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RPG School for Beginners
- Thread starter Lady Myuu
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Sorry, I've been quite busy lately. I'll grade a couple more sign ups.
Overall, I would grade this a B. Despcrition just needs alittle adding on and Bulbasuars' personality.
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For now, I have to grade this a D. I don't think Aipom was one of the pokemon you were allowed to start with. That's pretty much the only reason for the D. Change that, and you'll probably end up with a B.
I'll get to the forgotten sign ups soon, I promise.
Fine.
Nice. Lenghty is good.
Not bad but just to add, what are the t-shirt and vest like?
Tis good.
Not bad but the personality could use one or two more sentences.
Tis good.
Overall, I would grade this a B. Despcrition just needs alittle adding on and Bulbasuars' personality.
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Tis Fine.
If you did it like the personality you edited for me in the ToS RPG, you'd be ok.
Tis fine.
Tis fine.
I love the Totody. ^^
Good but was Aipom one of the pokemon you were allowed to start with?
For now, I have to grade this a D. I don't think Aipom was one of the pokemon you were allowed to start with. That's pretty much the only reason for the D. Change that, and you'll probably end up with a B.
I'll get to the forgotten sign ups soon, I promise.
Ah my friend i do have patience but it has been days, and grading normally needs asap replying, but i understand that he has been busy so it is fine but there is no need for you to start kissing up.
And i am sorry for my irotated attitude but i am having a terrible couple of days.
ok sorry i didnt notice that there where pokemon i had to chose from
lol ill go check now^^EDIT: oh i see i thought that you had to pick one of the type pokemon and then the 2nd pokemon could be whatever you want so i will change it to vulpix ^^
Type: Vulpix
Name: Pixie
Gender: Female
Personality: Vulpix is a hyper active pokemon and loves using its flire spin attack to heat things up a bit. If things get too quite for its liking it will make things more exciting by showing off one of its attacks. She loves being paid alot of attention to and being pamperd and fights for jamies attention with his toto.
I hope that is better ^^
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Lady Myuu
Damsel mostly Stressed.
I am sorry I got a life and can not come to everyoes becking call. People better stop going off topic >>';
Jay star, don't rush us. Chi is new and has a life outside of these forums just like I do. You really don't have any right to rush us on any of it as we are doing it FOR YOU.
Thunderstar, yes post it in here. I will be grading all samples.
Jay star, don't rush us. Chi is new and has a life outside of these forums just like I do. You really don't have any right to rush us on any of it as we are doing it FOR YOU.
Thunderstar, yes post it in here. I will be grading all samples.
I know but as i said when it takes days to reply and im not just talking for me im talking about others, i am ok with there being a delay, and i am sorry for snapping about it the other day but as i said i was having an awful couple of days and was in a mega bad mood. And getting more graders was just a suggestion not a means of rushing i said it in a way i shouldnt have and i apologise.
Wow, this is overdue, and I mean just on my part.
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Overall, I'd probably give this a B+. Don't know if it was a plot hole in his history, but everything seem pretty good. ^^
Overall, I'd grade this a B-. You got everything down for the most part, but you can still improve a bit.
Finally, done with grading everything. x.x
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Tis Fine
That's a nice personality. ^^ Reminds me of me. Sort of.
What color is "Dark" for the eyes? otherwise, tis fine.
Maybe you can add how he got to Kanto? Unless that would be in your first sample. Otherwise, its good.
Tis good.
Tis fine.
Overall, I'd probably give this a B+. Don't know if it was a plot hole in his history, but everything seem pretty good. ^^
Tis fine.
What is the side that you rarely see of him like?
So green XD Just to add, what kind of footwear does he have?
Need a bit more detail. How was his father killed? What was he doing at that time?
I guess its ok. Maybe if you can think of anything else, add it, but ok otherwise.
Tis ok.
Overall, I'd grade this a B-. You got everything down for the most part, but you can still improve a bit.
Finally, done with grading everything. x.x
John's Knight
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Ok, I edited my post for a re-grade. Then, lesson 2 =D
EDIT - erm...hello?
EDIT - erm...hello?
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Name: Dante Chambers
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personality: Dante is down-to-earth, friendly, and caring. He will try his best to assist whoever needs it. He does not necessarily go around as a crusader, helping every old lady trying to cross the street, but he will help if asked, because it is in his nature. He has a relaxed, rather reserved demeanor, but good leadership skills, which helps him command his Pokemon.
