Rate my team please!

[Steel-Type Trainer]

Alright, seeing as I'm new here, the first thing I wanna do is for you guys to rate my team, ok? I'm good with constructive criticism, but If you're like ZOMG! THIS TEAM IS TEH WORST! Then I will disreagard everything you say after that. Alright, here we go. Note: All levels are the same....basically a BF challenge team.

Blaziken lvl. 67

Nature: Lonely

Fire Blast
Sky Uppercut
Rock Slide
Swords Dance

Item: Hard Stone

If you don't see why it needs RS, here's a hint: Flying and Fire.

Alakazam lvl. 67

Nature: Serious

Psychic
Calm Mind
Ice Punch
Recover

Item: Nevermeltice

I almost always have Alakazam on my team. Granted, a strong non-fighting type attack will take him out in one blow, but seeing as how he's so fast, he'll almost always get at least one strike in.

Steelix lvl. 67

Nature: Quirky

Earthquake
Iron Tail
Double-Edge (He has Rock Head)
Crunch

Item: Quick Claw

Obviously this poor guy needs something to speed him up. Quick Claw does it for me.

Ludicolo lvl. 67

Nature: Modest

Sunny Day
Solarbeam
Giga Drain
Hydro Pump

Item: Shell Bell (Gotta love double healing)

The annoyer. You deal damage to him, he uses Giga Drain + Shell Bell to heal it right back.

Lapras lvl. 67

Nature: Serious

Rain Dance
Hydro Pump
Ice Beam
Substitute

Item: Leftovers


Gengar lvl. 67

Nature: Modest

Thunderbolt
Hypnosis
Psychic
Dream Eater

Item: Twistedspoon

 

[Nightcat]

Blaziken@lefties
adamant/naive nature
- fire blast
- rock slide
- sky uppercut
- swords dance

Alakazam@lefties/lum berry/shell bell
modest/timid nature
- psychic
- ice punch/fire punch
- recover
- calm mind

~nightcat ;197;

 

[SwordofAeons]

Lum on Zam.
Steelix-Leftovers
Impish
EQ
RS
Boom
Roar/Toxic

Ludicolo-Leftovers
Calm/Bold
Leech Seed
Rain dance
Surf
ice Beam/Sub

 

[Steel-Type Trainer]

Thanks kindly, can you guys tell me how you would rate this team on a scale from 1-10 with 10 being the best?

I'd rate it about a 7 or an 8.

;208; STT

P.S.: Thanks again. If you haven't guessed already, I love Steel-Types.

 

[SwordofAeons]

With it right now its around a 3-4. with teh right natures and moves its around an 7-9

 

[Snap Dragon]

I'm gonna have to disagree with you on Ludicolo, US. Surf is an obvious choice because of STAB and the 1.5x boost from Rain Dance, but I think Toxic would be better than Ice Beam - it complements Leech Seed and Rain Dish well.

 

[Steel-Type Trainer]

Okay, thanks US. I guess I was right about it being a good team, it just needs a few tweaks.

;208; S-TT

 

[SwordofAeons]

Up to preference. I'd use Ice Beam for more type coverage. he could also use Substitute

 

[Doofdum]

what ever happened to blaze kick???

 

[Nightcat]

Blaze kick is a sig move, and really cool, but it's pointless because it's power is less than that of flamethrower and fire blast.
=/

~nightcat ;197;

 

[Steel-Type Trainer]

Beat me to it, nightcat.

;208; ST-T

 

[Overheat Hothead]

Alright, seeing as I'm new here, the first thing I wanna do is for you guys to rate my team, ok? I'm good with constructive criticism, but If you're like ZOMG! THIS TEAM IS TEH WORST! Then I will disreagard everything you say after that. Alright, here we go. Note: All levels are the same....basically a BF challenge team.

Blaziken lvl. 67

Nature: Naive

Flamethrower
Reversal
Rock Slide
Endure

Item: Salac Berry

If you don't see why it needs RS, here's a hint: Flying and Fire.

Alakazam lvl. 67

Nature: Timid

Psychic
Calm Mind
Ice Punch
Recover

Item: Lum Berry

I almost always have Alakazam on my team. Granted, a strong non-fighting type attack will take him out in one blow, but seeing as how he's so fast, he'll almost always get at least one strike in.

Steelix lvl. 67

Nature: Impish

Earthquake
Iron Tail
Double-Edge/Toxic
Rest

Item: Leftovers

Obviously this poor guy needs something to speed him up. Quick Claw does it for me.

Ludicolo lvl. 67

Nature: Bold

Leech Seed
Surf
Giga Drain
Rain Dance

Item: Shell Bell
Shell Bell could work with the item clause

The annoyer. You deal damage to him, he uses Giga Drain + Shell Bell to heal it right back.

Lapras lvl. 67

Nature: Calm

Surf
Thunderbolt
Ice Beam
Rest

Item: Leftovers


Gengar lvl. 67

Nature: Modest

Thunderbolt
Hypnosis/Psychic/Wil-O-Wisp/Giga Drain
Icepunch
Firepunch

Item: Leftovers

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[*Shadow_Destiny*]

Alright, seeing as I'm new here, the first thing I wanna do is for you guys to rate my team, ok? I'm good with constructive criticism, but If you're like ZOMG! THIS TEAM IS TEH WORST! Then I will disreagard everything you say after that. Alright, here we go. Note: All levels are the same....basically a BF challenge team.

Blaziken lvl. 67

Nature: Lonely

Fire Blast
Sky Uppercut
Rock Slide
Swords Dance

Item: 10% higher items SUCK

If you don't see why it needs RS, here's a hint: Flying and Fire.

Alakazam lvl. 67GOOD

Nature: Serious

Psychic
Calm Mind
Ice Punch
Recover

Item: Nevermeltice

I almost always have Alakazam on my team. Granted, a strong non-fighting type attack will take him out in one blow, but seeing as how he's so fast, he'll almost always get at least one strike in.

Steelix lvl. 67

Nature: Quirky

Earthquake
Rock slide
Double-Edge (He has Rock Head)
Rest/Sandstorm

Item: Quick Claw

Obviously this poor guy needs something to speed him up. Quick Claw does it for me.

Ludicolo lvl. 67

Nature: Modest

Surf
Toxic
Leech Seed
Rain Dance
Item: Leftovers (Gotta love double healing)

The annoyer. You deal damage to him, he uses Giga Drain + Shell Bell to heal it right back.

Lapras lvl. 67

Nature: Serious

Rain Dance
Surf
Ice Beam
Substitute

Item: Leftovers


Gengar lvl. 67

Nature: Modest

Thunderbolt
Substitu
Psychic
Shadow Ball

Item: Twistedspoon

Changes in Bold

 

[blazemxx]

Why give Ken Hard Stone? Also, items like Hard Stone suck, like posted already. A much better alternative for Ken is Lum Berry.