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Rate my online team(this is the last one).

IcyDragon0605

Look over there!
I'm going to start battling online now so I'm WIDE open for suggestions.

Armaldo*adamant
Stone edge
earthquake
swords dance
X-scissors

Salamence*modest Choice specs
flamethrower
dragon pulse
draco meteor
hydro pump

Jolteon*timid
agility
baton pass
thunder wave
thunderbolt

Tangrowth*bold (I havn't decided which ability to use).
sleep powder
toxic
sunny day
wring out

Skarmory*impish
Drill peck
whirlwind
roost
spikes

Aerodactyl*jolly (no item decided)
natural gift
earthquake
stone edge
aerial ace

I should probably use a different pokemon other than Aerodactyl.
 

IcyDragon0605

Look over there!
Instead of Aerodactyl I thought that Xatu, altaria, or Lopunny would be good to.

Lopunny*jolly
Sky uppercut
attract
fire/ice punch
Solarbeam
 

GamerFa99otWoW

***got Gamer
Lopunny @ Choice Band
Jolly
252 Attack / 252 Speed / 6 HP

Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Brick Break / Switcheroo
Return / Switcheroo

If you want to use Lopunny, you might as well get a kill.


As for the team, you're weak to everything.
 

IcyDragon0605

Look over there!
Now that I know what a EV Spread is, what about this team.

Lopunny*Jolly
Leftovers ATK.255 SPD.255
Switcheroo
Ice Punch
Thunder Punch
Return

Altaria*Bold
Expert Belt DEF.255 SP DEF.255
sing
dragon pulse
perish song
ice beam

Armaldo*Adamant
Life Orb ATK.255 DEF.255
Stealth Rock
Stone Edge
Earthquake
X-Scissors

Jolteon*timid
Leftovers SPD.255 SP ATK.255
Agility
Baton Pass
Thunder Bolt
Shadow Ball

I want to pass agility to Armaldo

Mantine Swift Swim ability *Calm
Lum berry SP.DEF.255 SP.Atk.255
Hydro pump
Rain Dance
Confuse Ray
Substitute

Skarmory Keen Eye ability *Impish
Leftovers DEF.255 ATK.255
Drill Peck
Roost
Night Slash
Whirlwind

Lopunny-Physical sweeper
Jolteon-Special Sweeper
Mantine-Special Wall
Skarmory-Physical Wall
Altaria-Tank
Armaldo-Stealth Rocker
 

Blue Ace

Pokemon is Dead
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/

Just use that link if all you're concerned about is movesets, not to mention better EV spreads, which I doubt you'll even incorporate seeing as this is for WiFi I assume, even less reason to point out your weaks and suggest proper replacements to fix them.

It's better to build a team 1st, have it rated, then make it. As opposed to making it and having it rated. Keep that in mind next time.
 

Virtual_Falcon

Arceus Used Suicide!
Build a team-Plan it, with movesets, EVs spreads, etc.
Make a team-Breed for the pokemon, EV train them, teach them the moves.
 

IcyDragon0605

Look over there!
This is my last try.

Jolteon
Leftovers
Timid
4 HP /252 SpA / 252 Spe
Baton Pass
Substitute
Thunderbolt
Yawn

Lapras
Choice Specs
Modest
120 HP / 252 SpA / 136 Spe
Ice beam
Psychic
Thunderbolt
Surf

Hippowdown
Leftovers
Impish
252 HP / 16 Atk / 152 Def / 88 SpD
Earthquake
Ice fang
Stealth Rock
Slack-Off

Lopunny(Cute Charm)
Choice Band
Jolly
26 HP / 252 ATK / 232 Spe
Switcheroo
Return
Ice fang
Sky uppercut

Armaldo
Leftovers
Impish
244 HP / 14 ATK / 252 Def
Rock Blast
Stealth Rock
Knock-Off
Toxic

Ludicolo(swift swim)
Leftovers
Calm
204 HP / 76 SpA / 124 SpD / 104 Spe
Rain Dance
Surf
Ice Beam
Leech Seed

Jolteon-Baton Passer
Armaldo-Supporter
Lapras-Special Sweeper
Lopunny-Physical Sweeper
Ludicolo-Special Wall
Hippowdown-Physical Wall
 
Hippowdon ruins the whole team. Nothing except Armaldo resists SandStorm. Also, you don't have a Dragon resist on your team, making you weak to...

-Salamence
-Dragonite
-Garchomp

Three very common Pokemon.

Lopunny is best Switcherooing Choice Specs, since more walls are physical based therefore aren't 100% screwed up by being Switcherooed a Choice Band. Lapras is awful CSed, Starmie does the job better, use the DDLap set.
Jolteon shouldn't have T-Bolt as its lone attack, too easily screwed over by Ground types. Replace Yawn with HP Ice.

Also, you seem to be extremely impatient towards others here. If you want your badly thought out team rated, don't post sulking about how no one has rated it for 10 seconds. You're lucky I bothered rating this.
 

scytherdude30

I heart bug pokemon
hey if you are going to rate a team you don't just yell at him or her point out their mistakes and tell them how to fix it I might not know a lot about pokemon I mean I am not a certified rater or anything but I know to help someone get better you don't just bagg on thier mistakes and tell them they are impasiant (that is spelled wrong I know I just don't know how to spell it) you tell them to fix it and say next time I think you should be more patient ok so don't be so mean about gosh and no one should revolve thier team around three pokemon!
 
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