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Serebii Pokemon Contest Hall - Welcome All Coordinators!

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HarleyScarow

Emerald Shinigami
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VERY IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT: The "contest" has become very popular, and the judges decided that it's too much work to rate every single person and the battle rounds would be too much too plan out. So everyone can appeal whenever they want to, however they want to. Judges will still see your appeal and judge you, but you won't have to worry about disqualification or elimination. THERE IS NO LONGER AN OFFICIAL CONTEST. This is just a place where you can appeal and be judged, just for fun. I know that I will be appealing some more.

I've been wanting to do this for a long time, but never brung myself to do it, so here. Considering there's something called ASB, wouldn't it be fair if there's something for Pokemon Contests? I know there's a lot of members out there not liking the concept of it, but I'm one of the chunk that do, so here to compose my idea. Basically, as we all know from the anime's appeals different from the games, you can do the same thing here.

Basically, it's a little tournament I whipped up for raring coordinators ready to appeal on the stage, so I need 16 members for this thing. You simply write your appeal down with your Pokemon the way you would if you were describing a battle, refing an ASL, or just explaining something (seriously, describe). Then me, including two other judges, will rate how you've done and such in a one to ten scale like the anime. I don't want Contest Battles in here, so it's four rounds with halfing the contestants each time. Have fun!








Pokemon Contest Manual:

1. Preliminary Round: These begin with Anime style appeals from each Coordinator, up to as many possible. Please write and describe your appeal so the other judges may be able to rate it, be as original as you can; also, make sure your appeal takes only one post. Nobody gets cut in this part of the contest yet. As many coordinators can come enter at the same time, no less than eight and no more than 64.

2. Qualifying Round: Another anime style appeal you do in this part of the contest, but it has to be much better than the last one or else, also much longer and more put into thought. The judges' acceptance level will be much harder in this round, and you must use a different Pokemon than the one you used last round.

3. Elimination Round: This round is like the last one, except you have to amp up your level even more as judges will get even more strict. You must use a Pokemon you didn't use in the last two rounds. After this round is when the other coordinators nominate the top eight who will advance to the Contest Battling rounds via PM; every participant is allowed eight votes in any combination. Top eight Coordinators advance.

4. Quarter-Finals: This is the first round of Anime Style Contest Battling (ASCB), where Coordinators must choose two of their Pokemon and compete in a Double Battle. First person to either lose all of their points or have both of their Pokemon K.Oed loses. Combinations recommended to reduce more opposing points in the five round time limit.

5. Semi-Finals: The next round of Anime Style Contest Battling (ASCB) begins, where the winning four Coordinators advance and battle with the same rules as the last Contest Battle round. The two lucky winners from these Contest Battles have a reserved spot for the final round and a chance for the ribbon.

6. Final Match: The final round of the Pokemon Contest begins with the two surviving Coordinators battling like the previous two rounds, and the winner of the battle gets the coverted Serebii ribbon. Runner-Up gets a half-ribbon, semi-finalists get a semi-ribbon, and quarter-finalists get a quarter-ribbon. Get five ribbons for the Grand Festival.








Judges/MCs:

1. HarleyScarow
I'm a tad bit of an easy judger, but usually I'll go for more than just the obvious grace and beauty, liking the unition of a Pokemon and Coordinator instead, including strange and unusual appeals that would make the members of the audience and other judges cry and yell, while I snicker away in joy due to my gothicness. I'll always say the pessemistic part of appeals, except for ones I like or favor- consider me a big meanie. I have a lot of people that I want to kill- yes, end their life, just because they do some really small things to me that should be water off a duck's back. It doesn't matter, because I'm not your friend and just because I'm trying to sexually abuse you doesn't make me a bad person. So what I'm a homosexual and villian? The things people did to me made me who I am, and you better go to hell if you go against my style as a goth as well. Those who hurt my lovelies will die.
-Cacturne: My trademark Pokemon, as sexy as I am and is lesbian for hot gals like my main squeeze Jessie. Don't mess with her dazzling sexuality.
-Banette: Shocking and gothic like me. Make sure she doesn't rape you from behind because I'll burn for real. This isn't your everyday freaky doll, it's death.
-Ariados: The hottest guy on my team, because when he gets you into his web, he'll eat you so slowly you can feel the burn of hell. Damn is he hot.
-Octillery: An Octillery's a vampire, because when she launches herself into you, that lady's not gonna let go. She'll take your blood and get stronger.
-Wigglytuff: What does this tomboy do for a living? Be a manwh0re because he's gonna rape all of you whether you like it or not. Buttercup, Buttercup!
-Dracusite: Don't leech off me! Because this hot lady's gonna take all you have and yeah. Throw a dime and the $lu+'s gonna take more than you can imagine!

