life.” Dale’s dad thought to himself.

Suddenly the small house the son and farther were speaking in started to go dark, smoke started spread, innocent blood started to spill, shadows were circling the room.

“Son!”

Dale’s dad grabbed his son, of the floor and jumped into the window, making the glass shatter all over the place.

The farther and son were outside both injured.

Dale’s dad, had blood bleeding from his eyes, lips and ear.

Dale, had blood coming from inside his mouth and from his head.

Blood was dripping slowly onto the floor.

Drop by drop, like a tap nearly turned off.

Bright red blood was on the ground, streaming rapidly.

“Son we’ve got much training ahead of us, that was only the beginning, those horrid creatures are like ant eggs compared to the real thing…” Dale’s dad muttered to himself.



~~~END~~~

Please review :)
 

The Burnt Shadow

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Hmm that's an interesting begginning. That was a bit suspenseful in my opinion, I'll be checking this one...
 

Boonge

Cascade Trainer
Chapter 1 up :D

It is short because i did'nt want to give much away in the 1st chapter.

2nd chapter will be much much much bigger. Chappie 2 will reveal lots about the really evil thing and the shadows thats why Chappie 1 is short i want to keep you guessing lols



Chapter 1: All Grown Up​



~~~9 years later~~~



“Breloom, Fire Punch!”

“Primeape, Fire Punch!”

Breloom’s, fist was covered with bright red flame.

Primeape’s, hand was starting to produce red flame.

Breloom’s, head was shaped like a green mushroom, with two red bulbs on the side, its stomach was green, it had two arms and legs with sharp long red claws, it had a creamy coloured tail, which had a sort of mushroom ornament on the tip.

Primeape, looked like a monkey, it had a ball of hair as a head, it had a pig like nose, two boxing like legs and arms, which had metal braces on them.

Both Pokemon, launched into each other, their fists collided, flame was burning on both of the pokemon’s arms, none wanted to give in, both Pokemon gave it there all, Primeape, started to out power Breloom.

Breloom, gave in, it went flying in flames, into a rock wall, then it slowly rolled down, tumbling onto the floor.

Breloom, had lost the battle…

Breloom, had fainted…

“Nice try, Son.”

“Thanks, but I wasn’t even near good enough.”

Dale had grown, he was much taller now, his mop of brown hair had gone way darker, and messier, he was now wearing blue jeans, a black t-shirt, and a red cap.

Dale’s farther hadn’t changed a bit, except for some white hairs, that were starting to sprout.

“Dale, is not even near ready…I have to take this thing on…By myself…” Dale’s father thought to himself.

“Dad, I am going to train in the woods, I will be back in the cottage later on.” Dale said to his farther, as he walked towards the bushy woods.

“Go, Dragonite!”

An orange dragon like Pokemon appeared, it had two short chubby legs and arms, it had two graceful wings, its stomach was coloured a creamy colour, and it had a fat tail.

“Fly!”

He hopped onto his Dragonite’s back.

“Farwell…Dale…”



~~~2 hours later~~~




“Dad, Dad, Dad, Dad!” Dale, screamed.

He had walked into the cottage, he and his farther were temporally staying there.

But his dad wasn’t there.

The edge of his eyes, caught sight of a letter on the table.

Dear Dale:
Son, I have to leave, theres something I have to try and finish of, for once and for all. See you around. Stay safe. Be cautious. Everything doesn’t seem to be what it’s seemed to be.”
From, Dad.


As Dale, read the letter the room started to go dark. Evil was spreading. Darkness was here.

Dale, saw that the room was going dark.

“Who are you???” Dale said, with a scared voice.

“Death, must kill, blood, pleasure, smell of kill.”

Several voices, hissed

“Breloom, Go!”

Dale, threw his Pokeball into the air and Breloom appeared.

“Breloom, FLASH!”

Breloom’s body lit up and flashed.

But the room stood dark.

The shadows, were closing in for the kill.

“Star Punch!”

The shadows, fled.

They had been defeated.

Dale, fell to the floor.

The man that had launched the attack picked up, Dale.

“So we finally meat, Dale.”




~~~3 Hours Later~~~




Dale was on the floor, with a brown blanket on top of him.

“Huh…Where…Am…I?”

“So, you finally woke up.”

‘Who are you?!”

Dale, bolted up straight, brushing aside the blanket.

“I’m Joel, I am a friend of your farther, Sam.

