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Scratch Umbreon :O

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Espionage

This was a triumph.
So I made a random umbreon sprite from scratch, lol. I've only made one scratch before and that was like a year and a half ago and it was ugly.

Here ya go.

krur.gif
 
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Imohep

Guest
That isn't bad at all! The legs need a bit of work (the location of the middle two legs do not seem to give it support), but apart from that, it is a very good scratch sprite!
 
W

whiteabsol

.:Daisy Dancing:.
It looks pretty good ^_^

It's front legs need a little work, especially where they join the body. it just looks awkward.
 
D

DanK84

Manyula Trainer
Very nice! Most of the flaws were pointed above so I don't have anything more to say.
 
E

Espionage

This was a triumph.
Fixed it a little, any better? Though I still can't quite put my finger on what exactly is wrong with the front legs.. o.o
 
S

stigy

Arteest
The problem with the front legs are that they are stiff. Plus it's left front leg looks inverted :(
 
U

Untamed Fear â„¢

Guest
Wow, all you need to work on is the positioning, everything else is awsome.
 
A

-aocom v2-

Victory is ours!
Espionage said:
So I made a random umbreon sprite from scratch, lol. I've only made one scratch before and that was like a year and a half ago and it was ugly.

Here ya go.

krur.gif
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The shading is nice, but what really bugs me is the positioning. Its in a very awkward stance, really. >_0

- The ear in the back should be moved more towards the one in front. With the ears like that, it gives the impression the head should be turning totally away from the viewer.
- You should also continue the outlines from the neck, chest, and legs to show the creases in its body. Right now it looks all melded together.
- Its back foot also looks strange, as it makes a right angle, instead of a smoother transition.
- Try to anti-alias the yellow rings as well.
 
M

Mawile XD

ello thar
I agree with everything that everyone said. Te other hng is that Umbreon's head is a llittle too small. Ovverall, it's detail is very nice. Good job.
 
M

Myuuvuirocon

<--- Destoria
really good! ^^ I agree w/ whiteabsol, though, it's legs do need a little work, but overall, it's really good! :D
 
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