rate my team please

[josh09]

hi im a newb from canada. umm this is my emerald team. hope u like it

Bob Da Fish/swampert
ice beam
muddy water
surf
brick break
almost nothing can stand up to this offensive powerhouse, i always save for last

Mrs. Tank/blissy
softboiled
toxic
sing
double team
as her name implies almost nothing can kill her , my friends wont let me use her.....

WAK IT!!!/marowak/thick club
bonemerang
headbutt
double edge
earthquake
dont get hit by him KO anything almost and his rock hed lets him use double edge

Lord Of The Bugs/heracross
swords dance
brick break
megahorn
rock slide
i put alot of battle points and money into this beetle, and he rarely lets me down

Windfly/dragonite
wing attack
hyper beam
outrage
dragon claw
hes fat and hes proud, this dragon can be a pain in the butt.

Flying Rocks/aerodactyl
ancient power
wing attack
hyper beam
fire blast
how many metagrosses have fallen to this bird i dont know


well thats my team in a nutshell
constructive critique please

 

[aipomkong]

less double team
less hyper beam

 

[josh09]

less double team
less hyper beam

ummmm only one guy had double team

 

[metafreak]

ummmm only one guy had double team

he meant dont use hyper beam or double team at all

 

[Carpetted!]

Oh. That's what he said to me too...

 

[--Pokemon--]

You don't need surf and muddy water on swampert, give it Eartquake as Swampert has better attack than sp. attack.

Sing isn't very reliable on accuracy.

Aerial ace is better than wing attack or maybe even better HP flying.

And as people said less, hyper beam.

Oh and nice commentary on each of your members.

 

[≈*Virulent Tsunami*≈]

Just going to say that with 2x as much Attack than Sp. Attack, Double Edge will do far more to everything you than Fire Blast will on Aerodactyl(unless its Parasect or something). Many more problems, though.

And 1 Pokémon with Double Team is far too many, really.

~*CB*~
The 8th Champion​

 

[aipomkong]

then aerial ace does moreto parasect then fire blast

 

[Exel 4.0]

I don't get it, what's the purpose of hyper beam (outside of slaking), if you put a strength on him then use it twice in a row, them bam you got 160 damage, more PP, and something to use out of battle.

 

[≈*Virulent Tsunami*≈]

I don't get it, what's the purpose of hyper beam (outside of slaking), if you put a strength on him then use it twice in a row, them bam you got 160 damage, more PP, and something to use out of battle.

Why do you think Hyper Beam is good on Slaking and why do you want Strength>Return? Logic=phailed.

Good point 0ma. Wow Parasect fails.....Shame, I like it ._. Better Typing, plz.

~*CB*~
The 8th Champion​

 

[TyraniRay]

And now for some proper critique. New players will never learn if you don't actually help.

hi im a newb from canada. umm this is my emerald team. hope u like it

Bob Da Fish/swampert
Ice Beam/RockSlide
Earthquake
Surf/Curse/Rest and Chesto Berry
Brick Break

You don't need two of the what is effectively the same attack. So take out the less accurate one (Muddy Water) and add in a Physical Attack, like Return, Rock Slide or Iron Tail if you're willin to risk its low accuracy. You also may want to replace Ice Beam as well, as it's not very powerful on a Swampert. You probably want a non-attacking move as well, like Curse if you're going all Physical. You probably don't want to know about evs, so I'll skip that.

Mrs. Tank/blissy
softboiled
Thunder Wave
Seismic Toss
Heal Bell

Total revamp here. We'll give this Heal Bell so no one can Toxic you. Seismic Toss will do more than almost any other attack, and those few aren't reliable. Thunder Wave is to impair the opponent. I'll leave Softboiled, as if you're not up against a Sp. Sweeper with this you should switch.

WAK IT!!!/marowak/thick club
Rock Slide/Substitute
Swords Dance/Focus Punch
double edge
earthquake

Same as Swampert, don't doublre up types unless you have good reason. Swords Dance so you can knock everything out even quicker. The Subpunch combo is efective, but probably Marowak is too slow for it and the opponent should see Subpunch coming a mile away.

Lord Of The Bugs/heracross
swords dance
brick break
megahorn
rock slide

This is ok, but you could always make it a Reversaler.

Windfly/dragonite
Aerial Ace
Earthquake/Brick Break
Dragon Dance/Thunder Wave
dragon claw

Scrap Hyper Beam. Put in Aerial Ace over Wing Attack, same power, better accuracy. Replace Outrage with something like Thunder Wave or Dragon Dance. Earthquake and Brick Break are good, solid physical move.

Flying Rocks/aerodactyl
ancient power
Aerial Ace
Earthquake/Steel Wing/Hidden Power of a Physical type/Double Edge if you have the Rock Head ability
Facade/Roar

Pretty much the same thing here. You could put in Facade to trick people who try to Paralize Aerodactyl to bring down it's speed.

well thats my team in a nutshell
constructive critique please

Hoped that helped. Try not to use Hyper Beam or Double Team, a lot of people look down upon them, and Hyper Beam's only useful in exceptional circumstances. Ones that you will most likely will never encounter.

