Sailor's Terror

[Graceful Shinigami]

Here some drawings that I made in my spare time. Critique if you want, but I know I'm no professional, and I feel small when I look at what others have done xD Enjoy!

Gyarados: Actually, I've just recently started trying to draw this beast. This one is the best one that came out. The background is a little bland, but Gyarados is the main focus. I think the tail is a bit inelegant At least Gyarados looks like it'll pop out and take a bite out of you.
http://Jirachi385.deviantart.com/art/Sailor-s-Terror-103682012

Umbreon: Sucks not having a scanner. One of my better ones, if only it was better quality. Background is good, it's in color, and Umbreon looks great. Body proportions a little off, but overall, it isn't bad!
http://Jirachi385.deviantart.com/art/Lunar-Umbreon-78439638

Gallade: Probably my best black and white one. On it's face, it's Korean for "War". Background decent, not that great, but the design gives good emphasis on Gallade.
http://Jirachi385.deviantart.com/art/Gallade-72368536

Gardevoir: The first one I drew. Not much to explain, kind of straightforward.
http://Jirachi385.deviantart.com/art/Gardevoir-71609820

Life As A Pokemon: A comic I drew. It's the only one I've done that's based on Pokemon. My other comics are about other stuff, and none are really professional looking drawing wise. Comics are pretty hard, as every panel feels like a separate picture.
http://Jirachi385.deviantart.com/art/Life-As-A-Pokemon-Ver-II-94333603

 

[AEROBLASTER]

Well, I'm dissapointed because the first link didn't work for me and you said that it was probably your best...
As for the second one, the link only appeared as regular text and was not clickable.
Based on your other drawings, your pokemon are pretty good except that the lines are a bit too sketchy.

 

[Graceful Shinigami]

Well, I'm dissapointed because the first link didn't work for me and you said that it was probably your best...
As for the second one, the link only appeared as regular text and was not clickable.
Based on your other drawings, your pokemon are pretty good except that the lines are a bit too sketchy.

Alright, hopefully the first two are working now. Thanks for telling me!

 

[AEROBLASTER]

Ah, well I saw your gyarados, which wasn't all that bad at all. I found its eyes to be a bit strange, as well as a couple of sections on its body mildly disproportionate, but not anthing very specific. The Umbreon was probably my favorite and I was hoping to see more colored drawings. The wind however, seemed to have too much emphasis. A nice blending of color would have done well.

 

[TurtwigFan1]

They're good, but the Gallade and Gardevoir seemed to be disproportionate and Gyarados' eyes seem too dark.

 

[ManiaCrasH]

They are good pictures