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Sabrina the Kirlia

PDL

disenchanted

poke²_rookie

Active Member
the drawing was ok for me but u right....u need to work on the shading, it wasn't look right ! ! sory :p but nice drawing though !
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
What bothers me on it is her stomach, it seems a bit large. It should be small from the neck, and the curves should slowly slant outwards into the skirt-ish thing. The skirt-ish thing, should be a bit longer. And I'm guessing the red things on her head, should be sticking outwards.

The arsm should be a bit skinnier, and the elbow to fingertips, should be larger.

But tis fine. ^_^
 

PDL

disenchanted
Shading has never really been a strength of mine, usually I don't even colour. I could never really figure out where the light should be coming from...

As for the body, well, yeah, it's my first time drawing any kind of Kirlia, so I could definately use more practice... but I really need to be working on my fanfic rather then fanart.
 

Umi Mizuno

☠ one girl army
I don't have any problem with the shading, I just have problems with the center of Kirilia, it looks a bit huge. o_O
 

Kamileah

Well-Known Member
The traces are a bit shaky, and they could be more delicateish. It's a simple yet nice drawing. :]
 
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