This team is VERY physically based, you may want to switch out some Pokemon that use more Sp. attack than Attack.

 

[aipomkong]

note to people

hyper beam is only feasable on Choice Banded Tauros, as it has such a shitty movepool, it can make use of hyper beam, just before it dies and ****

practically every other pokemon has a good enough movepool to not need hyper beam

@ Exel, hyper beam slaking has been proved as a failure on these boards in multiple arguments so any argument you make about it being good will just not work

 

[chaos952]

Natures? Held items?

hi im a newb from canada. umm this is my emerald team. hope u like it

Bob Da Fish/swampert
ice beam
Earthquake
surfRest
Curse

Muddy Water and Surf are redundant.

Mrs. Tank/blissy
softboiled
Thunder Wave
Aromatherapy
Seismic Toss


as her name implies almost nothing can kill her , my friends wont let me use her.....

Never EVER use evasion moves. If your friends clause any Pokemon that isn't uber, then they are idiots. Keep using Blissey.

WAK IT!!!/marowak/thick club
bonemerang
Swords Dance
double edge
Rock Slide

Bonemerang and Earthquake are redundant.

Lord Of The Bugs/heracross
swords dance
brick break
megahorn
rock slide
i put alot of battle points and money into this beetle, and he rarely lets me down

Works. You can use the Choice Band set, which is Focus Punch over Brick Break, and Facade over Swords Dance. You had better be good at predicting switches though... He'd better have Guts...

Windfly/dragonite
Substitute
Focus Punch
Flamethrower/Thunderbolt
Dragon Claw/Ice Beam

Flying Rocks/aerodactyl
Rock Slide
Earthquake
Aerial Ace
Double-Edge

Choice Band. He'd better have Rock Head.


well thats my team in a nutshell
constructive critique please

10charlimit

 

[S:C]

hi im a newb from canada. umm this is my emerald team. hope u like it

Bob Da Fish/swampert @ Leftovers
ice beam
muddy water
surf
brick break

almost nothing can stand up to this offensive powerhouse, i always save for last

How come you lose to your friend's crappy team then?

Curse
Earthquake
Ice Beam
Rest

It's simple.

Mrs. Tank/blissy @ Leftovers
softboiled
toxic
sing
double team

as her name implies almost nothing can kill her , my friends wont let me use her.....

I could clean this guy any day. You need real help with him.

Softboiled
Aromatherapy
Seismic Toss
Thunder Wave

That would help you win. Wave stuff, recover HP, cure status, and inflict guaranteed damage. It's the standard package.

WAK IT!!!/marowak/thick club
bonemerang
headbutt
double edge
earthquake
dont get hit by him KO anything almost and his rock hed lets him use double edge

Hey, look, Skarmory is coughing. Why would you use both Headbutt and Double Edge on the same set?

Swords Dance
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Double Edge

Swords Dance was the link you were missing. With that, you're gone.

Lord Of The Bugs/heracross @ Leftovers
swords dance
brick break
megahorn
rock slide
i put alot of battle points and money into this beetle, and he rarely lets me down

Your investment was fine. You lack only Focus Punch. If not that, try Brick Break.

Windfly/dragonite @ Leftovers
wing attack
hyper beam
outrage
dragon claw
hes fat and hes proud, this dragon can be a pain in the butt.

He wouldn't if you ever linked up to someone who actually can battle, emphasis on "can."

Substitute
Focus Punch
Flamethrower
Dragon Claw

BoltBeam is also an option over FlameClaw.

Flying Rocks/aerodactyl @ Choice Band
ancient power
wing attack
hyper beam
fire blast
how many metagrosses have fallen to this bird i dont know

How many of these guys would fall to a real Metagross, I don't know.

HP Flying
Rock Slide
Earthquake
Double Edge

That Aerodactyl would own your Aerodactyl any day. Hell, this guy could go right through most of your team.

well thats my team in a nutshell
constructive critique please

Comments are in bold.

 

[Firaga Metagross]

hi im a newb from canada. umm this is my emerald team. hope u like it

Bob Da Fish/swampert
earthquake
rest
surf/ice beam
brick break
almost nothing can stand up to this offensive powerhouse, i always save for last

Mrs. Tank/blissy
softboiled
toxic
scismic toss
double team
as her name implies almost nothing can kill her , my friends wont let me use her.....

WAK IT!!!/marowak/thick club
bonemerang, anti sub. only!!
icy wind, for lowering speed only!!
double edge
earthquake
dont get hit by him KO anything almost and his rock hed lets him use double edge

Lord Of The Bugs/heracross
earthquake
brick break/reversal
megahorn
rock slide
i put alot of battle points and money into this beetle, and he rarely lets me down

Windfly/dragonite
Aerial ace
Earthquake
surf/thunderbolt/flamethrower
dragon claw
hes fat and hes proud, this dragon can be a pain in the butt.

Flying Rocks/aerodactyl
rockslide
aerial ace
earthquake
fire blast
how many metagrosses have fallen to this bird i dont know


well thats my team in a nutshell
constructive critique please

your team needs a little help 8/10

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