2. Mike - I am, of course, a boy as you could tell from the name. Ya know, wavy light brown hair with green eyes. I like the color blue and silver. I'm from the town of Mahogany in the Johto region. Im known as the top coordinator ever from that town. One day I saw a Lapras in the nearby ice cave and we've been friends ever since as well as him being my first capture. I was inspired to be a coordinator from growing up in that gave with lapras and i was able to admire the beauty of the world. That's why I do what i do. I tend to be really laid back and lazy at times. I seem to kick into turbo mode when a contest comes though and get really competitive. I always like to be the best and get REALLY frustrated when I'm not. Even though i grew up by ice I, like most others, am sick of the generic ice appeals. I really like it when people use strange/ugly looking pokemon to make cool results. Originality is the way to my points people.
-Lapras- The first Pokemon i captured and my long time best friend. Great battler and even better appealer; usually goes with electric or dragon attacks.
-Murk (Muk)- Made its contest debut recently and harnesses unexpected attacks to win points. He's pretty much what i look for in other appeals.
-Sceptile- A great choice for any scenario it blows away the competition with a wide range of special type attacks. Has a specialty of carving things with moves like dragon claw, Leaf blade, and Thunderpunch.
-Corsola- Used solely for contests+this one IS A BOY. It uses strange moves but they work to it's advantage every time. Pinpoint aiming helps out when blasting water.
-Skarmory- Unusually fast even for a Skarmory. Flying works as a huge advantage but it's only used in double appeals.
-Politoed- Skarmory and him work great as a team and get along very well. Skarmory has acted as a role model for Politoed ever since it was a Poliwag

3. Brendan: I am a star coordinator in games and got my pokemon in the art museum. Mainly I am a light judge but could be very hard people who totally copy another person's appeal. I dislike violence and battling, and that's the main reason why I decided to bring my life into contests. You see, when I was little, me and a friend of mines were having a battle and we both got hurt in more ways than one. Top appeals are my taste if you think about it.
-Rain The Masquerain: The most beautiful on the team. Brendan's first Pokemon. It can kill with it's water based Moves.
-TyTy the Typhlosion: Brendan's prized Pokemon from his contests in Johto, receiving him from Professer Elm. TyTy's strength can not be matched.
-Nightmare the Gengar: This Pokemon is Brendan's Shiny, coming to their advantage when using moves that making the room darker.
-Grace the Dragonair: Brendan's favorite Pokemon because of it's grace. Grace is able to release the feathers on it's small wings on it's head.
-Gaia the Steelix: This Steelix is one tough player when it comes to physical brawls this is because she went through vigirous training with Brendan.
-Ecruteak the Absol: Able to strike fierce blows in battle. In contests Absol is the cutest, winking at the audience and using it's signature move Infatuate.