Description: Dante is tall and rangy, about 5'7" and 125 pounds. His hair is chestnut brown, with no discernible highlights. His eyes are light blue, and very calm, as if nothing you say will affect him. He usually wears charcoal black jeans, with a red long sleeved shirt, and a black leather vest with studs. He only wears black leather boots because they aren't affected by the elements he endures.
History: Dante had a regular upbringing. He lived in Fuchsia City, but traveled back and forth from Celadon on his bike. One long boring summer, he took a summer course on Pokemon Battling Strategies in Pallet, and learned that he had an above average aptitude for battling, because of his quick thinking, and innovative offensive strategies. Now, it is another long, monotonous holiday, and he decided to take the new Pokemon League Challenge. He plans to continue his education via the PC until he finishes.
Pokemon: Ponyta and Staryu
Type: Ponyta
Name: Ponyta
Gender: Female
Personality: Ponyta is the opposite of her trainer. She shows the greatest amount of enthusiasm possible during and after battles. She warmed up to Dante very quickly. She even allows him to ride her, but he sticks to walking most of the time.
Type:Staryu
Name: Staryu
Gender: None
Personality: Staryu is wise and serene. It is a strong battler, but it prefers more relaxing pursuits, such as moonbathing and swimming. It has innate Psychic powers that it is trying to implement into battling, but those will have to wait...
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personality: Dante is down-to-earth, friendly, and caring. He will try his best to assist whoever needs it. He does not necessarily go around as a crusader, helping every old lady trying to cross the street, but he will help if asked, because it is in his nature. He has a relaxed, rather reserved demeanor, but good leadership skills, which helps him command his Pokemon.
Description: Dante is tall and rangy, about 5'7" and 125 pounds. His hair is chestnut brown, with no discernible highlights. His eyes are light blue, and very calm, as if nothing you say will affect him. He usually wears charcoal black jeans, with a red long sleeved shirt, and a black leather vest with studs. He only wears black leather boots because they aren't affected by the elements he endures.
History: Dante had a regular upbringing. He lived in Fuchsia City, but traveled back and forth from Celadon on his bike. One long boring summer, he took a summer course on Pokemon Battling Strategies in Pallet, and learned that he had an above average aptitude for battling, because of his quick thinking, and innovative offensive strategies. Now, it is another long, monotonous holiday, and he decided to take the new Pokemon League Challenge. He plans to continue his education via the PC until he finishes.
Pokemon: Ponyta and Staryu
Type: Ponyta
Name: Ponyta
Gender: Female
Personality: Ponyta is the opposite of her trainer. She shows the greatest amount of enthusiasm possible during and after battles. She warmed up to Dante very quickly. She even allows him to ride her, but he sticks to walking most of the time.
Type:Staryu
Name: Staryu
Gender: None
Personality: Staryu is wise and serene. It is a strong battler, but it prefers more relaxing pursuits, such as moonbathing and swimming. It has innate Psychic powers that it is trying to implement into battling, but those will have to wait...
Name: Ray Smith
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: He's more of the aggressive/quiet type. He usually likes to chill out and mind his own business like listening to his hip hop modded iPod Nano. When he's generally not in the mood or he has a chip on his shoulder, he has a very intimidating look as in "gonna-bust-ya-chest-open-if-you-don't-get-off-my-back" kind of look. When he's being slightly annoyed by someone, he calmsly puts them down with a few words of wisdom. When he's being pushed too far, then he means business by either challenging the person to a pokemon battle and brutally beating his opponent or beat the guy down himself with a mixture of martial arts and gritty streetfighting moves. Once you get to know him, he can be a pretty cool dude.
Description: The First thing you'll notice is that he's African-American with a regular brown skin color. He's very fit and usually plays sports. He stands at 5' 6" and is pretty muscular with broad shoulders. He has a lot of hair, but tends to have it braided from time to time with various styles and sometimes likes to where a white Du-Rag to match his clothing style. He also has a "spike"(or bang as they call 'em) in front of his braids, but is hanging on the right side of his face, covering his eye sometimes.
