Saffron Academy

[Pictor]

Otay. I can't put up bios yet as it would spoil. And for a note, when reading the comic, follow the arrows!

???: No name at the moment.

Part I: ???
Episode One: "Tourny"
Episode Two: "Tri Attack!"

Fan Stuff

Nadda

Credits

Spriters Resource
bgh2 for the overworld pokemon


Remember constructive criticism

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

YAY! First post! It's good that you used text bubbles but it's hard to read... I'll give it 7.5/10

 

[komodo396]

As I told you over AIM its good but as Dafearo said its hard to read.

 

[Forgotten Chain]

Are you really that lazy to not allign the panels right?

 

[Pictor]

Meh, I was at the moment. Thanks for the comments I'm working on the next episode, which is aligned right.

 

[Flygon]

Could use some more work. Still, it might've been better if you switched the order of the last two "panals" to make the comic at least a little funny.

 

[P-Man]

This looks a damn lot like pokechow... =/

Not bad but too random and WAY to confusing.

 

[Pictor]

Yeah... the next episode will make more sense. The only reason the comic looks like PokeChow is because we use the same kind of speech bubbles. Which are in the game.

 

[P-Man]

I know, but they're the same and the panel placement (and sizes) are very very similar

 

[Pictor]

Welp, I didn't steal anything.

 

[Torchic23]

Well I can read it but it's hard to understand the order of it.Try a little harder next time,but otherwise nice work ^_^

-Torchic23

 

[Pictor]

New Epi up. In my opinion it's much better then the first.

 

[pikadon92]

LOL, I think the second episode is funny! (read it to find out why)

 

[Pictor]

... I dun get it...

 

[Lotad]

Man I feel sorry for cloud.. that must've hurt

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

Great update!!! I think it's good that you fixed the panels, and did you make that ambulance yourself?

 

[Pictor]

I edited the moving truck.

Thanks for the comments everyone. Expect a new character in the next epi sence Cloud is in the hospital.

 

[blueguy]

Alright...

Visually I think it's on the right track... however all over the place.

On the flipside it makes no sense, and goes WAY too fast... I'm not even sure who the main character is!

There needs to be some sort of introduction... some background and setting, or else it's just confusing.

I think you have potential, though and would like to see more.

 

[Blazing Charizard]

It's okay. The plot kinda stinks (no offense) but I do like the way you put in the Tri Attack thing. Finally, a time where a dodged attack hurts the trainer...

 

[Nick Mckenzie]

bheshsruan
1. I don't get the first one.
2. How come it shows "Azu" getting hit by Tri Attack, but it dodges?
3. Like Pokechow, 'cept not as rude.