Silentvibrava
Techno Teen
I decided to post a preview of “Rinlado” This doesn’t reveal the plot of it, but rather lets you see what my new writing style is like. This doesn’t contain any good action, I know, but there is plenty of action in the other chapters. More action= later Chapters. This fanfiction will come out at the end, or middle, of May.
~Short side of Chapter One~
Lugubrious it was as horse shoes padded against the soft, soil roads, while the curious light of the full moon shone overhead. Frigid dew covered the tall grass on the stretches of meadow that seemed to have no possible end.
The coachman shivered, precariously. It was a surprisingly chilly night, for this was summer season. He watched his seeable, white breath drift out of his mouth, and his teeth succumbed to frisson. He retreated back into his worn out, unkempt coat for slight relief in warmth.
Inside the coach a family that consisted of three huddled together for warmth, with the exception of the child, who flounced lively, with warm blood. She constantly glanced out the window at the open pasture, seemed confused, then sat back down patiently in her seat.
A slightly chubby man glanced occasionally at his watch, back outside, then groaned with vagueness. He slumped down in his seat, defeated.
A fairly slender woman, with an acute nose, and pale teal eyes waited patiently on her red, cushioned seat. Her eyes glanced about her teenage daughter, who was squirming.
“Mum, are we almost there?” asked the girl, her pale hands clasped together jocundly with her mother’s.
Her mother only nodded as a response, and ignored the fact that this ridiculous question was asked multiple times already. She looked absentmindedly out the frosted window, her mind became one with the soft echoes of night.
Her head suddenly jerked up as she heard a faint noise in the background of the capacious field. The hard padding of another’s hooves echoed, serious this situation was. Fear for her family grew, with each step that was taken on the cobberstone. Out in the distance, she gasped at an intimidating sight…
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Short, but if you really want to know the plot of it go to my other topic in the Author’s Lodge that is titled “~Rinlado~” Maybe you can give me some feedback.
~Short side of Chapter One~
Lugubrious it was as horse shoes padded against the soft, soil roads, while the curious light of the full moon shone overhead. Frigid dew covered the tall grass on the stretches of meadow that seemed to have no possible end.
The coachman shivered, precariously. It was a surprisingly chilly night, for this was summer season. He watched his seeable, white breath drift out of his mouth, and his teeth succumbed to frisson. He retreated back into his worn out, unkempt coat for slight relief in warmth.
Inside the coach a family that consisted of three huddled together for warmth, with the exception of the child, who flounced lively, with warm blood. She constantly glanced out the window at the open pasture, seemed confused, then sat back down patiently in her seat.
A slightly chubby man glanced occasionally at his watch, back outside, then groaned with vagueness. He slumped down in his seat, defeated.
A fairly slender woman, with an acute nose, and pale teal eyes waited patiently on her red, cushioned seat. Her eyes glanced about her teenage daughter, who was squirming.
“Mum, are we almost there?” asked the girl, her pale hands clasped together jocundly with her mother’s.
Her mother only nodded as a response, and ignored the fact that this ridiculous question was asked multiple times already. She looked absentmindedly out the frosted window, her mind became one with the soft echoes of night.
Her head suddenly jerked up as she heard a faint noise in the background of the capacious field. The hard padding of another’s hooves echoed, serious this situation was. Fear for her family grew, with each step that was taken on the cobberstone. Out in the distance, she gasped at an intimidating sight…
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Short, but if you really want to know the plot of it go to my other topic in the Author’s Lodge that is titled “~Rinlado~” Maybe you can give me some feedback.