He usually wears a Black oversized T-Shirt(a XXL) where the sleeves go past his elbows. He also where's size 42 jean shorts, big enough to past his knees and still be considered as shorts, they're a dark blue color. And at the bottum, he always has a pair of black Timberland Roll Up Waterproof Boots since one of his favorite activities while out traveling is rock climbing, and look good doing it. He also has a pair of shades when ever he's out in the sun. Sometimes, when he wants to, he wears a black and white bandana either around his head or loosely around his neck. His eyes are a light blue color, and is a little slanted giving him kind of an asian look.
History: Ray was born on a military base in San Diego, California. After living there for a 3 years, he then moved to and grew up in Los Angeles until he turned 8. His father and mother decided to move to Kyushu (the Hoenn Region) (since Ray's Father, Charles Smith, had relitives in Japan) to live a better life....or so they thought. About five months after moving, a terrible accident that happen in Vermillion City(Kanto) that led to Charles' death. It was reported that a bomb went off causing the massive explosion which trapped Charles in the burning clock tower before collapsing, leaving nothing but blazing rubble. The only one who barely made it out alive was his best friend and long-time cousin, Lance...(Charles was adopted with two other siblings resulting in the relation to Lance and Claire) Ray's Father not only left behind a wife and two children, he also left behind an empire...The Southern Dragon Clan. It was just an old name for a family of Dragon Tamers which turned into Mafia based name to represent the family tradition of training Dragon pokemon. Don't worry the Dragon Clan kept peace all over Japan when needed. Claire was the Leader of the West Dragon Clan; The current fourth Elite Four Trainer, Drake, controls the East Dragon Clan; Lance of course leads The North Dragon Clan; The Southern Clan, however, fell into the hands of whom would make his destiny to not only rebuild the Clan, but find out who was responsible for his father's death....Ray Smith. Ever since, Ray kept a huge grudge against Lance since he was the last to see his father alive. Over the next 8 years, Ray and his older sister, Shawnna, trained each other becoming much, much stronger(Plus, they flew back and fourth from Hoenn to L.A. for short vacations and family reunions, but kept training). Getting him to the point where he's doing some undercover work as an up and coming trainer in the Double Battle Challenge.
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Ray's Pokemon:
Ray has three pokemon. One of which he kept with him since he was nine years old, so its very strong and is only used for emergancies. (Sorry it's found in Hoenn). I also chose levels for them.
Type: Charmander
Name: Flame
Gender: Male
Personality: Flame is the smooth talking one of the bunch. He "oh so" loves annoying not only his trainer, but the rest of the crew as well with non-stop sarcastic remarks. Literally never shutting up at times... He's also a bit of a trickster as well, pranking nearly anyone he sees, except wild pokemon.
Level: 8
Famous Line: "Don't Hate the Player, Hate the game"
Type: Magikarp
Name: Hyphy
Gender: Male
Personality: Hyphy on the other hand, is the all around tough guy on the team. Even though he's not aware of the fact that he's utterly the most useless pokemon on the face of the earth, he still makes an effort to gurentee a win for the team, even if he's fighting something 500 times his own size, making him the most reliable and gutsiest Magikarp alive....If he doesn't kill himself first. Did I mention he likes to pick fights whenever its totally unnecessary?
Level: 6
Famous Line: "I got him where I want him!!!"
Type: Absol
Name: Blade
Gender: Male
Personality: Blade is a little like Flame, minus the urge to pull pranks. He's more sophisticated and sometimes likes to cut things either just to blow off some steam or when he's bored. Blade is always ending up trying to solve problems and keep himself and the rest of the crew out of trouble...especially Flame & less likely Hyphy. Blade has been with Ray ever since he turned 9 and was on vacation in Las Vegas. Blade on the other hand, was named the "Silver Assassin" who went on a killing spree in the United States; It was 5 times worse than the Chain Saw Massacre. They soon became a team after blowing up a Nuclear Power Plant in Nevada....
Level: 62
Famous Line: "I know who you are, but what am I?"
(and again sorry for having a 3rd gen pokemon on the team, he's supposed to be Ray's back-up)
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: He's more of the aggressive/quiet type. He usually likes to chill out and mind his own business like listening to his hip hop modded iPod Nano. When he's generally not in the mood or he has a chip on his shoulder, he has a very intimidating look as in "gonna-bust-ya-chest-open-if-you-don't-get-off-my-back" kind of look. When he's being slightly annoyed by someone, he calmsly puts them down with a few words of wisdom. When he's being pushed too far, then he means business by either challenging the person to a pokemon battle and brutally beating his opponent or beat the guy down himself with a mixture of martial arts and gritty streetfighting moves. Once you get to know him, he can be a pretty cool dude.
