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Rise of the so-called Newborn God.

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AzerWrath

「深弾幕結界 -夢幻泡影-」
Even before, we sought peace and divine suranity... now it is gone.
Elemental Lieutendents, I call upon you.
Show the humans we are more then just forgotten ruins.
Destory the New-Born God!....................
(P.S) If u are a human, reading this, prepare to be dissipated in a matter of secends.


For year within the past, we have served humans as they have done the same, all bowing under the Elemental Gods, our stability ruled over the universe... Untill time changed, the humans forgot us, misused our power for their own needs, now war has come and they beg at their so-called Gods, Jesus? He may be stuck between their minds. They ponder in the darkness, seaking hope...And, "hope" came. It came in Black, not so a resemblance to God...

A so called NewBorn God arised from the humans, he gave them new technologies, ignored our contributions to their race, saying that Jesus was near, he will enlighting everyone, he made sacrifices of many towns and made a stone of "Eternal Protection" He fled soon afterwards... Some say he was Jesus, and he wold come down again at the time of need... even thou the stone had dissipated long before. The humans than realised that to please the God, they had to will all the unbelievers. The humans ransacked every house, if it did not have a small altar, the people in the house had to be killed.

Years later, he returned. With a cruel, black look in his eyes... A few humans became Loyal to us, the Elementals. as the human race became more medevil with shotguns and rockets, such...Insolance. This "God" made magic come back from ancient times, Dark magic, to temper and change humans. They made monsters, creatures who serve only the Darkest of minds. Their eyes grew more into the endless hole every single day. Humanoids, Dragonoids, Alienoids, even were made. and in this time of crisis... We must strike back...Take what is ours, Stop the maddness growing! We once sought only peace, now look! This God is clearly one of the Old, making Quajis out of Humans....

Take my guidence, Elementalists and Elementals.
We will rule back. And teach these puny minds that we...are...their true...lords......
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Signing up: Chose between quite a number of Elemental Types.
If you want to be a Elementalist, chose two Aspects.

List:
Void---lives in the shadows, devours specters, some wear armor.
Base stats: 7/15
Fire---Eats things burned, high damage rate and healing rate. Wears glowing bracelets...... Base Stats: 8/15
Water---Heal others, transmute creatures, summon lesser Water elementals, create waves..... Base Stats: 11/15
Earth---Turn rock to mud, or the other way around. create food and water, create living wall..... Base Stats: 9/15
Air---Create Air wave, create lightning, reduce oxygen, mental barrier.
Base Stats: 7/15
Wind---Tonados, lightning braces, Hurricane shakles, Empowers allies and absorb power from foes..... Base Stats: 8/15
Poison---High life, damage absorbtion, able to create smaller Cryoas
Base Stats: 5/10
Light---Create Sunburst, Locate opject, Locate Path, Flight and See Future
Base Stats: 4/8
Arcane:???
Ice--- Make Ice crystals, Absorb energy, Ice field, Change weather.
Dream:???
Primal:???
Nature---call swarms of treants, excelerate plant groth, call plague
Bog---Mixes with Tar---Makes Living Destructor
Tar---Mixes with Bog---Makes Living Devourer
Sound:???

How to sign up:

Name: ( You should know by now.)
Age: ( 100-500 for Elementals 14-17 for Elementalists)
Appearance: ( Based on how u look and type)
Type: (from list)
Ranking: (chose from X-A)
Abilitys: (Based on Statistics and Type, not too Uber, you can chose things not listed on the list.)
Special Companion: (I will chose based on Type, RP sample, and Power and Ranking)
Personailty: (You should know, 4 sentences)
History: (Same, 4 sentences)
Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraths.)


Lieutendents for choseing: Ragnaros, the Fire Lord, Murur, The Sound Aspect
Al'hur, the Frost aspect.

My Sign up: Coming Soon
 
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Psychic

Really and truly
Um...what?

It soudns like this is based off another fandom or something - in which case the entire thing needs to be described in your own words - but either way, it is incredibly confusing right now and doesn't make very much sense.



For year within the past, we have served humans as they have done the same, all bowing under the Elemental Gods, our stability ruled over the universe... Untill time changed, the humans forgot us, misused our power for their own needs, now war has come and they beg at their so-called Gods, Jesus? He may be stuck between their minds.
First of all, just where and when is this story taking place? Is it in today's American society, or an alternate universe of medival times? What's going on in terms of government and religion?

Who is this "we"? Who/what are these Elemental Gods? Who are they, how many are there, what powers do they have, is there a religion following them? We need background information.

If the humans forgot "us," how could they know of these powers and use them in the first place? What did the humans do with them - HOW did they misuse them?

What do you mean, Jesus is "stuck between their minds"? WHo IS Jesus in this universe? How does Jesus exist at the same time as these gods?


They ponder in the darkness, seaking hope...And, "hope" came. It came in Black, not so a resemblance to God... A so called NewBorn God arised from the humans, he gave them new technologies, ignored our contributions to their race, saying that Jesus was near, he will enlighting everyone, he made sacrifices of many towns and made a stone of "Eternal Protection"
Was this NewBorn God a human? What was he like? What did he do? What did he give to them? Were they very welcoming? What is this stone he made - how did he make it, what does it do, who does it help, where was it kept?


He fled soon afterwards... Some say he was Jesus, and he wold come down again at the time of need... even thou the stone had dissipated long before.
Why did he flee? Why did people say he was Jesus? What exactly happened to the stone and what do you mean, it dissapeared before? Before what?



The humans than realised that to please the God, they had to will all the unbelievers. The humans ransacked every house, if it did not have a small altar, the people in the house had to be killed.
An alter? An alter to whom? To what? WHO was doing all this ransacking? WHO were the victims?


Years later, he returned. With a cruel, black look in his eyes... A few humans became Loyal to us, the Elementals.
Why did they suddenly like these Elemental people? What's the difference between the Elementals and the Elemental Gods? How do they know of their existance at all - supposedly, every single person alive loves Jesus now because anyone who didn't was killed. :/


as the human race became more medevil with shotguns and rockets, such...Insolance.
Guns and rockets are the exact OPPOSITE of "medival."


This "God" made magic come back from ancient times, Dark magic, to temper and change humans. They made monsters, creatures who serve only the Darkest of minds. Their eyes grew more into the endless hole every single day. Humanoids, Dragonoids, Alienoids, even were made. and in this time of crisis... We must strike back...Take what is ours, Stop the maddness growing! We once sought only peace, now look! This God is clearly one of the Old, making Quajis out of Humans....
What is Dark magic? How does it work? What does it do? Why were these monsters made? What's the point in them? What are Humanoids, Dragonoids and Alienoids? Who is "we"? What the heck is Quajis?



What are Elementalists? What are Aspects? How do you become one/gain one? Why are gone elementals left blank? What the heck are these base stats for?


What kinds of names do people have in thsi time/place?
Why are Elementals so old? How do their ages work? Why do these Elementalists have to be teenagers, rather than trained adult fighters, which would be ten times more practical?
What are the rankings? How does this system work?
What can these companions be?
What kidns of histories should RPers have? It doesn't help if you tell us nothing about the world itself.
Who the heck are these lieutenants?




This is nowhere near good enough for an RP. Nothing is explained or described, everything is vague, and it sounds like some fandom you just didn't bother explaining.

If you want to go through with this RP, try to answer the questions I have raised, and try to be thorough in your explanations.

Please be sure to really go through what I said and read the RPG Rules.

~Psychic
 
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