Pokemon XZ (my first comic)

[Magical Trevor]

Hi. This is my first comic . I know the speech bubbles are bad but I'll fix them when I get a chance. The comic is about three pokemon trainers Ross (Brendan) Richie (Red) and Jack (Wally) Just so you know this isn't a journey comic. I hope you like it and please post messages. CREDITS: Spriters resouce Image shack Tiny pic and The pokesho


CHAPTER 1
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CHAPTER 2
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CHAPTER 3
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CURRENT EPISODE:
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SPECIALS:
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CURRENT SPECIAL:
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TRAINER CARDS (updated when new main character appears)
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FAN ART:
None. Please send some in. I'll be really happy to post it

 

[Davis the Gamer]

Who made the speech bubbles?
They sort of look like Blueguy's.

 

[Magical Trevor]

Who made the speech bubbles?
They sort of look like Blueguy's.

Er he might have but I just got them from spriters resouce

 

[blueguy]

Er he might have but I just got them from spriters resouce

The speechbubbles I use for PokéChow are from FR/LG... They aren't actually mine.

 

[Hikari Tenshi]

Don't really mix R/S overworlds with FR/LG overworlds. It looks tacky. The special effects aren't that special, too. Not much humor if it is supposed to be funny. All I say is put more effort in it.

 

[Rikori]

Hmm.. Good for a start. =P Still, bad effects. (Pikachu's attack, looked like.. errrrr, Pee?)

 

[Blitzman]

i did not know what oak was doing but i will watch and see this comic in the future

 

[Magical Trevor]

Here's a new one. I canged to ******* because image shack went a bit different for some reason. http://*******.com/k39jxk.png

 

[Blitzman]

3rd panel..or...space..or blank spot..why is he all like streched?What ever you do to the width do to the hight.

 

[Magical Trevor]

3rd panel..or...space..or blank spot..why is he all like streched?What ever you do to the width do to the hight.

Yeah sometimes I do that blank space where one of the characters is saying something as the third pannel. I stretch it out in that pannel just to make it look er um I don't know why I stretch it

 

[Blackbelt Jackie]

I read the first two. LOL at them missing that program. But it's a bit slow and unclear. Maybe you could explain a bit. It needs more originality too. But it looks like it could get good. Overall its pretty good, but I haven't read to much so you might have improved since comic 1 & 2.

Yeah, so well done.

 

[kinglerking]

you aren't bad for a beginner but try to add a little humour, everybody loves a laugh am I right?

 

[Magical Trevor]

you aren't bad for a beginner but try to add a little humour, everybody loves a laugh am I right?

Okay I'll try and make it funnier

 

[kapslock]

Well the speech bubbles could be better. Not much originality but meh who does? Not a lot of humor, but who really does? (OK a lot of peeps). Do you know how too properly stretch? Go to Image>stretch-screw (Ctrl+w)> then stretch it to how much you want it to. If you want it twice it's size, type in 200 by 200 or bigger, 400 by 400. Only use multiples of 100. (all done in paint). Really hoped that helped.

 

[Joe Vega #4]

Bad spelling, lack of punctuation marks, bad sprite placement (Cubone foot on mailbox), streching out sprites when you enlarge them, as well as sqeezing them, making them tall. Humor also sucks. Where's Tracey in the second panel in the sprite comic?

Too bad. Better luck next time.

 

[Magical Trevor]

I hope you like this one EP 18: http://*******.com/kajq52.png

 

[Joe Vega #4]

Have you been listening to my Noob-slaying Crit? All the errors I pointed out are still there. You misspelled Cassidy. Before that, your laziness has just been approved by "p'mon". There were other spelling errors. You used too many exclamation marks. Run-on sentences. Leave plz.

 

[Magical Trevor]

Have you been listening to my Noob-slaying Crit? All the errors I pointed out are still there. You misspelled Cassidy. Before that, your laziness has just been approved by "p'mon". There were other spelling errors. You used too many exclamation marks. Run-on sentences. Leave plz.

Sorry Dark Knight Jorro I'm not gonna leave just because you don't like the comic and it's not lazyness I put alot of effort into every comic so if you don't like the comic then that's your problem

 

[Magical Trevor]

Hi everyone. I jsut wanna say My computer got stuffed up and the screen stretched out so it's quite hard to edit sprites so it may look a bit dumb on your normal screen. Oh and for some reason my computer only saves in gif. New Episode: http://*******.com/kasnxi.png

 

[Magical Trevor]

New one evrybody. I know it's a bit short but it may take the same time to read this comic as a normal comic 'cause there's alot of speech in this one http://*******.com/kb6peq.png