Description: The First thing you'll notice is that he's African-American with a regular brown skin color. He's very fit and usually plays sports. He stands at 5' 6" and is pretty muscular with broad shoulders. He has a lot of hair, but tends to have it braided from time to time with various styles and sometimes likes to where a white Du-Rag to match his clothing style. He also has a "spike"(or bang as they call 'em) in front of his braids, but is hanging on the right side of his face, covering his eye sometimes.
He usually wears a Black oversized T-Shirt(a XXL) where the sleeves go past his elbows. He also where's size 42 jean shorts, big enough to past his knees and still be considered as shorts, they're a dark blue color. And at the bottum, he always has a pair of black Timberland Roll Up Waterproof Boots since one of his favorite activities while out traveling is rock climbing, and look good doing it. He also has a pair of shades when ever he's out in the sun. Sometimes, when he wants to, he wears a black and white bandana either around his head or loosely around his neck. His eyes are a light blue color, and is a little slanted giving him kind of an asian look.
History: Ray was born on a military base in San Diego, California. After living there for a 3 years, he then moved to and grew up in Los Angeles until he turned 8. His father and mother decided to move to Kyushu (the Hoenn Region) (since Ray's Father, Charles Smith, had relitives in Japan) to live a better life....or so they thought. About five months after moving, a terrible accident that happen in Vermillion City(Kanto) that led to Charles' death. It was reported that a bomb went off causing the massive explosion which trapped Charles in the burning clock tower before collapsing, leaving nothing but blazing rubble. The only one who barely made it out alive was his best friend and long-time cousin, Lance...(Charles was adopted with two other siblings resulting in the relation to Lance and Claire) Ray's Father not only left behind a wife and two children, he also left behind an empire...The Southern Dragon Clan. It was just an old name for a family of Dragon Tamers which turned into Mafia based name to represent the family tradition of training Dragon pokemon. Don't worry the Dragon Clan kept peace all over Japan when needed. Claire was the Leader of the West Dragon Clan; The current fourth Elite Four Trainer, Drake, controls the East Dragon Clan; Lance of course leads The North Dragon Clan; The Southern Clan, however, fell into the hands of whom would make his destiny to not only rebuild the Clan, but find out who was responsible for his father's death....Ray Smith. Ever since, Ray kept a huge grudge against Lance since he was the last to see his father alive. Over the next 8 years, Ray and his older sister, Shawnna, trained each other becoming much, much stronger(Plus, they flew back and fourth from Hoenn to L.A. for short vacations and family reunions, but kept training). Getting him to the point where he's doing some undercover work as an up and coming trainer in the Double Battle Challenge.
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Ray's Pokemon:
Ray has three pokemon. One of which he kept with him since he was nine years old, so its very strong and is only used for emergancies. (Sorry it's found in Hoenn). I also chose levels for them.
Type: Charmander
Name: Flame
Gender: Male
Personality: Flame is the smooth talking one of the bunch. He "oh so" loves annoying not only his trainer, but the rest of the crew as well with non-stop sarcastic remarks. Literally never shutting up at times... He's also a bit of a trickster as well, pranking nearly anyone he sees, except wild pokemon.
Level: 8
Famous Line: "Don't Hate the Player, Hate the game"
Type: Magikarp
Name: Hyphy
Gender: Male
Personality: Hyphy on the other hand, is the all around tough guy on the team. Even though he's not aware of the fact that he's utterly the most useless pokemon on the face of the earth, he still makes an effort to gurentee a win for the team, even if he's fighting something 500 times his own size, making him the most reliable and gutsiest Magikarp alive....If he doesn't kill himself first. Did I mention he likes to pick fights whenever its totally unnecessary?
Level: 6
Famous Line: "I got him where I want him!!!"
Type: Absol
Name: Blade
Gender: Male
Personality: Blade is a little like Flame, minus the urge to pull pranks. He's more sophisticated and sometimes likes to cut things either just to blow off some steam or when he's bored. Blade is always ending up trying to solve problems and keep himself and the rest of the crew out of trouble...especially Flame & less likely Hyphy. Blade has been with Ray ever since he turned 9 and was on vacation in Las Vegas. Blade on the other hand, was named the "Silver Assassin" who went on a killing spree in the United States; It was 5 times worse than the Chain Saw Massacre. They soon became a team after blowing up a Nuclear Power Plant in Nevada....