“You…were the one who saved me, from those creatures.” Dale, said slowly.

“Yes I was.” Joel replied.

Joel was 39 years of age he wore a blue jumper and blue tracsuit pants.

He had blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes and brown sandals.

“But how? What were those creatures?” Dale, questioned Joel.

“Dale, must’ve forgotten that attack, when he was 6 years of age, maybe because he was knocked unconscious, and caused him to lose some memory.” Joel, thought to himself

“I didn’t, they just ran away, for some reason. I don’t even know what they are. So, I guess I saved you.”

But Joel, was lieing he knew very well what the answer was, to both of those questions that Dale asked.

But he knew, he couldn’t tell Dale, the truth yet.

Not yet.

There would be a time, soon.

But, not now.

“Ah, ok.” Dale, said.

Dale, you will stay with me for a while where we will train.

Sam, had told Joel, that he was leaving. Joel, knew why.

Sam, told him, in the meantime to keep on training, Dale.

“So Dale, what Pokemon do you have?” Joel, asked trying to stay of the topic of Shadows.

“One, Breloom.” Dale, replied, while fiddiling with his Pokeball.

“Only one! Aaak!” Joel, screamed in surprise.

“Lets see how strong that, Breloom is, Lets Battle!” Joel, exclaimed.

“Fine.” Dale, replied.

The two walked out of the house, and were battling in front of the house.

“It will be a one on one Pokemon battle.” Joel, explained.

“Go, Breloom!”

“Go, Sandslash!”

Breloom, appeared onto the asphalt.

Sandslash, formed onto the ground.

Sandslash, was coloured orange mix yellow colour, it had two small legs which had big fat claws, and arms, that had claws, spikes like a porcupine on its back, except bigger spikes and a small tail.

“Slash!” Joel, yelled.

“Headbutt!” Dale, yelled.

Sandslash, launched itself into the air, with its claws in front.

Breloom, started to race along the ground, with its head down.

Sandslash, slashed Breloom’s mushroom head.

Breloom’s mushroom head tip was slightly cut, yellow slime started to spill from its head.”

“Breeeeeee!” yelled Breloom, in agony.

“Breloom, Giga Drain.”

“Sandslash, Swift!”

The absorb attack, traveled towards Sandslash, in a green beam, it absorbed the Swift attack then it hit Sandslash straight on. Sandslash’s body flashed green for an amount of 5 seconds, then the beam directed towards, Breloom. The beam hit Breloom, giving it energy.

“Breloom, Cut!”

“Sandslash, Poison Sting!”

Breloom, ran up towards Sandslash, and launched its fist, towards its head.

“Sandslash, grab Breloom by the arms, then use, Poison Sting!”

Sandslash, quickly grabbed Breloom’s arms, and opened its mouth releasing pins of poison, directly at Breloom, Breloom had lost balance.

“Now, pick up Breloom, by the arms, into the air, and smash it, to the ground.”

Sandslash, lifted Breloom, into the air and tossed it aside to the floor.

“Breloom!” Dale, screamed.

He, rushed towards his Pokemon.

“Here, catch.”

Joel, through one spray bottle at Dale.

It had a label on it ‘Full Restore’

Dale, quickly sprayed it on, Breloom.

Breloom’s, poison status quickly vanished and its cut on its head had mended back into shape.

“Breloom, Return!”

Breloom, vanished into its Pokeball, by a gush of red light.

“Dale, you’re good for your age, you have potential.”

“Dale, I have a proposal for you, I want you to travel with me, on the road of Kanto.” Joel suggested.

“I don’t know, Dad doesn’t know.” Dale said, cautiously.

“Don’t worry ill send him a letter, letting him know.” Joel said, happily.

“Ok.” Dale, smiled.

The two packed there bags, with bags of food, drinks, clothes and money.

They went to a Pokemon Market, and grabbed all kinds of healing items, with there money.

They boarded a train, which took them to Viridian City.

A new Train station, had been built over there, recently.




Meanwhile…



Sam was still on Dragonite, flying in the air, with slight breeze.



I’m coming…



You know, I am…



I’m going, to get you…



If I don’t…



At least, I’ll die trying…






END



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The Burnt Shadow

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Well that wasn't so bad, but I was wondering if you could make it a bit more descriptive. I couldn't really picture much. It's an interesting story though, just keep trying and this will end up well...
 
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