4. Nicholas Riverson/Nick R.
Biography: A fourteen year old boy who is the son of the Elite Four Champion Wallace, he trains mainly water pokemon. Though he also uses some of his favorites as well. He wants to be the sucsessor to the Elite 4 Champion Wallace andbe the Champion himself. He has quite a passion for this, but most of all, he wants to be one of the best coordinators there is and has a deep bond with all of his pokemon. He has developed a bond for water pokemon ever since he recieved a Feebas at the age of nine.He became best friends with it. One normal day, it evolved right infront of his very eyes. That Milotic was the pokemon who sparked Nick's love of Contests. He appreciates art and loves to draw. His father Wallace has always been there for him and supported Nick all the way. Nick's mother was a nice lovely person who nurtured him. Nick is 6'1 and 142 pounds. His Pokemon consists of:
-Cirro the Castform: One of nicks best Contest pokemon. Received it from a Weather Institute. Great in battle.
-Miroko the Milotic: Nick's favorite and best pokemon. Great in battles and contests indeed, loves to ferry Nick to different places.
-Serea the Whiscash: Another or Nick's prized Water Pokemon, great in contests and is very cute.
-Calaro the Claydol: A mysterious yet cool pokemon, who always starts small, but ends with very hot appeals, great in double battles to deend.
-Aaron the Aggron: A massive powerhouse who dominates in battles. Quite good in contests, a loyal pokemon indeed who gets Nick out of tight spots.
-Niromo the Swampert: Nick's starter pokemon, but not the one who sparked Nick's passion for water, but indeed a solid contender.

5. Jack Mariner
I was born in port city of Lilycove in the Hoenn region. Originally wanting to be a trainer, I eventually ended up battling Juan for his gym badge (and later Wallace). Seeing the way in which both these trainers use their Pokemon elegantly has shown me the joy of coordinating and while I myself am better at Pokemon battling, contests appeal to me more now and I constantly wrack my brain for more creativity for my next appeal. As my many various Pokemon where built for Pokemon battles, my contesting style tends to waver on the little more Pokemon battling violence than necessary but still manages to end up in a rather ‘show-off’ and a little exaggerated matter and I always like to add a little luck into my appeal – it gives me I bit more of an edge and makes me concentrate (and panic) more. What I look for in contests is a great show but nothing rather…unoriginal. Be flamboyant and interesting basically. Sadly, I also have an annoying habit of letting my eye wonder to the coordinator and see what their like from their behavior during the contest itself. Catch my eye with originality (and personality) and you will defiantly get my attention.
My main Pokemon team:
- Breeze the Beautifly: my first Pokemon and my best contest Pokemon, her quiet nature is completely changed during any appeal - thanks to the power of fame.
- Flare the Blaziken: a Pokemon I got from Prof. Birch after saving him from a pack of Poochyena/Mightyena, she is rather feisty and fiery but enjoys a laugh...and a flame fest.
- Spiky the Cacturne: evil little g*t who’s tricks are a pain in the arse simply. But he’s very loyal to me and will protect me – even if it means getting away from HarleyScarow’s lesbian Cacturne (to whom he’s trying to convert).
- Colette the Cloyster: she is an evil tyrant who laughs at her foes. Daughter of Lorelei’s trademark Pokemon, when Colette wants to win, she won’t just win. Hell no she won’t. Lets just leave it, as that her icicle spear and spike cannon attacks can turn her ‘on’ in a torturous way. Scary.
- Psycho the Alakazam: something is seriously wrong with him and his name sorta says it. Tick MR Brainy out and he will actually slice your head off without any thoughts. What fun. But at least he double battles/appeals well with Club.
- Club the Marowak: what a seriously tick off fellow. When he’s not using his bone as a beat stick, he can actually make some pretty decent appeals (if not somewhat brutal) but he works best with Psycho to make funky A S S appeals which are brilliantly static dude.

6. Claire May
Is the best appealer. She has five contest trophies and five battling trophies and all seven frontier symbols. Basically, you can call her a Mary Sue! The daughter of Steven. She loves fire pokemon and can make appeals from almost any Pokemon, and can make them the best battlers you ever seen. I can be really tough on judging, but I can be really nice at times. She has almost every Pokemon and has the title of Pokemon Specialist because of her knowledge. Many of Claire May's friends look up to her, but she rather not tell them about the dangerous things she had did in the past to get at this powerful point.
- Beauty the Beautifly: A dazzling pokemon that always gets CM through tough time. Beauty has always been a kind and helpful pokemon and always adds a little more to appeals than told.
- Skit the Skitty: A cute loveable pokemon and a little funny at times.She is a pet at home and after CM started out Skit missed her and came along.
- Chama the Pochama: Little stubborn starter. It inspired in battle--making dazzling appeals. It would be on final evolution but the stubbornness made it want to be a Pochama.
- Milotic: It joined when it was a little Feebas. It was stuck in a fast current when CM came along and rescued it. Never wanted to leave her. After a lot of training it evolved into Milotic.
- Espy the Espeon: Espy was a gift from her dad when it was an Eevee, abused and hurt when her dad found it. Since then she has tried to heal it and trained it. Espy is shy, but protective and strong.








