Name: Samuel Silver
Age: 12, but very mature for his age
Gender: Male
Legend: None, I just help the LCs, training and such.
Appearance: He has golden blond hair, with long bangs that sometimes get in his striking green eyes. He has a rather thin, underweight, build, almost devoid of muscle, and his skin is lighter than most from spending a lot of time inside. He usually wears a Gengar t-shirt, with a black and green striped hoodie, and black jeans. He has the odd habit of wearing mismatched flip-flops, one green camouflage, and the other red with white and blue diagonal stripes. He can also often be seen wearing a large, black, backpack, where he keeps his state-of-the-art laptop computer. His face is usually in a neutral expression, but he smiles when LCs are doing well.
Personality: Sam is very calm and collected. He likes to work behind the scenes, coming up with plans and such, as he can be very antisocial. He has two major passions, one of which is electronics of all sorts, and the other one is Ghost- type pokemon, which compromise two thirds of his team. He dreads athletic activities, as he has no talent in that area, but he cherishes a mental challenge. He is very intelligent, with an IQ of 139, and studies Pokemon physiology. Despite his scientific mind, he has an eye for beauty, and participates in Pokemon Contests whenever he gets the chance.
History: Sam was born into a family that had gained immense wealth and influence in Jubilife City by taking advantage of other people. He was too naïve to see this at first, but at the age of eight, he finally realized it and ran away from home. He lived on the streets for a few months, his only companion being a Gastly that had been abandoned by its trainer. They eventually decided to leave and do something with their lives, and went to Eastern Unova, where he encountered his other pokemon that he has now. Then, when he heard about the LCs, he jumped at the chance to perhaps discover his true purpose in life.
Powers/Abilities: High IQ, talented Coordinator
Other: None
Pokemon:
Species: Gengar
Name: Gengar
Gender: Male
Personality: Samuel's best friend, he is absolutely loyal in every way. He loves to scare people. He never uses his pokeball.
Species: Porygon2
Name: Porygon2
Gender: Genderless
Personality: Helpful, docile, only does what it is asked to
Species: Rotom
Name: Rotom
Gender: Genderless
Personality: Extremely mischievous, plays tricks one everyone, including Samuel, good friends with Gengar
Species: Metagross
Gender: Genderless
Personality: Loves to fight, enjoys showing off its Meteor Mash, uses it on Samuel a lot.
Species: Driftblim
Name: Driftblim
Gender: Female
Personality: Insane, uses Explosion at the most inconvenient times possible
Species: Cofagrigus
Name: Cofagrigus
Gender: Male
Personality: Loves Samuel, often gives him hugs, which doesn't turn out well.
You certainly lengthened it, I'll give you that. But in doing so you've created a couple problems.
Name: Samuel Silver
Age: 12, but very mature for his age
Gender: Male
Legend: None, I just help the LCs, training and such.
The first two are right here.
Twenty-one for his intelligence level I'll give you, but 12? Yes, there are some child prodigies, but in most cases it is not a good idea to use one for an RP.
The second is what you have for under Legend. What you have implies that you are affiliated with the Legends, and to be honest, why the hell would they let a 12-year-old train Legendary Children that are almost all a year or two (or several) older than him? Makes no sense, it does.
It would've been much more logical to be associated with the evil guys, and even then you'd have to majorly rework the character to fit.
There are also several continuity holes. If he ran away from home at eight, how did he get money? How was he able to get a ticket to travel to Unova? Why didn't the people there realize he was a run away child and take him home? Wouldn't the parents have contacted the police or something? How was he able to buy a state of the art, no doubt extremely expensive laptop? Those are some of the things that stood out to me.
Pending. He'll need some major reworking to fit into this RP.