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Rocket's Revolt

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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
k, everyone, I've decided to try make my first Sprite Comic. I'm not the best, so give any advice you can think of!

Comic 1: Acceptance
Comic 2: In Danger
Comic 3: Escape and Realization
Comic 4: Taking Leave
Comic 5: Classified Information
Credit and Recognition:
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Ratiosu381
Chloemew4ever
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In the works.

UPDATE:Comic 5 has been slightly changed, but the change will somewhat affect the story. Make sure to check it!
 
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Brandon-kun

lalalalalalalalalala
If this is your first? But anyway yeah it is pretty good but mabye try and make it bigger so poeple could read it. I read it was good!
 
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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
In case you guys don't know, if you hold your mouse over the image for a few seconds, an enlarge button will appear. If that doesn't work, I'll change my font size.
 
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Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
Kitsune said:
In case you guys don't know, if you hold your mouse over the image for a few seconds, an enlarge button will appear. If that doesn't work, I'll change my font size.
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Yeah, it works. I don´t understand your plot, maybe I´m a bit slow
 
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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
I was gonna quit for the night, but since you guys kinda like it, I'll make Comic 3. ^.^

To Blaze Dragon: You aren't slow, (I don't think...) the plot hasn't really developed yet.You can obviously tell it's going somewhere, though. ^.^
 
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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
NarutoUzumaki94 said:
If this is your first? But anyway yeah it is pretty good but mabye try and make it bigger so poeple could read it. I read it was good!
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Minus Lamentations, which wasn't in anyway correct, yes, this is my first sprite comic. Why do you ask?
 
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Torkoal

What? Exactly
i understand it just fine and i can read it perfectly. good work! keep it up!
 
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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
Even though it was directed toward someone else, you still could've given advice
<_<
>_>
Oh, well. I have a tight schedule, so the next few comics will be up sometime between now and next Sunday.
 
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Chloemew4ever

Eh.
Pretty good so far, but I think it could be further improved if you edited the character's expressions a little in certain places. For example, in Comic 2, you could edit Gary's expression so he actually looks like someone's just attacked him. =3
 
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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
Chloemew4ever said:
Pretty good so far, but I think it could be further improved if you edited the character's expressions a little in certain places. For example, in Comic 2, you could edit Gary's expression so he actually looks like someone's just attacked him. =3
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Ok, I'll give that a shot, thanks. ^.^
 
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Kitsune

This Place is Death.
w00t, comic 4 is up. Oh, and to let everyone know, comic 5 is when something actually starts to happen. (Something important, that is.)
 
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Chloemew4ever

Eh.
Nice, I look forwards to the next comic. ^^ Something else you could try is making the border of the speech bubbles a little less thick, and the same for the... tails? (I dunno what they're called x3 You know, the bit that points to the character who's saying it.. o.o) That should help to neaten it up a little.

And I believe you can double post if you've got an update...
 
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