How Judging Works:

For the sake of a more speedy contest, only one judge rates on how well you did your appeal and gives you a score of one to hundred depending on how well you did. The maximum amount of points you get for each category below is from one to twenty, then added up by the judges (however, contest appealing rules more below apply as well). What makes you different from all the other coordinators apply here...IF YOU'RE ALL READY...HERE...WE...GO!

1. Entrance: Where would the Pokemon be without an entrance? In a battle it wouldn't matter, but in an appeal you get points for how original the entrance is. The way the Pokemon arrives can give you points, if they surprise or amaze the audience and judges in any way. The Coordinator appealing themselves work. Make sure it's surprising and unpredictable, because the whole point of a contest is to dazzle the audience in anyway possible.

2. Skill: The skill factor awards points for the strength of the Coordinator and the Pokemon, including what they used to make the appeal go off. In other words, how much impact did it have on the audience and judges: in other words, depending on how they liked it in opinion, and how effective it was for the entire field in general. The overall opinion for the audience and the judges will be applied to your score, so showoffs can be happy during this area.

3. Body: Depending on the condition of the Pokemon after the appeal. If the Coordinator, Judges, audience, or the appealing Pokemon is hurt or disadvantaged physically in any way, points are deducted. Basically, the physical impact your Pokemon has before, during, and after the appeal along with the attack's effect on the user will be counted. However, if in a good condition like happiness, star-quality, or excitement, points are awarded to the Pokemon.

4. Mind: The mind factor is the choice of attacks used and how original they are together along with the Pokemon. If you used attacks working well together and a large variety and number of moves for more originality, you gain points. Basically, making a plethora of attacks synergies with each other is the way to go, showing the reliability to be in any situation of attacks. This judges everything else that doesn't apply to the visual part of an appeal.

5. Exit: All good things must come to an end, and after a hardworking appeal, the way a Pokemon leaves is important as well. For example, striking a dazzling pose, a creepy stare, a determined look, a fancy walk, or just an original way of returning the Pokemon helps with the appeal as they leave the stage for the next contestant. Make sure it's something that will make the audience remember you out of all the other Coordinators waiting in the back room.








Appealing Rules:

1. Use proper grammar/spelling/writing mechanics.
We judges have lives also, and we don't have the time to go through your entire appeal to find out what you really meant to say. Taking the appeal and deciphering it is hard work, so lack of grammar and spelling will result in point loss-- and that includes chatspeak or shorthand (the presentation has to look nice if you're about to read it). You shouldn't even talk like that in the rest of the forum, remember this is an English speaking place--keep that in mind.
(Penalty: -5 points)

2. Don't Ask To Join.
Do what that says. Many of us judges come here to judge appeals, and it gets extremely annoying when half of the new posts are idiots asking to join when clearly everyone else who listened to the rules did everything right, and had the courage to at least PM if they were too clueless. If you're too stupid to listen to this rule, then points will be taken off a next appeal. I come here and see n00bs do it all the time, and you wouldn't want to be on my rant list, would you?
(Penalty: -5 points)

3. Pick a card, any card, then stay PUT.
Your appeal can be the best ever, but choose one style of writing and stick with it: If your appeal uses diologue OR script, choose one and stay with it; if the Coordinator is a school bully, he better not be talking like a college graduate. If the Pokemon's crippled and has no legs, it better not be using Mega Kick or Blaze Kick. Point lossage for those who forget this. Basically, keep logical to your Pokemon's conditions so others can understand and adjust their mind to it.
(Penalty: -10 points)

