Ryou's sprites

[RyouChan]

I've been doing some recoulors for about a week now, I still need a lot of practice. Constructive criticism, please. Don't be afraid to be mean. This is the first time I've ever shown them to anyone besides my friends, who like them. I haven't made many yet, there's so much I want to try, I don't know where to start. So I guess just criticize these three and the Zapdos in my sig.

I'm only here for a little while today, just like ten minutes more, so don't think I'm ignoring you if I don't reply until tomorrow.

 

[Comis Patronus]

I think they're okay but the Moltres' colors seem to irritate the eye.

 

[RyouChan]

Do you think it would help if the body were a little darker, or maybe a different shade?

 

[Comis Patronus]

Different colors. Perhaps blue flames and another color.

 

[Silver Salamence]

Green maybe? I don't thnk that would irritate the eye.

Your sprites are really good. You should try mixes or something new so you dont entirely focus your skills and effort on recolouring.

 

[grim reaper]

There good,but as Ratiosu381 said,change the colour of moltres.

 

[RyouChan]

Different colors. Perhaps blue flames and another color.

Green maybe? I don't thnk that would irritate the eye.

Better, I hope? I find him easier to look at now, myself.

 

[Chaotic Houndoom]

Dude, that black Ekans is awesome.

 

[RyouChan]

Dude, that black Ekans is awesome.

(x Thanks. I actually made him black and gold because I'm a Steelers fan.

On a different subject.. Does anyone have/know where to get the sprite of the RSE Egg? I have really bad parental controls on my internet, and all the sites people have told me to go to so far, I can't get to.

Edit: Nevermind, found it. =)

 

[Kyaku]

You have Parental Controls too? >_<;;; I feel your pain.

Um, well...You could get it from the tutorial. Or, I could give you one. Here:



Nothing much to crit. But I do have to say, the new Moltres is better. The Zapdos in your sig are cool to.

-Spikey-

 

[RyouChan]

On the suggestion of Silver Salamence, I have tried something new. These are my first four eggs I've tried, made yesterday.

And before anyone says anything, I /do/ realize that Pidgeotto and Vaporeon do not hatch from eggs.

 

[DanK84]

You're a Steelers fan? Awesome dude, I from Pittsburgh and I love the Steelers!

Anyway, you've really done a nice job on the new green Moltres. I really like the black Ekans too.

 

[Comis Patronus]

<Steelers were cheated by the refs to win the Super Bowl lol.>
Anyway, those sprites are improvements.

 

[DanK84]

Yeah, if you mean during the Colts game, I agree with you. Man, that game was a tear jerker.

I just noticed the eggs, and I really like the Eevee one!

 

[~Flareon~]

I liked the Wooper and Eevee eggs, they looked very cute. And the other two Pokemon eggs are okay.

 

[RyouChan]

Yeah, DanK84, I almost had a heart attack like five times during that game. No one wanted us to go anywhere, it would be too shocking. I guess the refs agreed? Also, living in San Diego, everyone's all Chargers fans except my family. When we're clad in team gear people keep asking us if we're from Pittsburg. Now my answer is, sarcastic and all, "No, We're from Foxborough. Foxborough, Massachusetts."

Back on topic, another poke dons the black and gold.

And... Some Articuno that were made with the Zapdos... (forgot about them earlier)

And also

Siamese twins, w00t.

 

[~Flareon~]

I liked the black and gold Sandslash, it looks very cool.

 

[RyouChan]

I liked the black and gold Sandslash, it looks very cool.

Thank you. You raise my self-esteem.

Just to follow suit:

I think it looks a little awkward. I'm going to reverse the black and orange.

Meh, dunno.

 

[Silver Salamence]

Those are really good. Im glad you took my advice and moved on to eggs. Your eggs are your best sprites and they are very well formed.
Keep up the great work!

 

[RyouChan]

Thanks.
I'm so sorry I haven't been on for a few days. My lamb and hog are at the local fair right now. Saturday I was getting ready, Sunday was move-in, Monday was my market hog classes and Tuesday was showmanship. I'll be gone tomorrow for the lamb, Saturday for auction and Sunday for clean-up.


Anyway. Some random stuff. Need lots of comments on these.