Um, how about you not double post, hm? That might be a good way to start. Start fresh, yesyes. Fresh, with a brand-new fic, perhaps? Give up on this plot and find a new one? Maybe one you can handle, hm? Perhaps, yes?
No? You insist on reposting the same fic over and over again? Really? Even if nobody seems to like it, and it's damaged beyond repair? Even after countless times of closing and opening and restarting? Is that so?
Then I suppose I should offer some words of wisdom.
First of all, you're pretty much asking us to create the characters for you. Honestly, why don't you try to be creative and do things yourself? Instead of just relying on us to supply you with ideas and tell you what's right and wrong before you even start.
What a crappy way to learn.
Decide for yourself. Create the characters and post them, THEN ask for feedback. If you don't make mistakes, how will you learn? If we feed you everything with a silver spoon, it's hardly even your fic- it's ours. :/
Seriously, think for yourself.
Anyways, if you want our advice on creating characters, at least give us some more background. What are some plans you have for the story? Why are these birds suddenly human? How did they become human, and how did they recieve these specific bodies? Do you have any perceptions on the birds?
On the way of how we think the characters should be, I mostly agree with steel-rain, although I do find it a bit cliché, even though it makes sense. Although Moltres could be a nice, warm guy who can be caring and emotional.\\Seriously, just do whatever you want with it. :/
~Psychic