4. Be logical during the appeal.
Seriously, I know a lot of coordinators think they can jumble a chunk of attacks into one appeal and call that something. All attacks can be used to maximum potential unlike battles, but in appeals you have to think (will this appeal work in real-life? Will it work on this specific Contest Hall?). The more your appeal doesn't make sense, the more points lost. A lot of the crap in the anime won't work because people aren't mature enough to have professionals understand it.
(Penalty: -10 points)

5. Every Appeal Must Be At Least A Page
In order to reduce the chances of a SPAM appeal, I have to put this into action. You don't have to worry about an appeal being too hard to make, because a good appeal should have enough description to be more than a page in the first place. This isn't quality over quantity, because in real life too short of a time on stage would be considered crap, don't you think? Quality is mostly important here, but what seperates one post from another counts to what we see.
(Penalty: -10 points)

6. Be descriptive in your appeal.
Even though us judges may be cool and such, most of us here don't have the power to read your mind, so put some effort and describe as much as you can- the longer the better so we can get a perfect image on what you really meant to say. I can see the future's events, but I can't see what's in your mind. Make sure you can tattoo an image into someone's head or just leave. If your appeal is too undescriptive, you'll lose points for every part you left out as blanks.
(Penalty: -15 points)


7. Be original or ELSE.
There's many people here thinking if they make their appeal mostly on what they've seen in the anime/manga, they'll get more points. Well news flash- do something like that and you'll lose points depending on how much you copied. Of course, if you're original, that effect's reversed to getting more points for originality. Be original- it's more fun anyways. Plagiarism is not welcome here, especially in the fanfiction forum and this one. Use your brain for once, peoples.
(Penalty: -15 points)







Appeals Made So Far:
Harley Scarow - 90, 78, 80, 83, 95, 95, 94, 96, 92, 88, 98, 94
starterlover - 95, 88, 85, 73, 95, 87, 85, 85, 96
Captain Murkrow - 77, 93, 73, 90, 79, 84
Jupetta - 90, 95, 83, 86, 100
Torchic - 85, 82, 84
Manene! - 86, 85
scepilianmaster - 100, 98
Evanji Axu - 87, 100, 93, 90
Chaos Mage - 76, 93
UU King - 76, 85, 82, 94
The Mighty Medicham - 94, 98
Moonlight Locust - 81, 86
pajama - 79, 84
Silver Arrow - 78, 86
Combusken - 90, 98
Sceptilianmaster - 84, 88
Swampert Guy - 97
Politoed Fanatic - 80, 73
Contest Fan - 93, 55, 81
Blazemxx - 90
sapira - 59
Krug - 74, 85
El Quinn - 82
Absol - 76
DarkLatios - 58
Russian May - 91
Katree - 32
Encyclopika - 88, 81
skyler - 54, 60
Momoko Lover - 76, 80, 84, 79
beutiavis - 55, 62
Anonymous - 73, 73, 88, 91, 95, 96
Eternal Rain - 93, 85
Elite 4 - 75, 80, 78, 76, 70
Soul Guardian - 65, 92, 81, 80, 84
Buoysel - 96, 84, 87, 83
Kris - 100
Typhlosion Dude - 80, 79
Magician Ruwla - 90
Water Trainer - 97, 100
Citty Kitty - 85, 97
Claire May - 69
Skitty Girl - 56
Evan Turner - 83, 79
Ulta Flame - 94, 83, 90
Javie - 84
Mirage Mew - 94, 87
SnorlaxForLife - 94, 100
Red - 84
Musapion - 86
Filos - 50
The Doctor - 95
Hyoga - 96
Sandos - 97, 85
MastaTrainer - 86, 87
Firewater - 93, 86
XD Bonsly - 72
Want Cookie - 96
Tanookie - 96, 96
Johnny Tsunami - 79, 63
Pikapower - 92
Blue Charmander - 93
 
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rokman

Banned
no thanks.
 

Eerie Fuwante

Wasting my time
If you dont want to participate then dont post.;)

I would like to enter with my prized Jolteon for a Cool Contest!He has maxed out coolness and is equipped with a red Scarf.:)Should I post his moveset?
 