Level: 62
Famous Line: "I know who you are, but what am I?"
(and again sorry for having a 3rd gen pokemon on the team, he's supposed to be Ray's back-up)
I'm fairly new to the RPG thing, so, here goes. Critisism is needed, heh.
Name: Richard Barnaby
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Description: Richard looks like your average nerd. He is 4'10, which spawns many unwanted comments, such as 'midget' or 'corphish'. His hair is a sepia brown color. His eyes are a hazenut color.He used to neatly comb his hair to the right, going for the 'neat freak' look. Nowadays, he just goes out with his beadhair, purposly oblivious to the people who make fun of it. He wears glasses that are tightened so they do not fall off if any 'accidents' happen, though they are easily pulled off by Richard and humans (and possibly a Pokemon). His skin is tanned from swimming in ponds near his hometown, Pallet Town. He isn't thin, nor is he obese. He is basically a balance between the two. He definetly is not muscular, preferring to use mind over muscle. He usually wears a scarlet shirt with horizontal green lines on it. He wears navy blue shorts, with pockets on the side and rear. White tennis shoes with red streaks of flame on the side are his preffered footwear.
Personality: Richard is a quiet kid. He prefers to keep his mouth shut until asked a question, or just feels like sparking up a conversation. He is especially shy around new people, who he thinks will dislike him for his look, or the fact that he ocassionaly talks way too much,which, 90% of the time, will lead to an aggresive " Shut up!" from the person he was talking to. This is especially true around girls, so he'll try to avoid them until he has enough confidence. He is definetly no athlete. He prefers to be a follower, as he lacks confidence. When somebody insults him or his friends, he will mady spew incoherent curses and stupid things. He is paranoid, especially in the dark. He cares for his family and Pokemon very much.
History: Richard was born in Pallet Town. His mom, Alison Barnaby, works at the Cerulean Power Plant, while his father, Robert Barnaby works at the Poke Mart in Virdian. So, Richard usually is at home alone for the course of the day. At school, he was ridiculed for his small size, nerdy looks, and his annoying conversations. Most of the times, he blocks it out, and then goes quiet. At 8 years old, all the insults he had taken had finally snapped. A jock was making fun of him, so, he begin to madly curse at him and kicked him in the 'testicular' area. He then proceeded to stomp on him while cursing. Needless to say, the 2 months following this incident were not good times. He has since reverted back to his 'nerd' phase. After hearing about the Pokemon Leauge Challenge, he knew this was his chance. His father introduced him to Pokemon at a young age when he brought home a Pidgey that was injured. They nursed it back to help, and released it when the bird felt better. He hopes that if he wins the challenge, he will prove that he isn't someone to be made fun of.
Pokemon:
Species: Bulbasaur
Name: Seeder
Gender: Male
Personality: Seeder is a calm Bulbasaur, preffering to analyzing things before taking action. Whenever their is a female grass type pokemon, he will shy away, but try and do small, helpful things to impress her. In ways, he is like a Pokemon version of Richard. When angry, he will relentlessly headbutt and vine whip his opponent into oblivion.
Species: Charmander
Name: Lazer
Gender: Male
Personality: It is safe to say that Lazer is the complete opposite of Seeder. He is prone to aggression, and will occasionally, in fits of rage or boredom, burn things with his tail or small fire balls(Ember)which leads to trouble. He prefers brawn over brain, and relentlessly attacks opponent pokemon with claws and flame. The only friendliness he will show to is Richard, his family, Richards friends(if any), Richard's friend's pokemon and Seeder. He will try to woo female fire pokemon using his fire techniques. He and Seeder often spar to train:
Name: Richard Barnaby
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Description: Richard looks like your average nerd. He is 4'10, which spawns many unwanted comments, such as 'midget' or 'corphish'. His hair is a sepia brown color. His eyes are a hazenut color.He used to neatly comb his hair to the right, going for the 'neat freak' look. Nowadays, he just goes out with his beadhair, purposly oblivious to the people who make fun of it. He wears glasses that are tightened so they do not fall off if any 'accidents' happen, though they are easily pulled off by Richard and humans (and possibly a Pokemon). His skin is tanned from swimming in ponds near his hometown, Pallet Town. He isn't thin, nor is he obese. He is basically a balance between the two. He definetly is not muscular, preferring to use mind over muscle. He usually wears a scarlet shirt with horizontal green lines on it. He wears navy blue shorts, with pockets on the side and rear. White tennis shoes with red streaks of flame on the side are his preffered footwear.
