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Pokemorph Art: "They're Playing Our Song"

Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS

Nikki and Michael enjoy a song together.
Are they singing, or just really happy? That's for you to decide.

Things to address: His lower arm muscle: I added it with the Paintbrush tool in PS. I don't know If I like his arm as a whole; I also see some problems with her chest, but I don't know what it is, really. Her left hand looks odd, and he seems to be on a slant down near his legs. I think, anyway.

These things I pointed out I don't want repeated, unless someone has a suggestion for a way for it to be better, if y'all wouldn't mind ^_^

Enjoy.
 
Hmmm....not to sound rude or anything...but Nikki looks a tad too masculine. ><

Perhaps it's because of her legs...they look too..."manlike" I think you should make the female's legs more slender. Her upper body is also too....tall, making it disproportionate towards her breasts. Her cheeks are also far too wide. Her arms, are also disproportionate. I think the forearms are too wide as well. ><

The male looks fine to me. Just some minor improvements to the clothes and stuff. ;)

Nice job. ^^;
 

Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
Roy Mustang said:
Perhaps it's because of her legs...they look too..."manlike" I think you should make the female's legs more slender.
Roy Mustang said:
Her arms, are also disproportionate. I think the forearms are too wide as well. ><

Just in case you dont know, and aren't familiar with her: She's wearing a pretty large, oversized hoodie. It's her favorite thing ever. Her jeans are also kinda baggy. So, yeah.
 

Infinity

Gone...
I love Nikki's facial expression she looks so adorable that way. Well... You've heard my crits over AIM so I'm not going to bore you with those. Love the pokémorph art as usual.
 

Shadow_Fox

Chaotic Dreamer
I envy your face drawing skills. Everything looks great, Nikki looks so cute and happy. I think what looks weird with her chest is that her breasts do seem a bit high and shouldnt really be that... distinguishable, I suposse would be the word, whilst wearing a baggy hoodie as she is.
Great peice, imo.
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