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Pokomic:a hand drawn comic (pg-13)

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eevee-me

Mayness Yayness!
I dont have anything against sprite comics I just prefer hand/computer drawn ones.This comic doesnt have any real plot but will be more random stories each time




I'll colour them and junk when I get money for nice things.
Any comments or crit welcome! such as a better name...
EDIT: oh by the way a few of these where made by my friend from another forum (as in I know him in real life and we both did it)
 
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eevee-me

Mayness Yayness!
Okey heres a new one!

Oh btw there plushies im not that sick....
 
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Konion Champ

pwned!
Uh, May's mouth isn't open... :eek:
 
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Konion Champ

pwned!
Ooooooooooooh, I see! Anyway the pics are either chibi, or you don't study anatomy much. Ohmygod! I just sounded like someone who would crit me on anatomy. Can't blame them anyway. Still, good try, dont see much of a story line though. You should focus more on comics following each other. Plus, i dont understand what Hikari and the other guy are doing....
 
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eevee-me

Mayness Yayness!
Konion Champ said:
Ooooooooooooh, I see! Anyway the pics are either chibi, or you don't study anatomy much. Ohmygod! I just sounded like someone who would crit me on anatomy. Can't blame them anyway. Still, good try, dont see much of a story line though. You should focus more on comics following each other. Plus, i dont understand what Hikari and the other guy are doing....
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Oh right do you know about the caoture the flag game on D/P? because you take a flag to your oppnents secret base where they can put pokedolls and stuff.
 
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crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
wow i think its pretty good. i feel the let down is.........you only have 2! i would love to see some more
 
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Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
Meh, it isn´t funny, and you need to better your grammar
-Comic 1:
--Panel 1: "name´s" not "names"
--Panel 2: "don´t" not "dont"
--Panel 3: "I" not "i"-"It´s" not "Its"
-Comic 2:
--Panel 2: "I´m" not "Im"
 
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crystal-zephyr

i feel his pain
last one was really REALLY funny. I'm liking these alot more than the others. more soon maybe?
 
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eevee-me

Mayness Yayness!
Wow, thanks for your nice comments im working on another now.
Oh and the comics about Brendan and May the Hikari bit will be a one off.
 
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