Personality: Richard is a quiet kid. He prefers to keep his mouth shut until asked a question, or just feels like sparking up a conversation. He is especially shy around new people, who he thinks will dislike him for his look, or the fact that he ocassionaly talks way too much,which, 90% of the time, will lead to an aggresive " Shut up!" from the person he was talking to. This is especially true around girls, so he'll try to avoid them until he has enough confidence. He is definetly no athlete. He prefers to be a follower, as he lacks confidence. When somebody insults him or his friends, he will mady spew incoherent curses and stupid things. He is paranoid, especially in the dark. He cares for his family and Pokemon very much.
History: Richard was born in Pallet Town. His mom, Alison Barnaby, works at the Cerulean Power Plant, while his father, Robert Barnaby works at the Poke Mart in Virdian. So, Richard usually is at home alone for the course of the day. At school, he was ridiculed for his small size, nerdy looks, and his annoying conversations. Most of the times, he blocks it out, and then goes quiet. At 8 years old, all the insults he had taken had finally snapped. A jock was making fun of him, so, he begin to madly curse at him and kicked him in the 'testicular' area. He then proceeded to stomp on him while cursing. Needless to say, the 2 months following this incident were not good times. He has since reverted back to his 'nerd' phase. After hearing about the Pokemon Leauge Challenge, he knew this was his chance. His father introduced him to Pokemon at a young age when he brought home a Pidgey that was injured. They nursed it back to help, and released it when the bird felt better. He hopes that if he wins the challenge, he will prove that he isn't someone to be made fun of.
Pokemon:
Species: Bulbasaur
Name: Seeder
Gender: Male
Personality: Seeder is a calm Bulbasaur, preffering to analyzing things before taking action. Whenever their is a female grass type pokemon, he will shy away, but try and do small, helpful things to impress her. In ways, he is like a Pokemon version of Richard. When angry, he will relentlessly headbutt and vine whip his opponent into oblivion.
Species: Charmander
Name: Lazer
Gender: Male
Personality: It is safe to say that Lazer is the complete opposite of Seeder. He is prone to aggression, and will occasionally, in fits of rage or boredom, burn things with his tail or small fire balls(Ember)which leads to trouble. He prefers brawn over brain, and relentlessly attacks opponent pokemon with claws and flame. The only friendliness he will show to is Richard, his family, Richards friends(if any), Richard's friend's pokemon and Seeder. He will try to woo female fire pokemon using his fire techniques. He and Seeder often spar to train:
Name: Prongs
Age:15
Gender:Male
Personality: Prongs is a very funny person. He`s the clown of his group and always love to make someone laugh. He is a devoted friend, and will fight for his friends. He doesn`t like to brag to much and hates those that brag all the time. He is very smart, top in his grade. He like to read books and loves sports, but his main love is Pokemon's. His favorite type is fire and his favorite Pokemon is Charizard.
Description: His tall and athletic, black hair and blue eyes. Wheres a pair of blue jeans, a red t-shirt, a pair of black sneakers and wears black goggles. He has a black charizard tattoo on his right arm and an earing in his left ear.
History: He lived with his mother and father in Pallet Town since he was born. He has 2 brother, one has only 1 year and the other has 25 and is a respected Pokemon trainer. He got along good with his big brother, but there where times when he would be beaten by him. Prongs learned in an all boys school. At the age of 15 his mother told him that he was allowed to go on his journey and become a Pokemon trainer. That was the best birthday Prongs ever had.
Pokemon: Charmander and Squirtle
Type: fire
Name: Charmander
Gender: Male
Personality: is a very brave Pokemon, always ready to give his life for his trainer. Sometimes he can be a little stupid but is a very fond of his trainer.
Type: water
Name: Squirtle
Gender: Male
Personality: very intelligent, always followes the rules and always does what his trainer tels him to do. He is a very caring Pokemon and like Charmander, would give his life for his trainer.
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Age:15
Gender:Male
Personality: Prongs is a very funny person. He`s the clown of his group and always love to make someone laugh. He is a devoted friend, and will fight for his friends. He doesn`t like to brag to much and hates those that brag all the time. He is very smart, top in his grade. He like to read books and loves sports, but his main love is Pokemon's. His favorite type is fire and his favorite Pokemon is Charizard.
