PokeWar(Not approve,please approve,thx)

[Capt.Squirtle]

In a PokeWorld Faraway in the Universe
A war had been start by a Pith,and blah
blahblah..Let's just get start with the RPG
It's like StarWars,but I changed stuffs..Pith=Sith,Podi=Jedi,etc. and by the way..You want to participate in this RPG,please PM first
Characters:
1.Name:Aqua The Todotile
Gender:M
Age:15
Jobodi Knight
Controller:Capt.Squirtle
2.Nameon Patch The Sneasel
Gender:M
Age:15
Jobodi Knight
Controller:KirbyXD
3.Name:Lu the Mawile
Gender:M
Age:29
Jobith
Controller:KirbyXD
4.Commander Lex The Gardevoir
Gender:F
Age:24
JobokePatrol Commander
Controller:Capt.Squirtle
5.Eefe the Magmar
Gender:F
Age:17
Jobith Commander
Controller:Capt.Squirtle
6.Blizz The Butterfree
Gender:F
Age:21
JobokeMedic
Controller:None
There's More,Want to be other,than PM

Cities:1.Char City 2.Blizzard Town 3.Sandty City 4.Blubabe Town 5.Toteg City 6.Vauo City
PLOT:
On a stormy night...a Pith named Lu...Had started attacking childern..and other peoples...and found out its the Pith...than the war had been started.....
Commander Lex:"We need to get men and women to get in the war!!"
Soldier #1,2,3,4:"Ma'am Yes Ma'am!!"
The 4 soldiers went to the 6 cities to gather men and women to go to war..
Soldier #1:"Hello,Sir..You need to go to war!!,Follow me!"
Soldier #4:"hmm..Blizzard Town..*Scream*"
Lu:"Ma'am,I had taken down one..three more to go.."
Eefe:"Good..."
Town by town,city by city...the finally finished...but when the soldiers came back..they couldn't find the fourth one..so the three had start go to Blizzard Town..where Don Patch and Aqua live..they are the only one live there,others are vanquished...after the soldier got them..they went back as fast as they could...
Commander Lex:"Alright now! soldiers! take the new one to their room! get ready for war.."

 

[Skrusti]

Uhh....riiiiiiight...How about you read the fecking Rules?

'Twould be appreciated, so we don't have crappy RPGs all over.

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

This isn't an RPG. There's nothing here that makes it an RPG, it's cluttered difficult to read and is using scripting which is not allowed. Read the rules.