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RATE first sucessful sprite - SUSHI CHEF POKEMON -

How good is my first sprite?

  • Awesome!

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Good!

    Votes: 3 75.0%
  • Average.

    Votes: 1 25.0%
  • Below average...

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Absolutely S**T!!!

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    4

JuicyPaperclip

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Hello

I am happy to announce my first successful sprite, at least I think so!
I dont have a name so that would be helpful too.
I'll add details later when I think of them

I started out with a shape, then moulded it into this, which is alot easier than sitting at a desk and scribbling until I die. I think the simple, small cute ones are the types of sprites ill be making! I made an ambition to make at least 5 successful sprites before Febuary 2007. I think I can do it, but helpful pointers would assist my quality of the future sprites.

I have 2 variations and I need help eciding which is better also.

SushichefFINAL.jpg


Sushichefdarkerforsppuser.jpg
(this is the final one and I will be making no real major adjustments, so rate this one! :) I will have a shiny updated soon...

UPDATE-shiney
Paccusushishineytest2FINAL.jpg


Thanks for viewing and the constructive critisism!
 
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Chaotic Pink

Let the zephyr blow.
Original idea, those little cheff's hats are so cute! There isn't much difference between to two, next I try doing them in different positions and shiny ones!
 

JuicyPaperclip

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the second ones got more black in it, on the belly. Also thanks for the rating! I really appreciate it! I was in a spriting mood today so I just decided to make one up from scratch. its cute, and I will probably make a shiny eventually. Heck, if I make enough good sprites, ill even start up a sprite thread! Keep your eyes peeled!
 

stigy

Arteest
Very nice. I like it :) Although you COULD add more definition to the facial features.
 

magmaman

Ahhhhhh yeeeeeeah
Those are pretty good.
 

JuicyPaperclip

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also following a recent PM, you can feel free to use it in whatever you like as long as you give credit to me! :) thanks!
 

pokemonster2191

turtles=pwnage
i give it a 6/10. everything is great except the outlining. it hurts my eyes. use a darker color for everything. if you do ill make it a 9/10. :D
 

JuicyPaperclip

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i give it a 6/10. everything is great except the outlining. it hurts my eyes. use a darker color for everything. if you do ill make it a 9/10. :D

Sushichefdarkerforsppuser.jpg

I hope thats better, I think it looks better now too! I used Lickitungs pallette, because it seemed like the right hue. Thanks for the CC, i'll make a shiny one now!


also here they are side by side, so plz tell me which is better.

Sushichefdarkerforsppuser.jpg
SushichefFINAL-1.jpg


Also its name is Paccusushi
 

JuicyPaperclip

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ok I have the shiney version. I used corsolas shiney template for this one, also tell me whether it would look better in a different colour, because I wasnt sure which one would look best.

here it is
Paccusushishineytest2FINAL.jpg


Also judge my skills in revamping. here is my slowking revamp, because I hate all the new slowking sprites.

Slowkingrevamp.jpg
 

kapslock

Well-Known Member
Not bad Juicy,if i may call you Juicy, it's kinda small but i've never made anything custom so i cn't really say ^^;

Nice job on the revamp but the hat/shell thing's outline is all black,or so it seems, try to make it more natural by making it more lighter. Also there should be shading under his collar. It's best to look at it's advance sprite, or a sprite with a more similar pose to it. Or look at the Sugmori.

If you want some more critsizing,polite crit, ask DragonFree, when ever she has the chance she may give you some advise for your revamps.

And hope to see from you soon!
 

JuicyPaperclip

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hey you dindt use the one I made for you

i know im sorry, I pm'd you or posted in your thread didnt i? I said something like I overcame the problem myself, but I really do appreciate what you did, honest! Im sorry if your offended, but I really wanted to post a sprite fully made by me, but if I have any other problems, which I cant overcome, i'll let you know
 
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