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Evanji Axu

Guest
I'd like to enter my dear Tropius, Willow, for Beauty contest, and my Swellow, Sly, for Cool contest. Am I to give their movesets?
 

HarleyScarow

Emerald Shinigami
You don't have to give their movesets, because then the other coordinators are gonna have an unfair advantage over you if they know your moves out of the appeal, so keep them to yourself before the first round appeal, alright? By the way, you're allowed to use fakemon, so don't worry, alright? I'm using my fakemon, Bubbitar in this contest. I don't wanna wait for more people, so if we're all ready for some Pokemon action...here we...GOOOOOO!


"I'll begin this contest! Go Bubbitar!" I do a great spin, throwing a PokéBall high into the air, releasing her Bubbitar along with a large number of pink and red bubbles while the bubble Pokémon was slowly decreasing to the ground, spinning as it did so. Bubbitar was still twirling as if it was able to defy gravity.

“I’m so gonna blow everyone away, like, Bubbitar, let’s show them the bubblicious goodness we’re made off! Red bubble, pink bubble, everywhere a bubble-bubble!”

As to my words, I took out a wand with Lovantic as the tip- a bubble maker, and began blowing to make bubbles appear along with her Bubbitar creating the color everyone was hoping for. They were spinning as they did so, the force of the wind blowing back the bubbles instead of popping them onto the audience into a wonderful stand. The entire stadium was filled with bubbles, the shimmering crystal as the scene glossing while the number continued to increase- the eventual popping adding to the shine.

“Let’s show them what we’re made of, Bubbitar- Energy Stream!”

A yellow flash sparked around Bubbitar, then many shines from all directions moved out like the turning light of a lighthouse- spinning around Bubbitar’s body as they enveloped the entire field, shine, no shine, shine, no shine, shine, no shine…bubbles were sparkling even more as the field shined from the beauty, and the crystals glossed in the glow, creating an even more vivid scene. Because of this magical shine, the bubbles released earlier took on more colors than just red and pink, but rather all the colors of the rainbow in a shining appeal to impress everyone touching it as well. Bubbitar stopped, me and my Pokémon taking a bow and everyone cheering.
 
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starterlover1

Emperor Coordinator
I would like to enter my dear flygon for the preliminaries.
 

HarleyScarow

Emerald Shinigami
starterlover1 said:
I would like to enter my dear flygon for the preliminaries.
Okay then, just write your appeal down, then we'll judge on how well it is, alright?
 

starterlover1

Emperor Coordinator
All right, here goes nothing. I may be a star coordinator in the games, but i am not sure here. if this is anime style, then can your pokemon have more than four moves? just want to know before I post.
 

starterlover1

Emperor Coordinator
Got it. I will be using the name blake as the coordinator. Here I go. As the announcer said Blake's name, Blake ran on stage. Throwing up a premier ball, he shouted, "Flygon, make your grand entrance!" Using the light of the pokeball, flygon quickly went into a sandstorm, combining the sand with streaks of light. When the sand cleared, a flygon of a different color was floating in the air. Keeping the rhythm, Blake called out to Flygon, "Use Dragonbreath, and then go into a quick attack!" First exhaling the transparent light blue mist-like attack, flygon used it's quick attack to speed through the attack, causing it to swirl around Flygon. After flygon was at its highest point in the stadium's open sky, blake ordered a solarbeam. As the color outling flygons wings and tip of the tail turned pure white, the sunlight poured on flygon. Then, Flygon shot the solarbeam, adding in its own blue and orange colors to the usual white and green. Once the light cleared, flygon floated perfectly still in the air, the sparkles of the now gone solarbeam shining in the air. The appeal was over.

I hope I made it, sorry if the writing took so long.
 

HarleyScarow

Emerald Shinigami
You seem to be experienced with this subject...I rewrote it for you...
As the announcer said Blake's name, Blake ran on stage, throwing up a Premier Ball, he shouted, "Flygon, make your grand entrance!"

