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[idc47]

I decided to start my own story using sprites as comics. This is the first part of the story I have created, the Region.

what do you think?

 

[zuloon]

Save as a portable network graphic next time.

 

[DanK84]

It's pretty good, but the island in the top-left corner is way too small.

 

[xXFallenButterflyXx]

It's okay but the colors are dull and looks pixified and the yellowish part that conects the dots looks as if you made it in Paint. Did you?

Overall:

8.6/10

~;151; Fallen

 

[~Flareon~]

I liked the region map, it looks very cool. Good job!

 

[idc47]

thanks, the island in the top left is for a secret in the story that isnt revealed yet

 

[DanK84]

Oh, okay then, that explains it. ^^

 

[blazemxx]

Looks OK, but the traile needs to be transparent instead of one color.