Pokequest:The silliness!

[Electrobulb]

This is a Pokemon comic about two friends Tom and Andy who go on a extremely wacky Pokemon adventure.This is my first comic,so tell me how to improve.

Episode 1:http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/7100/pokequestep19wc.png

 

[Flaze]

First of all,don't make pokemon overworld Sprite comics with Pallet Town as the beginning town.

Second is that the text in the three text boxes are diffrent.

Third is that you have a amazingly big panel. That is very annoying.

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=99139 < More info here.

 

[Electrobulb]

I said this is my first but i guess i should thankyou for showin me that thread.

 

[Magical Trevor]

liek what happened to the text. I suggest either speech bubbes or text the same size a the first pannel

 

[ForeverFlame]

Pretty good for a first try, better than mine. >_>
You'll improve in time, just look at my comic!
Just try to recolor the heroes, and infact, instead of using heroes you should REALLY use plain trainers.
Also don't go through the cliche road of: "I'm ten and I'm going on my Pokemon Journey today! Yay!"
Pretty good though, great job!