Using the light of the PokéBall, flygon quickly went into a sandstorm, combining the sand with streaks of light. When the sand cleared, a Flygon of a different color was floating in the air.

Keeping the rhythm, Blake called out to Flygon, "Use Dragonbreath, and then go into a quick attack!"

First exhaling the transparent light blue mist-like attack, flygon used it's quick attack to speed through the attack, causing it to swirl around Flygon. After flygon was at its highest point in the stadium's open sky, blake ordered a solarbeam. As the color outling flygons wings and tip of the tail turned pure white, the sunlight poured on flygon. Then, Flygon shot the solarbeam, adding in its own blue and orange colors to the usual white and green. Once the light cleared, flygon floated perfectly still in the air, the sparkles of the now gone solarbeam shining in the air.

The appeal was over.
 

starterlover1

Emperor Coordinator
Do you really think so? Hm. Then, I guess I could call myself a star coordinator. When do I find out my score.
 

HarleyScarow

Emerald Shinigami
Later, me and my friends Torchic23 and Blazemxx are gonna put the score in one post on this thread...yeah...yours was pretty good...the undescriptive ones go down in the dumps. I have my score out for you already, and it's a 95 for good description and experienced usage of the sunlight. However, they're gonna give the other two scores, then we find out the average of your appeal- that's how it's gonna be for the other Coordinators as well.
 
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starterlover1

Emperor Coordinator
In the description, you said that finals and semifinals will be contest style double battles. How would you do that? Besides, some people might lose access to the internet. In my case, for example, the forums will not be accessible for a certain amount of time, like 10 minutes. It will happen randomly. The computer freezes and when I try to get back onto the forums, it says that the page cannot be displayed.
 

Torchic23

gee that's swell
Wow, lotsa posts! Okay, I'll do my judging for the appeals so far.

starterlover1- 88

I hope I don't sound unfair here. I'm giving my honest opinion. The way you released Flygon from its poke ball was creative and cool. The Solar Beam was really pretty, but I was a little confused at some spots. A nice effort ^^

wobbuffetds- 90

Your's was a lot easier to understand. The multi-color bubbles, they were so pretty! Using props are okay, I usually don't like them, but since you used it to bond with your Pokemon so well, I guess it's okay this time ^^

There ya go!
 

HarleyScarow

Emerald Shinigami
Don't worry, Torchic23- that was good! By the way, don't forget to make your own appeal sometime soon, alright?

starterlover1- 85, I'm an *ss, I know. Even though it was good, it was kinda unoriginal, so there- but good for a first appeal- possibly enough to get to the next round!
 
Starterlover: They were too uncontrolled- I fail to see how long Dragonbreath lasted and where was Solarbeam aimed at? 78, don't be mad with the score, I mean, May made it with a 75.

wobbuffetds: You failed to explain what Bubbitar looked like, so I don't know how to judge the way the attacks work with the physical body itself. 80
 
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Captain Murkrow

SACRE F-ING BLEU!
woo anime style battles! i will enter bellossom.

thedarkcipher makes his way to the stage.

"come on out....BELLOSSOM!"

"bello-ssom!"

"use petal dance then magical leaf!"

the petals surrounded bellossom in a coccon, then was swiftly dispersed in a glow of green as the magical leafs burst from within the pink encasement. the remaining shards of petal glowed from the radiance of the magical leaf, creating a sparkling effect in midair.

"now, finish with moonlight!"

the sky darkened as bellossom jumped into the air. a ray of moonlight hit the stage, brightening up the sparkling traces of the previous combination.
 
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HarleyScarow

Emerald Shinigami
TheDarkCipher: I'll give you an 77 because for one thing, your appeal was kinda unoriginal and you didn't post in proper grammar (yeah, that counts too- for you was not capitalizing some of the letters). You didn't give that much description other than the most brief and obvious ones, and it wasn't that original. However, it was kinda good for a reply box entry and I liked the Moonlight you gave in the end to contridict Bellossem's rather light-mood, and the roses were nice. Don't worry- 77 is high for our standards.
 
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