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Please be nice, this is my second fic, first on this forum. Anyway, the story is devided up by books AND chapters. Chapters are subsections. Spoilers will be given if requested by pm. Only giving spoilers to people who reveiw/give constructive criticism. Please do not post her for requests. This shows up bad in the dark type layout. I have not tested with other layouts. And finally THERE IS A TEN DOLLAR ENTRANCE FEE/jk Sit back, relax, and enjoy the fic.
Quest of the Elemental Heroes
Book One: Chapter One: The Birth of Darkness
It was night time and an umbreon mother was giving birth to a cub. Her name was Torezorranne or Tory for short. Tory was a great fighter but was never muscular. Tory screamed inside of the dark cave that she and her husband called home. Finally, her single cub was born. Tory’s husband, Scarang or Scar, came running. Scar was a bit overweight, and never was a great fighter. Scar was so happy that he almost jumped for joy. The cub born was a boy, but as Scar and Tory took another look at the Eevee cub, they noticed that it was black, just like an Umbreon, but it looked just like an Eevee. Scar and Tory didn’t care, that just made them happier.
Book One: Chapter Two: The Evolution
Three weeks after the birth of the black Eevee cub, it was time to leave the dimly lit cave that was the cub’s old home. The cub’s name was Ivu.
“I know Mom!” I called as he was leaving. “I’ll be back this winter!”
“Take care honey!” replied Tory as she and Scar waved a final goodbye as I was leaving the cave. As I walked on through the dimly lit forest, I heard some footsteps. They were running. Suddenly, a Flareon came out of the bushes to halt right in front of him. I had started shaking as the Flareon was snarling at him. Oh yeah, my first battle, I thought. Suddenly, I shot a small ball of shadows at the Flareon. It didn’t do much damage though. I then used a Quick Attack and which caught the Flareon by surprise. Flareon retaliated with a Flamethrower, leaving me needing to run. I had burns all over the place. Suddenly, I felt drowsy and fainted on the ground at the Flareon’s mercy. I am going to die was my last thought before fainting. After a few hours, I woke up in what I thought as a human building. I was, thankfully right. He had woken up at the only Pokemon Center in Orre. A human woman was looking down at me.
“Now this is a rare find Blaze! Where was it?” The girl exclaimed. A human, presumably Blaze, replied.
“I found it in the Emerald Forest.” Blaze said. He said it in a soft tone, almost of concern, I thought.
“He might actually care about me.” I voiced aloud. I saw a mirror in the facility and stared at my reflection with great surprise. The face that looked back at me was that of an Umbreon, except, I saw no rings. Then I thought, Duh, I left the cave in the moonlight, as happy as could be. That battle must have been all I needed to evolve! I then looked over at Blaze. He was just a kid! Nice hair, I thought. It was ruby red. Once he noticed that I was awake, he came over to me.
“Hey little guy, are you okay?” Blaze asked. I nodded. “I saw your evolution and I was astounded. Then I noticed that you had fainted so then I took you here.”
“Thanks for bringing me here.” I replied.
“Your welcome.” He told me. I was astounded. How could he understand me? I am a pokemon. Most humans don’t understand pokemon.
Yay cliffhangars!!!!!!!!!! Please give reveiws and go ahead and give umbrie in my siggy a hug, or at least a pat. ;197;
Please be nice, this is my second fic, first on this forum. Anyway, the story is devided up by books AND chapters. Chapters are subsections. Spoilers will be given if requested by pm. Only giving spoilers to people who reveiw/give constructive criticism. Please do not post her for requests. This shows up bad in the dark type layout. I have not tested with other layouts. And finally THERE IS A TEN DOLLAR ENTRANCE FEE/jk Sit back, relax, and enjoy the fic.
Quest of the Elemental Heroes
Book One: Chapter One: The Birth of Darkness
It was night time and an umbreon mother was giving birth to a cub. Her name was Torezorranne or Tory for short. Tory was a great fighter but was never muscular. Tory screamed inside of the dark cave that she and her husband called home. Finally, her single cub was born. Tory’s husband, Scarang or Scar, came running. Scar was a bit overweight, and never was a great fighter. Scar was so happy that he almost jumped for joy. The cub born was a boy, but as Scar and Tory took another look at the Eevee cub, they noticed that it was black, just like an Umbreon, but it looked just like an Eevee. Scar and Tory didn’t care, that just made them happier.
Book One: Chapter Two: The Evolution
Three weeks after the birth of the black Eevee cub, it was time to leave the dimly lit cave that was the cub’s old home. The cub’s name was Ivu.
“I know Mom!” I called as he was leaving. “I’ll be back this winter!”
“Take care honey!” replied Tory as she and Scar waved a final goodbye as I was leaving the cave. As I walked on through the dimly lit forest, I heard some footsteps. They were running. Suddenly, a Flareon came out of the bushes to halt right in front of him. I had started shaking as the Flareon was snarling at him. Oh yeah, my first battle, I thought. Suddenly, I shot a small ball of shadows at the Flareon. It didn’t do much damage though. I then used a Quick Attack and which caught the Flareon by surprise. Flareon retaliated with a Flamethrower, leaving me needing to run. I had burns all over the place. Suddenly, I felt drowsy and fainted on the ground at the Flareon’s mercy. I am going to die was my last thought before fainting. After a few hours, I woke up in what I thought as a human building. I was, thankfully right. He had woken up at the only Pokemon Center in Orre. A human woman was looking down at me.
“Now this is a rare find Blaze! Where was it?” The girl exclaimed. A human, presumably Blaze, replied.
“I found it in the Emerald Forest.” Blaze said. He said it in a soft tone, almost of concern, I thought.
“He might actually care about me.” I voiced aloud. I saw a mirror in the facility and stared at my reflection with great surprise. The face that looked back at me was that of an Umbreon, except, I saw no rings. Then I thought, Duh, I left the cave in the moonlight, as happy as could be. That battle must have been all I needed to evolve! I then looked over at Blaze. He was just a kid! Nice hair, I thought. It was ruby red. Once he noticed that I was awake, he came over to me.
“Hey little guy, are you okay?” Blaze asked. I nodded. “I saw your evolution and I was astounded. Then I noticed that you had fainted so then I took you here.”
“Thanks for bringing me here.” I replied.
“Your welcome.” He told me. I was astounded. How could he understand me? I am a pokemon. Most humans don’t understand pokemon.
Yay cliffhangars!!!!!!!!!! Please give reveiws and go ahead and give umbrie in my siggy a hug, or at least a pat. ;197;
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