Scizor 108
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I made this story a year ago and wanted share it with you but it's not that good
Arc 1 is PG-13 for using words like (damn,what the hell) and a little violence
here is it:
Pokemon
Darkness of the chaos shadows
Arc 1: Pokemon the ultimate video game
Prologue: in the television a in program for the best invention there was an inventor named Greg he said: I finally invented the great portal to another world .the Interviewer said: that's great could I try it .Greg said: ok just click on that button .the interviewer clicked on it then they disappeared after two minutes they returned the interviewer said: that's great you made a great video game Greg said: but. Then the interviewer said : you will be very rich in a short time after you sell it .Greg said : that's right you must be very smart to discover that it's a video game and I'm gonna say to the people watching us to wait only a week for this game's release. The interviewer said: this great it will be the bigger hit in the world of video games but the program's time's is over so goodbye every body and wait for our next episode.
After a year a teenager named Alex was at the start of the summer vacation he always playing video games he loved it his big brother Jack came to his room and said: it's finally here. Alex said: what is here? Jack said: come on don't say you don't know the greatest pokemon game. Alex said : no. then Jack said: it was in the shops a year ago and you didn't even heard about it when I was saving money for it you were wasting all yours well I bought it for 1000$ and you're paying me half of it if you want to use it. Alex said: does it deserve all that money. Jack said: yes it is well your paying to me 500$. Alex said: just wait two or three months and I'll pay. Then Jack said: ok let's try the game. They turned it on then disappeared they've teleported to another place Alex said: what happened. Jack said: the game transported our body into it's world we are now in the game. Alex said: what will we do know. Jack said: we have to get our starter pokemon we have to choose one the 12 starters over there. Alex said: this is a little hard but I'll choose that pokemon piplup. Jack said: I'll choose chimchar. After that they been teleported to a city Alex said: wow this s a big city. Jack said: this game's world is as big as the real world but until now there's only 6 cities like this in it. Alex said: that's great is their any competition for pokemon fighting. Jack said: there's one right now it starts after two months. Alex said: I'm going there are you with me. Jack said: no way I'm going with a loser like you I'm going alone but I gotta say to you that the place the championship is gonna be is in a city faraway from here you will need a month to get their if you want to go there on foot. Alex said: well what are we waiting for let's go. Jack said: I said I'm not going with you.
This is the end of the prologue
Chapter 1 will be in next sunday
Arc 1 is PG-13 for using words like (damn,what the hell) and a little violence
here is it:
Pokemon
Darkness of the chaos shadows
Arc 1: Pokemon the ultimate video game
Prologue: in the television a in program for the best invention there was an inventor named Greg he said: I finally invented the great portal to another world .the Interviewer said: that's great could I try it .Greg said: ok just click on that button .the interviewer clicked on it then they disappeared after two minutes they returned the interviewer said: that's great you made a great video game Greg said: but. Then the interviewer said : you will be very rich in a short time after you sell it .Greg said : that's right you must be very smart to discover that it's a video game and I'm gonna say to the people watching us to wait only a week for this game's release. The interviewer said: this great it will be the bigger hit in the world of video games but the program's time's is over so goodbye every body and wait for our next episode.
After a year a teenager named Alex was at the start of the summer vacation he always playing video games he loved it his big brother Jack came to his room and said: it's finally here. Alex said: what is here? Jack said: come on don't say you don't know the greatest pokemon game. Alex said : no. then Jack said: it was in the shops a year ago and you didn't even heard about it when I was saving money for it you were wasting all yours well I bought it for 1000$ and you're paying me half of it if you want to use it. Alex said: does it deserve all that money. Jack said: yes it is well your paying to me 500$. Alex said: just wait two or three months and I'll pay. Then Jack said: ok let's try the game. They turned it on then disappeared they've teleported to another place Alex said: what happened. Jack said: the game transported our body into it's world we are now in the game. Alex said: what will we do know. Jack said: we have to get our starter pokemon we have to choose one the 12 starters over there. Alex said: this is a little hard but I'll choose that pokemon piplup. Jack said: I'll choose chimchar. After that they been teleported to a city Alex said: wow this s a big city. Jack said: this game's world is as big as the real world but until now there's only 6 cities like this in it. Alex said: that's great is their any competition for pokemon fighting. Jack said: there's one right now it starts after two months. Alex said: I'm going there are you with me. Jack said: no way I'm going with a loser like you I'm going alone but I gotta say to you that the place the championship is gonna be is in a city faraway from here you will need a month to get their if you want to go there on foot. Alex said: well what are we waiting for let's go. Jack said: I said I'm not going with you.
This is the end of the prologue
Chapter 1 will be in next sunday
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