*rate my YGO deck

[~Kage Itachi~]

Great Maju Garzettx3
maju garzettx2
redeyes black dr.x1
cyber dragonx3
twin cyber dragonx1
cyber end dragonx1
shadowknight archfiendx2
armed dragon lv.3x1
armed dragon lv.5x1
armed dragon lv.7x1
armed dragon lv.10x1
different dim. dragonx2
darkmaster zorcx1

spells
monster rebornx1
dragons mirrorx2
contract with the darkmasterx1
emergency provisionsx2
pot of greedx1
cold wavex1
level upx3
pot of generosityx2
gamblex2

trap
frozen soulx2
call of the hauntedx1
trap dustshootx1
polymerazationx2

 

[Aquadon]

Dude... You have three Gods (NOT TOURNEY LEGAL) and multiples of BANNED cards (see God Cards). I'd suggest remaking your deck. Try an Armed Dragon deck, as it looks like you might have some good support for it.

Also, is that a LV10 you OWN (in English), or is it just something your hoping to get soon?

 

[Raito]

This deck's not real or legal unless you have Japanese cards and play with your friends.

Drop
2 Monster Reborns
1 Pot of Greed
1 Call of the Haunted

because they are all at one.

Not really good, tell us a theme.

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

theme: Dragon/fiend+misc.spell/trap

yes i got the armed dragon lv.10 from a store i've checked it online to see if it's real or not

also i re did the deck

 

[Aquadon]

theme: Dragon/fiend+misc.spell/trap

yes i got the armed dragon lv.10 from a store i've checked it online to see if it's real or not

also i re did the deck

So, you're saying that it's out already... Could we have a scan? Please?

Also, it's a bit better. I'm guessing this is Traditional, so add a WotBF and Raigeki. Drop the archfiend and Zorc, as fiends+ Dragons= Disaster. Also, you're tribute heavy. Drop REBD and the Garzetts, along with 1 Cyber Dragon. Try a few LV3's and LV5's, and Masked Dragons to speed up the deck. Also, bringing out Twin and End via Poly=bad. Actually now that I look at it, your enitire Spell line up could do with a fine tuning. Same with the Traps (besides CotH). Try this for a deck:

Tributes: 6
Armed Dragon LV10
Armed Dragon LV7 x2
Armed Dragon LV5 x3

Non-Tributes: 12
Armed Dragon LV3 x3
Masked Dragon x2
Twin Headed Behemoth
Spear Dragon x2
Breaker the Magicial Warrior
DDWL
Sangan
Magician of Faith

Spell Cards: 15
Pot of Avarice x2
Dark Hole
Snatch Steal
Level Up! x2
Premature Burial
Book of Moon
Swords of Revealing Light
Level Modulation x2
Heavy Storm
Mystical Space Typhoon
Scapegoat
Brain Control

Traps: 7
Call of the Haunted
Ceasefire
Light of Intervention x2
Sakaretsu Armor x2
Torrential Tribute

That would make a pretty good deck. Could you look at the deck in my sig? Thanks in advance. Also, please post a scan of LV10

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

sorry but wtf is a scan cus me no have a scanner and i like my garzetts

 

[Phaeton]

dude, drop the garzett.

it's a horrible topdeck and a horrible thing to revive =\

plus, it's nothing but a big beatstick...sorta...

 

[Jupetta]

You have 14 level 4+ monsters, and 3 level 4- monsters, do the math about the probability of you actually summoning a monster. Plus this thread goes against the rules, thanks for adding to the countdown.

 

[celticwarrior530]

Um, polymerization isn't a trap.....

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

crap i put it in the wrong place