REALLY LONG TITLE NAME (Pixel Art Inside)

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Before you ask, no, I haven't returned.
I am here merely to display some of the art I have been doing recently.
I want comments, constructive criticism and no number ratings, thank you.

Pachirisu

Cherimu

Parukia

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[Sasuke]

Looks really good! Nice job Opportunity! *gives you a cookie*

 

[Your-CLONE]

looks great! you could touch it up a bit though.

 

[Nintendo_6444]

The white part on Pachirisus tail looks a little flat, other than that they are great!

 

[blueguy]

Pachirisu's shape is very blocky... It's quite poorly outlined. Cherimu is fine, I suppose, but the both of them are really weirdly shaded. They lack an outline, and in some places are far too detailed to look nice... Overall, they're just choppy and mediocre. The poses also disturb me, as they are obviously not their own. Using official poses is just like copying a drawing from somewhere and saying that you have talent because you were able to draw it.

 

[ellie]

Pachirisu's spikes look very dark compared to its tail. Also, its outlines seem too light.

The pink on Cherimu's body (not the leaf things) seems flat, and its right(our right) ball thing on its head doesn't look circular enough.

Great job, keep it up!

 

[LannyZ4444]

I'm going to aggree with all of the above comments, but I have my own. The tooth on our little electric squirrel friend is completely shaded in black. I would consider using a lighter shade of grey to outline the tooth (this will work because its mouth is shaded darkly in that area). Other than that, it looks okay to me.

On Cherimu, its left orb above its left eye is not as circular as it probably should be. This is extremely picky, but it would make it look more complete, considering all of the other circle shapes on its body are nice and round (well done!)

Overall, the shading is fantastic, along with the scheme of colors and outline choices. Very nice, my friend.

 

[Rapiido]

The idea of pixel art is usually to make the sugimori art/whatever to look as close to an enlarged sprite as possible. Yours looks like you did watercolours. I just think you used way too many colours. And yes I agree with what almost everyone else said. They're good, but not perfect.

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

I added Parukia.

Oh and people, this is my way. I have chosen a nice blend between spriting and watercolour, I think it works well, and so do a lot of other people. So don't comment on how it could be a sprite, comment on what it is.

 

[Rapiido]

Allright, sorry about that. Didn't know it was your "style" XD

Parukia... looks too dark.. unless it's how you wanted it. But Parukia is white.. so I dunno.

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

I can make it lighter if you would prefer.

And no problems, i'll give it a go now, I still have the the pixel version.

 

[The Emerald King]

OMG! There's that dang squirrel creature again! The yellow on cherimu looks a little dark to me, but overall it's very nice.

 

[Lunachu]

They're great. Parukia seems a bit dark to me, though...

 

[Chelc]

Pachirisu looks so adorable! So does Cherimu. I love your style, like you said, it comes out great.

I guess I'm going to agree with the comments on Parukia being too dark. If it were just a little bit lighter, it'd be perfect. Keep up the awesome work!

 

[Mumage]

They generally look great to me, but Parukia is maybe a little too dark. ._.

 

[tamayo]

*Jaw drops* One word: Wow.

 

[Shadow_Fox]

They look great, though original poses would'nt hurt and Parukia's claws would use a bit of shading. I admire your style.

~

 

[TheTurquoiseTauros!]

I think they have a certain depth in them that complements the color and shading very well. Over all they are extremely briliant! You are Briliant!

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

Thank you for the compliments.

Now I have brightened Parukia by one shade. Expect some more art for today, maybe later, I found my Pokemon Emerald cartridge xD

 

[Chris]

I changed the title of the topic. It was stretching out the forums with the Japanese text. :|