Revamps by Ruzzy

[miken park]

Here they are. Please note I want PROPER C+C, not any crap.

 

[jakepwnsjoo]

Meh... I didn't know you were 'Famous Last Words'... XD

Um... Zubat's wing seems to merge with his cheek, so you may want to fix that a little.

Dragonair just seems too small unless you're revamping FRLG style, Corsola's face, like it's mouth nees to be revamped (his smile is kinda... meh) and Aipom's hand is from the old style, not the new style...

I hope that's enough crit. XD

 

[POKErUsAm]

Ha, I don't think they are bad or anything but I think you should make the white boxes around them smaller. I hope you know how to do that. I would suggest that you make them as small as you could without cutting off some of the sprite.

 

[jakepwnsjoo]

Ha, I don't think they are bad or anything but I think you should make the white boxes around them smaller. I hope you know how to do that. I would suggest that you make them as small as you could without cutting off some of the sprite.

Okay, seriously, how is that going to help her improve her sprites at all? I mean, it's a little silly to act like you are trying to help her. You probably didn't even take a look at her sprites, which was the whole point of this thread.

 

[miken park]

Yes, Famous Last Words is I.
I have a WBG program, but I just can't be bothered WBGin them. They're not major sprites, why should I?
And Jake, you replying to him telling him that ain't helping me either. o.0

Zubat, better?
http://i1.*******.com/4bzjzaa.png

 

[oRaNgE~1337]

Not really. Maybe make the whole face have a whole outline. The wings aren't shaded and the ears seem a bit deformed, which might be because they bend.

I don't think he was talking about a transparency program, or a WBG thing as you silly people call it. I think he means the boxes are too big.

 

[pnoiboi]

Second zubat is flawless.. I thought it was a ru/sa sprite! I like the dragonair too. The first zubat and aipon though, need some work.. Aipom doesnt look right.

 

[Raichao]

corsola needs more outline shading, it's got too much black and Zubat needs more shading on the wing membraes (spelling?)

 

[Mex]

They need improving, but I think they are very good. ;201-m;

 

[miken park]

Second zubat is flawless.. I thought it was a ru/sa sprite! I like the dragonair too. The first zubat and aipon though, need some work.. Aipom doesnt look right.

The second Zubat is the D/P sprite. o.0
The corsola is D/P style, I copied the outline shading on it, it's in dark colours. And how do my sprites need improving? Just saying that it needs improving isn't helping me, you know.
I made one more, any way.
http://i3.*******.com/2ymdk3m.png
The sprite on the right is the D/P sprite, for any confusions.
Hmm.. ******* is having issues, sorry if it doesn't show up.
And who the hell rated my thread 1 star? Surely I'm not that bad.

 

[Kalavinka]

The Rattata's belly is shaded too darkly (too much dark brown shade at the bottom imo). The tooth also looks a bit too big, but maybe that's just me.

--;482;

 

[oRaNgE~1337]

You seem to use the dark purple shade alot more on the revamp than there is on the D/P sprite. Maybe you should use the Emerald or FR/LG colours.

 

[TiagoGR]

They are nice made, they almost have no shading mistakes. But your outline could be better. In most of their parts (especially in Corsola) you used too much black outline. Try making them lighter. Also, the first Zubat's mouth should have a darker outline. Maybe some changes could make them better too, like making Dragonair's face less geometrical or Corsola's mouth rounder. But in overall they are quite nice.

 

[spareux]

God it's been ages since I've seen you about here.

The second Zubat is nicely done, but the first could use some more editing to the ears imo.

The shading on Dragonair's mouth bugs me a bit. And the outlining of Aipom's toes.

Don't notice anything up with the other ones. Altogether a pretty gj.

Whoever rated this thread so low is obviously a mime.

I didn't know anyone actually used the star-rating system here anymore.

 

[miken park]

Fixed zubat again
http://i3.*******.com/2dumtk2.png
I'll work on the revamp of Ratatta.
I do know that corsola's out line is dark, but it's how the sprite is.

http://i12.*******.com/2dvimap.png
Wartortle.

 

[kizaman]

i like the wartortle but its right eye is too low

 

[Belgian Pokemaster]

They all seem to be recolours of old pokemon with new pokemon colours.
You should try changing parts of them,or add more details

 

[oRaNgE~1337]

Wartortle's ears seem different. Maybe get rid of that odd line inside the ear. It would be nice if you could give it toes too.

 

[miken park]

Wartortle, fixed?
http://i18.*******.com/2due5oo.png
Yellow Flareon
I overdid the dithering, didn't I?
http://i12.*******.com/3zi3czd.png

Electrode.
http://i12.*******.com/4hkx547.png

 

[sausagewalls]

the zubat is kinda weird but i think the rest of them were well done.....the ubat wing doesnt look right though ??