Returning: Dawn of the journey

[Hiro xd]

According to Beco, he says we had many fans for this comic. Well he's bee bugging me to start this comic once again. Well I did and here are some rules:
1)No spamming if you dont want this post to die once again
(approching this mainly to:[SPOIL]Bagonbaby, tanhiny...[/SPOIL]

Epsiodes:
Intro
Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Episode 9
Episode 10
Episode 11
Episode 12
Episode 13
Episode 14
Episode 15
Episode 16

Newest:

Credits:
Beco for making this comic work, making the images of the comic
Beco for alot of spirits
The spirit resource
The VGA maps
Thaanks to avatar for many Charsets


I need loads of charecters for this to work so if you didnt get a chace in tjp get one here.

Thanks beco and the fans!

 

[blueaquadog]

Good to see that its back but your missing comic 14.

 

[Hiro xd]

I was wating for replies before posting:
Episode 14

Thank you all for the warm welcoming back! Well lets hope people will follow the main rule no spamming!

Grenar maps coming soon

 

[-Yoshi-]

It's back!
Nice episode by the way, I like Kyle being in the tent and letting the girl out!
Now just Living In Seacape is missing.
Now my Espeon is happy;196;
Can't wait to see me in the comic.
Pura Vida Hiro XD (Yes,I'm from Costa Rica!!!)

 

[Goatman56]

Okay this isn't all that great. A pokemon adventure comic (how creative), some grammar mistakes, how has Charmander still not fainted even though he has been through 3 battles with pokemon, text under the panel (how not lazy of you), pokemon are to big compared to people, everything else is kind of okay but when Charmander used that tail whip attack, that to me is considered godmodding. You get a 4/10.

 

[Dark Venusaur]

Too many battles but liked how you made the script like comic.

;003;DV;003;

 

[Hiro xd]

Episode 15
heres episode 15!

 

[-Yoshi-]

Funny episode, I liked how kyle looks tony (barely can see it)
And the effect in Kyle's eyes when he sees him.
I wonder how they'll arrive to Grenar...

 

[Flaze]

Lol, that tony reminds me of Tony's Pizza, which is why he may be Italian.

Personally, some of the story reminds me of the Anime, where Kyle rushed and only got 1 pokemon on the table.

The comic is great, but how come when Prof.Oak said the Poke'dex haven't come yet, i can see two pokedex laying right on the table behind him?

 

[Hiro xd]

They dont have the complete data yet! Thanks flaze and yoshi!

 

[blueaquadog]

Nice comic! I would be freaked to if I woke up and saw someon in my face.

P.S. Delete some of your PMs, I tried PMing you and I couldn't.

 

[Flaze]

I realize Tony wears a Shopkeeper's Uniform.

And he asked Kyle to go to the Poke'mart.

Does he work there?

 

[Hiro xd]

Good news: the good news is here episode 16:
Episode 16

Bad news: I'll be gone for around a week to the soccer playoff so no updating and please no spamming

 

[-Yoshi-]

Another funny episode, I love them.
I personally liked Kyle comin' in and out so fast of the because he lost.

 

[Matt Silver]

Hello Hiro XD. Nice to see your comic has been remade. Keep at it.
Liek the new eps I do but I dont see why there has to be ANOTHER battle.

 

[Beco]

There won't be any battles for a while. I can assure you.
Now first a few travel episodes, then maybe a gym battle.

 

[Rikori]

Aww.. >.<

Havent replied here for awhile and decided to revive the topic! <3

Comic 16, was... err.. not very good, still you have the spirit, (I had it, after a week it was gone.. >.<) I never give something below 3, (I do if it crosses the line, (when someone uses leetspeak and totally no grammar, + with bad recolors. Devin is a BAD recolor, but.. WHO said he's based on Gold in the GSC adventures? xD) If you see any spam in this post please report it.



/First 12 yers old boy, with propper grammar... *cough, not cough*

 

[tanhony]

ah, I remember what happened to this comic, I am sorry.