Description: His tall and athletic, black hair and blue eyes. Wheres a pair of blue jeans, a red t-shirt, a pair of black sneakers and wears black goggles. He has a black charizard tattoo on his right arm and an earing in his left ear.
History: He lived with his mother and father in Pallet Town since he was born. He has 2 brother, one has only 1 year and the other has 25 and is a respected Pokemon trainer. He got along good with his big brother, but there where times when he would be beaten by him. Prongs learned in an all boys school. At the age of 15 his mother told him that he was allowed to go on his journey and become a Pokemon trainer. That was the best birthday Prongs ever had.
Pokemon: Charmander and Squirtle
Type: fire
Name: Charmander
Gender: Male
Personality: is a very brave Pokemon, always ready to give his life for his trainer. Sometimes he can be a little stupid but is a very fond of his trainer.
Type: water
Name: Squirtle
Gender: Male
Personality: very intelligent, always followes the rules and always does what his trainer tels him to do. He is a very caring Pokemon and like Charmander, would give his life for his trainer.
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Name: Kyle Dragonstalker
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personality: Kyle is a really shy kid. He always is by himself. Although he is shy and can make friends really easly if others give him a chance. He loves to play video games especially sport ones. He is an atheletic teen. He also likes to play on sports teams and is a good team player. He also likes to help and care for others. Kyle can be the best of friends and is very trustworthy.
Describtion: He is 5,6 and has brown short hair. Kyle also has light brown eyes. He wears a yellow bandanna around his head. He wears a yellow t-shirt and baggy blue jeans. Kyle wears black sunglasses, white Nikes, and a silver short chain medalion.
History: Kyle started training pokemon when his best friend Jackson got his from a poke'egg. He has been training since he was six years old. Jackson and his dad have been helping him training ever since.
He lives with his dad in Fuchisa city. He has lived here eversince his dad became a world known ninja master. His dad now teaches a class there.
Fuchisa is a great place to train pokemon and your ninja skills. It is a very quiet and peaceful town to live in.
When Kyle heard about the contest, he didn't want to go. His dad said it would be a great way to make new friends. After that he started to pack and took the plane to pallet town to start his new adventure.
Pokemon: Staryu and Oddish
Type: Staryu
Name: Stamax
Gender: Male
Personality: Stamax is a very friendly and energetic pokemon. He always looks out for his friends and family. He is very close friends with Kyle and never does anything wrong even though he hates bullies.
Type: Oddish
Name: Odey
Gender: Male
Personality: Odey is a trustworthy friend. Although he can cause alot of trouble you can count on him to cheer you up. He will stand up for his friends because he knows they have his back even if he was the one who caused it.
With Stamax and Kyle they make a great team that can do anything as long as they try their best and work together.
Name: Kyle Dragonstalker
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Personality: Kyle is a really shy kid. He always is by himself. Although he is shy and can make friends really easly if others give him a chance. He loves to play video games especially sport ones. He is an atheletic teen. He also likes to play on sports teams and is a good team player. He also likes to help and care for others. Kyle can be the best of friends and is very trustworthy.
Describtion: He is 5,6 and has brown short hair. Kyle also has light brown eyes. He wears a yellow bandanna around his head. He wears a yellow t-shirt and baggy blue jeans. Kyle wears black sunglasses, white Nikes, and a silver short chain medalion.
History: Kyle started training pokemon when his best friend Jackson got his from a poke'egg. He has been training since he was six years old. Jackson and his dad have been helping him training ever since.
He lives with his dad in Fuchisa city. He has lived here eversince his dad became a world known ninja master. His dad now teaches a class there.
Fuchisa is a great place to train pokemon and your ninja skills. It is a very quiet and peaceful town to live in.
When Kyle heard about the contest, he didn't want to go. His dad said it would be a great way to make new friends. After that he started to pack and took the plane to pallet town to start his new adventure.
Pokemon: Staryu and Oddish
Type: Staryu
Name: Stamax
Gender: Male
Personality: Stamax is a very friendly and energetic pokemon. He always looks out for his friends and family. He is very close friends with Kyle and never does anything wrong even though he hates bullies.
Type: Oddish
Name: Odey
Gender: Male
Personality: Odey is a trustworthy friend. Although he can cause alot of trouble you can count on him to cheer you up. He will stand up for his friends because he knows they have his back even if he was the one who caused it.
