Nirarekdan
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Sorry I'm late! I'll edit this post later- don't have time to read the chappie or write. Be right back!
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that free of the plentiful rocky dividers that made the mountain cave into something of a labyrinth.
to where a hole existed in the in the stone partition.
Na’ir was left stumbling as he scrambled to maintain the balance as he tried to turn around.
giving Na’ir only a few seconds to respond and block the incoming attack.
“I, well –“
“But …“
wonder exactly how he had managed to make a fool of himself
It had been a night like this one.
Anyone, Castor was quite sure
that made him to rise to his paws and follow through his idea that day
as well as made him more determined to prove him wrong.
flowing through his veins for a few a precious moments
Castor struggled to rise to his fee
“I’ve made mistakes, Castor, many times,” Pollux replied, his jade eyes shining with sudden, cunning light, “I just don’t let anyone see me.”
Pollux's character is obviously very specific. I hate him, Pollux the pillock, I wish he'd get off his high horse and say something useful once in a while. That's not the the way everyone is taking Pollux, but people who act like they're so smart they're better than everyone else automatically piss me off, so be careful not to overdo that part of his character, if you want your audience to like him. I related to Castor a lot more, however, because of his arrogant, self-conceited twin and the way he acted in the flashback bit. Pollux is obviously not as wise as he makes out to be; or maybe, and I suspect this is the case, this is simply the Absol way.
Fingers crossed castor breaks the mould.
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