Rayquaza777's Sprite Thread 2.0

[Rayquaza777]

Well, this is where I will post my sprites when I make more. All I have now is my first EVER try at pixel art. Please tell me what I can do better if I can.

Some Revamps I did:

 

[Yami Ryu]

That's not pixelart really, you just STRETCHED d/p sprites into larger images, did some 'fixing' up and thought, ah-ha! Pixel art!

<- Pixel over, but the same concept as Pixel art, it's not a stretched image you badly recolor to try and make look better. It looks like the real deal. Not horribly warped.

 

[zipzap713]

they don't look very good 4 pixel art. it doesn't flow.

 

[spareux]

Everybody has sooo copied my thread's name. >.<

Btw Thread v.2 > Thread 2.0/II. And don't you forget it.

As Yami Ryu said, they're not really pixel arts... just enlarged and slightly cleaned versions of the D/P sprites. The outlining and some shading is bad.

 

[Chaotic Pink]

They're not pixel art they are stretched sprites that have been edited to look a little better.

The outlines are messy and very shaky and the shading is quite bad.

 

[Rayquaza777]

Well, hey. I told you it was my first try. You guys have actually helped me by telling what to do better. So, now I can try some real pixel art. Thanks.

 

[Diaruga_Leader]

With the Pidgeot make some more shades for instance 1.Highlight 2.Base 3.Shades 4.Outline

 

[PokeJosh]

The outlines need some real fixing, and so does the shading.

 

[jirachiex201]

Wierd colors on Ekans, and outlines too dark/thick on Pigeotto/Pigeot (sp?, I can't tell the difference)

 

[Rayquaza777]

Thanks guys. For some reason, I couldn't get the beak right. I tried and tried, but just couldn't get it. The out lines know I screwed up on, and as you can tell, this is my first time and I'm not very good. But thanks for the critism, as I will need it to make better sprites.

 

[Rayquaza777]

Ok. I got some revamps up, so please critque them. The pixel art is too hard for me... I'll stick to what I know best.