Rheine's Newbie Mixes Sprites

[Rheine]

Ok, i know my sprites does'nt good, but please don't be so mean to me,, okay?

 

[Koneko]

they are good but they kind of chopy, I can't exactly put my finger on it but there is something wrong with the lines Gardicevoir looks realy good though

 

[BuffyBoy]

shadow cat is right they have no flow to them... It looks like you just threw them together. You need to make them blend and look natural change the colors so the go together.

That Blissy and Beautifly mix is really good though

 

[Sabaku_no_Gaara]

I love the Gardevoir/Slowking, but the swampert...ugh.

 

[Charmander & Cyndaquil]

i son't know is are you accept a request or not but can you mix Charmander & Cyndaquil? swampert is bad but the overals is good. keep on the good work

 

[Master Spriter]

Hello. I am new. Before I start talking, can you please tell me how to:
1)Post custom avatars
2)Create signatures with pictures
3)Post images on the forums (eg. sprites)
4)How to post little messages under the name ( such as 'Rainbow Trainer' underneath 'Charmander and Cyndaquil)
Please tell me soon!

 

[castiboy]

Hello. I am new. Before I start talking, can you please tell me how to:
1)Post custom avatars
2)Create signatures with pictures
3)Post images on the forums (eg. sprites)

Hello. I am new. Before I start talking, can you please tell me how to:
1)Post custom avatars
2)Create signatures with pictures
3)Post images on the forums (eg. sprites)
4)How to post little messages under the name ( such as 'Rainbow Trainer' underneath 'Charmander and Cyndaquil)
Please tell me soon!

PS: sorry about the double post, that was an accident.

PPS: I just saw the request. I shall attempt it!

man... READ STICKY POSTS ON THE NEWBIES SECTION, AND TRIPLE POSTING FOR ESCUSING YOU FOR DOUBLE POSTING AND THEN CUADRIPOST (4.. HOWEVER YOU SAY IT)... STOP XXXXPOSTING!!! THAT'S CALLED SPAM.
please.... PLEASE!!! read the sticky threads on the newbies section, isn't that logic!?


uh..!!! well...

on topic: your sprites look that nice for a begginer, but you need to keep working, make them look more natural, work on blending recoloring and shading so they look as one pokemon and not a mix. other than that... WHAT!! WHAT'S THAT SWAMPERT MIX!?!?!? it looks so horrible... try not to resize parts when mixing, at least untill you improve a little more, and put things on the right place, where they look the best, sometimes you have to mirror them to get nice results. but you're starting that good, keep spriting!

 

[Master Spriter]

Sorry, I won't do it again. Can someone answer my questions then?
Charmander and Cyndaquil, I just noticed your messages. Thanx
A post dissapeared (one just before my 'uploads?).How did that happen?

 

[goddessly_blessed]

Errr...they're okay, I guess. XD; They really do need a little more work. I like the Blissey though. <3

 

[Veritaserum]

Ee..rather choppy looking. Though they arn't all bad. The gardevior looks pretty good. I'm sure if you keep practicing you'll becoem a pro. ^.-

 

[Guraena]

Ehhh, they're really cut-and-pasteish. But you're just a beginner. *flashback when she first started* Oh boy... XD

But, anyway, you should really try to blend them together. Like the Doduo one looks like you just copied and pasted parts from Bellossom and Flygon.

PS - The Swampert one freaks me out, lol. =x

 

[Rheine]

thx for everyone, i will trying to redo them,
C&C: I will try, but who the base? Charmeander or Cydaquil?

 

[castiboy]

Sorry, I won't do it again. Can someone answer my questions then?
Charmander and Cyndaquil, I just noticed your messages. Thanx
A post dissapeared (one just before my 'uploads?).How did that happen?

can someone answer your question!?!?!?!?!? man.... i said READ STICKY THREADS ON THE NEWBIE'S SECTION, you understand it!? really, i know you're new, but you have to "read the instructions" before starting, sometimes you can make it without them, but this isn't one of those times, if you really can get it, "read the instructions". c'mon... i'll tell you:
1st: go to a hoster (a website that hostes your pics on it). go to photobucket.com to open an account or to imageshack.us to upload images without an account, but you'll need to save the images url someway not to lose them.
2nd: posting images, when on a forum use the

, you replace the *URL* by the picture's url, exemple: http:// www. photobucket.com/albums/*xperson*/this picture.gif

if that's not enought... then GO TO THE NEWBIES SECTION!!


now... on topic:
keep working on your sprites, and please, make your best when blending because if you don't then it's useless to make a nice outline our shading, blending is the most important.

yeah, that was short comparing to the non-on topic comments, XP

 

[Master Spriter]

Hi,me again! Can I show some of my sprites here, or start a new thread? Anyway, here's Charmy's (Charmander and Cyndaquils) request:

YEESSS!!! I got the images to work!
On Topic:Not bad for a first attempt, but my main querie is that parts of outlines are missing on most,or way too light, so fill them in with the appropiate, fairly dark colour, alright? Some of these are also just copy/paste quick work. Some are good though, like the blue gardevoir, but the head shell should have been edited to fit gardevoir's head.
PS: HOLY CRAP!? Goddessly blessed, how did you make them!? What program do you use? I'm making do with paint.
PPS:Be aware please though,Rheine, that this is supposed to be HELPFUL critisism. I see a great spriter in the making!
PPPS:Thanx, Charmy ;004; ;155; , for the helpful info!

 

[Rheine]

For Master Spriter: I think ayou should start a new thread

And thanks for everyone, i'll keep trying



i made a new one! i mean 4! i'm know mukofet left arm not good, i will try remake that

 

[Koneko]

they are better but they still look a bit choppy I don't know why they just do...maby someelse could help me

 

[RandomCharizard]

HEH......There pretty good*waits for other critics to come in*but I found something intresting on your sprites at the top: On the buttom of the top sprites there is a lapras mix its your best one if you spend more time mixing intead of looking at othewrs*puches himself in the face*you can be good,now I have to do that

 

[Master Spriter]

Yeah, those new sprites are alot better, but the eyes don't look right on the bannete/wobbuffet and shuppet/wynaut mixes.But things don't always go to plan. Good job on 'liquefying' wobbuffets arm on the muk mix.
To castiboy: No offense, but you DO realise that I actually managed to post that picture before you told me how, but thanks anyway
I'll call my new thread 'Master Spriters homemade sprites and requests'
PS: I use paint, just incase you want 'special effects'

 

[Ex_Maikel]

There are'nt good at all
You need to draw things, not copy and paste...

 

[BlackCat]

Some are really good (The ninetails/delcatty) some are AWFUL (the Swampert) but I think you can get much better with time.