Meh, I've come back to the fic section. My first fic was a blowout. x.x
At first, I thought it was really cool, then when I wrote the first chapter, I saw that it had too many holes that I couldn't cover up... soo, I decided to scrap it. This is my new working fic called Re-.
It takes place in Johto. And, this does not explain ANYTHING. It is kinda of just a prologue. Nothing more, nothing less. I just wanted to hear what you guys thought of the idea.
Prologue:
I was dying.
Blood oozed from my head. Crimson liquid stained the ground. My leg was twisted in an inhumane fashion. I tried to move my leg, but a sudden shot of pain pierced through me. My arm was flung across the ground. I could see my limb severed from me. I feel the emptiness.
But I didn't care. All my thoughts were directed toward Hannah. I worried for her. I wondered if she was ok. Then I thought of my pitiful self. I couldn't do a single thing.
I sighed.
I could feel my soul detaching itself from the physical world, slowly, but steadily.
I felt no pain, no sorrow, no regret…
As my eyes wearily closed, darkness girded me.
I was alone.
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However, for some reason, my soul didn’t slip away.
I was still here.
What?
Child, do not fear my presence…
A voice echoed within my head. I opened my eyes, and it was dark. Pitch black. Nothing could be seen within this shadow.
Do not be afraid of the unknown...
The voice once again boomed across my brain. But this time, it was difference. A light punctured the darkness, as if vacuuming it all away. In a moment's notice, I was standing in a white area. It was comforting.
Then, the voice rippled through once again.
The Journey is worth more than the destination...
Suddenly, a warm glow appeared in front of me, as if soothing me. The light configured into a miniscule being. It began to solidify, revealing an algae green colored being. It had an unusually shaped head and had large eyes. Its arms were puny. It lacked physical components.
But I felt pressured.
The being was no ordinary green onion headed creature. It's divine appearance ruled that out. It must have been a deity. Its light covered me, blinding me, but I knew it was still there.
"What are you? What do you want from me? Am I dead? Is this heaven?"
However, no sound echoed. No voice boomed. It was silent.
Then, without warning, something struck me across the head. I think. All I remember is that I heard the voice one last time.
The amazingly comfortable voice.
Remember the journey...
Everything blacked out.
At first, I thought it was really cool, then when I wrote the first chapter, I saw that it had too many holes that I couldn't cover up... soo, I decided to scrap it. This is my new working fic called Re-.
It takes place in Johto. And, this does not explain ANYTHING. It is kinda of just a prologue. Nothing more, nothing less. I just wanted to hear what you guys thought of the idea.
Prologue:
I was dying.
Blood oozed from my head. Crimson liquid stained the ground. My leg was twisted in an inhumane fashion. I tried to move my leg, but a sudden shot of pain pierced through me. My arm was flung across the ground. I could see my limb severed from me. I feel the emptiness.
But I didn't care. All my thoughts were directed toward Hannah. I worried for her. I wondered if she was ok. Then I thought of my pitiful self. I couldn't do a single thing.
I sighed.
I could feel my soul detaching itself from the physical world, slowly, but steadily.
I felt no pain, no sorrow, no regret…
As my eyes wearily closed, darkness girded me.
I was alone.
////////////\\\\\\\\\\\\\\////////////\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
However, for some reason, my soul didn’t slip away.
I was still here.
What?
Child, do not fear my presence…
A voice echoed within my head. I opened my eyes, and it was dark. Pitch black. Nothing could be seen within this shadow.
Do not be afraid of the unknown...
The voice once again boomed across my brain. But this time, it was difference. A light punctured the darkness, as if vacuuming it all away. In a moment's notice, I was standing in a white area. It was comforting.
Then, the voice rippled through once again.
The Journey is worth more than the destination...
Suddenly, a warm glow appeared in front of me, as if soothing me. The light configured into a miniscule being. It began to solidify, revealing an algae green colored being. It had an unusually shaped head and had large eyes. Its arms were puny. It lacked physical components.
But I felt pressured.
The being was no ordinary green onion headed creature. It's divine appearance ruled that out. It must have been a deity. Its light covered me, blinding me, but I knew it was still there.
"What are you? What do you want from me? Am I dead? Is this heaven?"
However, no sound echoed. No voice boomed. It was silent.
Then, without warning, something struck me across the head. I think. All I remember is that I heard the voice one last time.
The amazingly comfortable voice.
Remember the journey...
Everything blacked out.