Rageman's 1337 sprites

[Rageman]

Please give crits.....

Spoiler: PS..."

DON'T LET THIS DIE!

Bippa custom GS style... Norm. and Shiny.
http://i13.*******.com/334nmg7.png
A custom sandshrew ALT. evo... blah.
http://i13.*******.com/2e0sgae.png
GSC Murkurru devamp
http://i13.*******.com/2liugk1.png
DP TC
http://i11.*******.com/2nw3knl.png
RBY TC (Beta)
http://i14.*******.com/4326jrk.png
First Pok?chao
http://i14.*******.com/4ctid6v.png
Another custom....Rhyhorn ALT
http://i13.*******.com/2m5cuvo.png
Gold Bulba revamp
http://i13.*******.com/2wc1dnr.png

Soooo, please respond and give positive crits.
~;107;

 

[pnoiboi]

lol you made a character chao!!!thats funny!

 

[Rageman]

lol you made a character chao!!!thats funny!

Errmmm.... Okay then..

Anyways, new sprite HEAVY revamp of RB machop.
http://i10.*******.com/4gf085g.png
Beware of the HORRIBLE suckinezz!!!11oneleven!

 

[dragonmaster_jonathan]

for Machop: The body's horrible.. sure you revamped the shading and face, but you shouldve revamped the body as well.

Your Bippa GS style needs another shade, not too dark, but it does need another shade near the bottom of the sprite... GS style isn't that flat. And you need to edit the face, as it hardly looks like a Bippa face.

Your Sandshrew alt is pretty good and so is your Bulba revamp. I think your GSC Mukkuru's shade should be lighter. Finally your Rhyhorn alt is flat.. you should put some shading on the neck-to-chest area

 

[Rageman]

for Machop: The body's horrible.. sure you revamped the shading and face, but you shouldve revamped the body as well.

Your Bippa GS style needs another shade, not too dark, but it does need another shade near the bottom of the sprite... GS style isn't that flat. And you need to edit the face, as it hardly looks like a Bippa face.

Your Sandshrew alt is pretty good and so is your Bulba revamp. I think your GSC Mukkuru's shade should be lighter. Finally your Rhyhorn alt is flat.. you should put some shading on the neck-to-chest area

Thanks, and I aldo have a question.....

Spoiler: DRAGONMASTERJON ONLY!

Do you need any more members on Storm for sprites wise? I'd love to help. ^__^(I know how to do your style )

Also, I think i'll try respriting my Sandshrew Alt., too.

 

[dragonmaster_jonathan]

Well

Spoiler: uh

Only admins update the pokedex, but members are allowed to send in one sprite so it can appear in the second gen dex... I'll further discuss all of that through PM if you want me to.. I don't want to spam up your thread.

 

[Raptomon]

Good spirite !!

 

[Momogirl]

not bad! the bippa sprite is kinda thin, and yes the body of the machop needs work. also, you used too much dithering in your costum sandshrew evo

 

[Rageman]

not bad! the bippa sprite is kinda thin, and yes the body of the machop needs work. also, you used too much dithering in your costum sandshrew evo

For the machop, is this better?
http://i15.*******.com/351zmz8.png