Ash_Junior
Irredeemable Nerd
Battle 1: Snorlax versus Nidorina, Electabuzz, Torterra (this post)
Battle 2: Skarmory versus Tyranitar and Pikachu
Battle 2: Skarmory versus Tyranitar and Pikachu
Basically, this thread will be an outlet for Pokemon battles that I have written, am writing, or will write and like but for whatever reason aren't around anymore, got cut from their stories, etc.
Just quick one shots that don't need any background and can be enjoyed just for the sake of battle. Sometimes I may post an edited form of a battle I'm writing in a fic that I'm writing at the moment (edited so you don't need to understand the context, just enjoy the battle)
First off is a doodle that I wrote for the old version of my "Following in her Footsteps" fic
back when I was going to have her go across a North America that wasn't like our own. But I'm not going to be following through with that, thus the restart of the fic.
But in this alternate universe, the Kingdom of Hawaii wasn't absorbed by the British/Spanish, and then by the Americans, and remains independent, and has an island empire over a lot of the Pacific, including the Midway Atolls.
the "KHS Wallace" stands for "Kingdom of Hawaii Shipping or whatever the S usually stands for
Yes, that IS supposed to be Paul from D/P anime
But in this alternate universe, the Kingdom of Hawaii wasn't absorbed by the British/Spanish, and then by the Americans, and remains independent, and has an island empire over a lot of the Pacific, including the Midway Atolls.
the "KHS Wallace" stands for "Kingdom of Hawaii Shipping or whatever the S usually stands for
Some of the others I came up with were the Confederate States of America (the South rose again ), the Hollywood Empire (with Vegas as the capital), Confederacy of Cleveland, New England Protectorate....if I put thought into Canada, it would probably be Canada, Quebecois, and some native-sounding name in the far north.
Yes, that IS supposed to be Paul from D/P anime
Oh, and if it bothers you, sorry, but when I wrote this I was using the lower-case pokemon/moves/type, etc style of writing (and still am currently )
Alora looked up as the hyper beam impacted to her left, and glared at its source—a charging snorlax that was being attacked with long-range attacks, but showed no signs of slowing down. A quick glance around showed her that aside from a trainer that was dealing with six pirate pokemon, she was the only person in a situation to do anything about the pokemon.
Alora took a deep breath, and pointed at the snorlax. "Poison tail, thunder wave." Immediately, her nidorina and electabuzz leapt into action. Slasher, her ever-loyal nidorina, took a darting, zig-zag course towards the ambling behemoth. Mira Nova, Alora's grouchy electabuzz, directed electricity as it arced between the terminals on top of the electric type's head to the eating machine.
Alora glanced over her shoulder to see that passengers were still lining the rails. The evacuation was taking longer than had been planned. Alora gritted her teeth and turned back to the battle. "Thunderbolt, toxic spikes! We're a delaying action. If we manage to bring him down, that's just a bonus." The snorlax was getting closer now, and Alora found herself backing up the ramp despite the fact that the snorlax was still quite a ways off.
The pirates had caught the cruise ship unawares, and had ravaged the Kingom of Hawaii's naval base on the Midway Atoll before any counter-attack could be organized.
Her pokemon charged forward, but Alora could easily see that there was no way that her Pokemon would be able to bring down the pirates' pokemon on their own. Alora closed her eyes and concentrated, doing her best to fall into a zone of total concentration, trying to ignore the earth rumbling beneath her feet. "Trip it up with low kick!" she called out. "Pull its legs out from under it with tail whip!"
She didn't know how long she kept barking commands like that, trying to come up with even the most outlandish of ideas to simply slow the immense pokemon down, all the while knowing that it was futile. The ground beneath her feet shook, and she knew that in moments the snorlax would knock her down, and she'd either be trampled or knocked uselessly to one side. But as long as she bought even a vital half-second for the passengers escaping the ship it didn't matter.
Suddenly the vibrations in the earth shifted, and the ramp beneath her feet shook in an entirely new way. Alora was thrown off her feet, and as her eyes opened, she saw a large, brown creature slam into the charging snorlax, having leaped down the main ramp leading into the maritime vessel. The massive pokemon forced the snorlax back, but only barely.
Staggering backwards, the snorlax took only a few moments to recover, then faced off against the large, grass-type pokemon. Only now did Alora notice that the Sinnoh starter's trainer rode atop the tortoise's back, one hand holding firmly to the tree trunk that grew out of the pokemon's back, the other hand held clenched in a fist at his side. With a bellow, the torterra loosed a hyper beam that hit the massive normal-type pokemon squarely in the chest. Alora found herself calling out orders to her own pokemon as the snorlax stood for a moment, letting the power of the attack wash over itself. The attack let up, and for a moment, the snorlax did nothing.
Then Mira's tail yanked its right leg out from underneath it, while Slasher locked its neck in a vicious poison fang. The snorlax fell with a terrific bang and lay still. A cheer went up from the ship's rail, but Alora ignored it as she scanned the battlefield. The soldiers at the Midway base were still holding off the pirates, but they were being pushed steadily backwards. The trainers who had broken through their ranks had been mopped up, but the damage had been done.
The trainer on the torterra's back turned slowly to face Alora. "That was pathetic," he snapped at her. "Next time, fight your own battles. I won't rescue you." A hundred retorts rose in Alora's throat, but she forced them down. No matter what she might say, he was right. The fact that she didn't have a full team didn't matter. The fact that she had designed her pair of pokemon specifically for the Pokemon League and she was way out of her comfort zone didn't matter. She was assigned to this walkway, and that meant that she, and only she was responsible for it.
"I know," Alora said instead, nodding her head in a quick apology as the torterra turned and began moving as quickly as its lumbering body would allow back towards the ramp that the trainer had been assigned to protect. "It won't happen again." The other trainer held her gaze just another moment, despite his body being twisted around. In that moment, Alora caught a flicker of some emotion she didn't recognize, and then he was gone.
Alora shook her head and turned back to the battle before her. "Clean up the spikes, Slasher. Mira, bring it in. Don't step in anything." Alora took a deep breath, and prepared for the next assault. A quick glance up the ramp showed her that most of the H.I.S. Wallace's passengers had been evacuated. And that was good. The pirates were quickly pushing the remaining Hawaiians back to the ship.
"Forget the cute guy," Alora muttered to herself. "You can make out with him when this is over."* She smiled slightly, and waited for her next bit of action.
Next up, the initial battle from the ORIGINAL version of "Following in her Footsteps"
Skarmory vs. Tyranitar/Pikachu
and it will have a bit of my anit-Pikachu rantage in there, so if you actually like the damn rat, you may want to skip one or two sentences
Thunder Stones exist for a REASON! so we wouldn't need to use Pikachus forever!
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