Rate my noobish set

[Lallul]

PKMN:

Bulbasaur Base set ;001;

Ivysaur 80 HP ;002;
@@ Sleep powder – defending now asleep – 20 dmg
@@@ Vine whip – 40 dmg

Venusaur Base set ;003;

Nidoran (male) 50 HP
@ Call for family – take nidoran from deck to hand, shuffle deck
@ Double stab – flip 2 coins. 10 dmg for every heads

Nidorino Base set
Nidoking Base set
Exeggute Base set
Exeggutor Base set

Chikorita lv 19 Neo Genesis
Bayleef lv 39 Neo Genesis
Maganium lv 54 Neo Genesis

Scyther Jungle
Scyther Neo Discovery

Charmander 40 HP
PP – Gather Fire
@ Fire tail – 20 dmg

Charmeleon Base Set
Charizard Base Set

Mewtwo 70 HP
@ Energy absorbation – put 2 energy from discard to Mewtwo
@@@ - Psyburn – 40 dmg

Jirachi EX: Team Magma VS. Team Aqua

Dratini 40 HP
@@ Wrap – flip coin, heads -> defending is paralyzed – 10 dmg

Dark Dragonair 60 HP
PP – Evolutionary Light
@@@ Tail strike – Flip coin, Heads -> 40 dmg. Tails -> 20 dmg

Trainers:
Super Rod, Gust of wind, Switch X2, The Boss’s way, Poké ball, Bill

Energy:
20 Grass
6 Fire
7 Psychic

 

[Lallul]

I enterd a competition with this deck, and got totally pwnd. but theres another competition again in march. please help me improve my deck so that I have a chance to win

 

[Cipher 2008]

First off...we need quantities, set names and set numbers. For everything.

Second, 33 Energy?! Halve it. You want 17, no more. And you want AT LEAST 15 Trainer cards.

 

[chester]

And also have Dual type MAX

 

[Lallul]

quantity... well, I onlt got one of each pkmn in my deck.
kthen, less energy and more trainers, but I dont have a lot of good trainers. maybe some more trainers and a pkmn or two

 

[Mech_Master]

You need to have doubles of your cards especially your evolution lines like 4 Bulbasaur, 3 ivysaur, and 2 venusaur for example.

 

[Lallul]

Wellthen.
now my deck looks like this

PKMN:
2X Bulbasaur Base set
1X Ivysaur Base set

1X Ivysaur 80 HP
@@ Sleep powder – defending now asleep – 20 dmg
@@@ Vine whip – 40 dmg
(cant find the set in whitch this Ivysaur belongs, but its 34/100 of som set. Its exacly the same as the EX: Expedition Ivysaur.)

1X Venusaur Base set

1X Nidoran (male) Base set
1X Nidoran (male) EX: Fire Red & Leaf Green
1X Nidorino Base set
1X Nidoking Base set

1X Chikorita lv 19 Neo Genesis
1X Bayleef lv 39 Neo Genesis
1X Meganium lv 54 Neo Genesis

1X Scyther Jungle
1X Scyther Neo Discovery
1X Pinsir Jungle

1X Jirachi EX: Team Magma VS Team Aqua

1X Dratini Base Set
1X Dratini Team Rocket
1X Dark Dragonair Team Rocket

Trainers:
1X Super Rod
3X Defender
1X Gust of Wind
2X Switch
1X The Boss’s Way
4X Energy Removal
3X Energy Retrieval
1X PlusPower
2X Poké ball
1X Bill
2X Sleep! (Rocket’s Secret Machine)
1X Imposter Professor Oak
1X Pokédex
1X Pokémon Trader

Energy:
14X Grass
3X Psychic

 

[Lallul]

Don't make me create a new thread just to get my updated deck rated.
plz rate it

 

[Cipher 2008]

Stop double-posting.

It's a bit better now...but still no consistency in the Pokémon.

 

[Esperante]

Don't make me create a new thread just to get my updated deck rated.
plz rate it

Haha, I wouldn't suggest making spam threats.

 

[master in da making]

If you have no other bayleef / chickorita remove them, you'll never meganium out if you only have one of each of its pre evos