With Stamax and Kyle they make a great team that can do anything as long as they try their best and work together.
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Chaotic Pink
Let the zephyr blow.
Might as well give this a go:
Name: Becky
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Personality: An optamist at heart, although she doesn't always show it. Becky is highly opinionated, and is not afraid to show this, even if it means hurting others on the way. A born leader because of this, and although she can annoy others, most respect her, even at 13. Deep down, she is shy and crazy, yet only shows this to some, close to her heart. Has never had trouble making friends, although she is picky.
Despite this, when she does make true friends she sticks by them and defends them no matter what, and she expects the same behaviour back.
Description: Tall, around 175cm in height. She is hardly ever seen without he trade mark blue jeans and fitted t-shirts. The t-shirts are normally pink with some sort of design. Her hair is long, brown and naturally straight, her brown hair has many shades of the colour in it; and she refuses to change it as she has had the same hairstyle and colour for all of her current life. Eye colour is blue, althought to be truthful it is a mysterious grey that changes depending on the light. Her complection is pale, yet when it is warm her cheeks turn a shocking and bright red colour making her stand out like a beetroot. Becky loves jewellery, whether it be earrings or necklaces, she only wears gold though.
History: She was born in Cerulean city, where she has stayed for all of her life. Here she caught her two Pokemon. Training and in turn learning with Misty, the current gym leader, is what keeps her family in the same town as they wish for Becky to learn everything about Pokemon, at least the water species. This encouraged her to become a fully fledged trainer, and with Misty's help, this is what has driven her on. At a young age she started playing with wild Pokemon and befriending them, the two Pokemon she has are the ones she befriended and kept friends.
Pokemon:
Type: Staryu
Name: Cerang
Gender: Female
Personality: Cheeky, this is because she often pushes people into the gym's pool from behind. She is loyal, and trys her best to win, at all costs. This nature often results in many wins or with her coming out battered and brused. She was captured by Becky from being Level 5, and is therefore very trusting towards her.
Type: Squirtle
Name: Showers.
Gender: Female
Personality: Showers is happy natured and easy going, in the wild when she used to battle she would walk away from battles to save from injuring often weaker Pokemon. She has a caring nature too, as she will gladly help any Pokemon.
Name: Becky
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Personality: An optamist at heart, although she doesn't always show it. Becky is highly opinionated, and is not afraid to show this, even if it means hurting others on the way. A born leader because of this, and although she can annoy others, most respect her, even at 13. Deep down, she is shy and crazy, yet only shows this to some, close to her heart. Has never had trouble making friends, although she is picky.
Despite this, when she does make true friends she sticks by them and defends them no matter what, and she expects the same behaviour back.
Description: Tall, around 175cm in height. She is hardly ever seen without he trade mark blue jeans and fitted t-shirts. The t-shirts are normally pink with some sort of design. Her hair is long, brown and naturally straight, her brown hair has many shades of the colour in it; and she refuses to change it as she has had the same hairstyle and colour for all of her current life. Eye colour is blue, althought to be truthful it is a mysterious grey that changes depending on the light. Her complection is pale, yet when it is warm her cheeks turn a shocking and bright red colour making her stand out like a beetroot. Becky loves jewellery, whether it be earrings or necklaces, she only wears gold though.
History: She was born in Cerulean city, where she has stayed for all of her life. Here she caught her two Pokemon. Training and in turn learning with Misty, the current gym leader, is what keeps her family in the same town as they wish for Becky to learn everything about Pokemon, at least the water species. This encouraged her to become a fully fledged trainer, and with Misty's help, this is what has driven her on. At a young age she started playing with wild Pokemon and befriending them, the two Pokemon she has are the ones she befriended and kept friends.
Pokemon:
Type: Staryu
Name: Cerang
Gender: Female
Personality: Cheeky, this is because she often pushes people into the gym's pool from behind. She is loyal, and trys her best to win, at all costs. This nature often results in many wins or with her coming out battered and brused. She was captured by Becky from being Level 5, and is therefore very trusting towards her.
Type: Squirtle
Name: Showers.
Gender: Female
Personality: Showers is happy natured and easy going, in the wild when she used to battle she would walk away from battles to save from injuring often weaker Pokemon. She has a caring nature too, as she will gladly help any Pokemon.
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