Nimble Arcanine
No Matter How Far..
Heh. Not bad for my first try. Atleast now I know my weaker points in it all, I think, thanks. ^^
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Serebii Pokemon Contest Hall - Welcome All Coordinators!
- Thread starter HarleyScarow
- Start date
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Claire May
Hikari and May fan
Peoples!I'm getting tired about people entering saying I'm entering my beautiful Milotic and not posting the appeal.I'm taking this seriously so be careful.I understand if ya got to go cause of something.
Claire May
Hikari and May fan
Let's have some fun!
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Come on out!
April sent out her Milotic!
Miiiiiilooooootic tic!
Surf Miloltic!
Mii!
Now use Ice Beam on the tidal wave to freeze it!
Tic!
Wow!Look at that sparkling wave!It's making Milotic look even more beautiful than it was in the beginning with that blue scarf!
Now Petal Dance!
Milotic is having a beautiful yet mystifing look.Though Milotics can't learn Petal Dance.
Reveal your self!
What is this!Why it's a Roselia!It must of been hiding behind the wave!
Rose break up the attack!
Well there they are with a beatiful glow and sparkle around them!
Milotic Iron Tail on the wave!Rose Sunny Day!
Wow!Milotic is carving a figure in the wave!Plus,Sunny Day is making the wave glitter and glow!
Now Solarbeam on the wave!
Wow!Little pieces of ice are everywhere!
Twister!
The ice is glitter making the pokemon look beautiful!
The score is .......!
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Come on out!
April sent out her Milotic!
Miiiiiilooooootic tic!
Surf Miloltic!
Mii!
Now use Ice Beam on the tidal wave to freeze it!
Tic!
Wow!Look at that sparkling wave!It's making Milotic look even more beautiful than it was in the beginning with that blue scarf!
Now Petal Dance!
Milotic is having a beautiful yet mystifing look.Though Milotics can't learn Petal Dance.
Reveal your self!
What is this!Why it's a Roselia!It must of been hiding behind the wave!
Rose break up the attack!
Well there they are with a beatiful glow and sparkle around them!
Milotic Iron Tail on the wave!Rose Sunny Day!
Wow!Milotic is carving a figure in the wave!Plus,Sunny Day is making the wave glitter and glow!
Now Solarbeam on the wave!
Wow!Little pieces of ice are everywhere!
Twister!
The ice is glitter making the pokemon look beautiful!
The score is .......!
Razor Shiftry
Cynthia = Porn Star
o...k...that was terrible. it was an overused tactic and the way you wrote it had hardly any description and you had no entry and exit. that was just...terrible.
Score: 20
Claire May
Hikari and May fan
Gaag!Oh horror!
Razor Shiftry
Cynthia = Porn Star
lol, it would have been worse if you weren't a judge you know
Nimble Arcanine
No Matter How Far..
Because I was bored. - Second Round.
'And now we meet, my first, and best pokemon.' Thought Luck, of course, this pokemon was also an odd colour, and yet, she still didn't care, because all pokemon to her were the same, friends. Shaking, this would be her second shot at the Contest, and her first shot at being a Co-ordinator. 'Now lets see if we can beat our Last score.' She starts, Throwing a friend ball forwards, which erupts, a swirl of light forms, then, a pokemon.
"Lets go, Entice!" The girl calls.
Stars shoot upwards, again, like her other pokemon, Entice uses wish. "Let's change this from the last show!" Luck calls. A quick answer, "Esp." followed by a nod shows before Entice's body glows, then her eyes. Slowly, the Espeon raises into the air, along with the stars, she then starts twisting around, like a ballet dancer does. Her paws in the air, and torso lowered, the stars start to swarm around her body, soon enough, covering her fully.
"Okay, Lets double your proformance!" The Teenaged girl calls, watching the appeal.
Suddenly, three more Espeon's appear, twirling around, on the outside of the twister of stars. The three drop to the ground, their eyes glowing, they turn and face the scene, They start chanting and flicking their tails the same way, identically, at the same time.
"Good, Keep this up!"
The twister glows, before pausing, in the middle of the stage, like as if time itself had stopped. Then, the pokemon again start to chant, The twister starts again, before the other pokemon leap into it, causing the twister to expand, then explode, into tiny shards of colours.
The Espeon merge together, again, becoming the one Espeon that had started the show. Quickly, Entice lands gracefully on the ground, her eyes, no longer glowing, but infact, seem smaller. The shards have stopped, paused like clouds in the sky.
'Okay, Time to suck it in.' Thinks Luck. Her pokemon, being able to read minds, listens.
The stars and dust start to float down, all flowing into the radiant green coat of Espeon, her jewl, which is upon her head, glows. From the jewl, shoots a ball of black, a shadow ball, It shoots around the stage, controlled by the Espeon, of course.
'Let's see if you're a true cowgirl, shall we?' Luck laughs to herself, "Okay, You know what to do!" She calls.
Another nod, another attack. A long rope, made from grass, materializes from a light, which Espeon had shot from her thoughts themself. The rope starts to twist around like a snake, upon the ground, it curls, before raising up, like a Cobra. The vines thicken and the rope snake leaps higher, a hissing sound arises from it.
"Okay, Moving on!" Calls Luck, 'Just like the way we train..' She thinks, hoping her appeal, so far, has turned out well.
The rope starts to swing around, a lasoo forms, it twists faster, before shooting out at the shadow ball, which had been twisting in circles around the roof of the building.
The ball dodges, again, the rope shoots out, this time, hitting the Shadow ball and wraping around itself around the ball. Slowly, a ball of vines and black light floats gracefully to the ground, Espeon jerks her head to one side, the ball starts to spin, upon the ground of the stage. Then, Espeon dives down, through the ground, a few seconds pass, then, from the middle of the ball, Espeon bursts, causing a hole in the ball, which light seeps from.
"Let's finish this." Luck nods.
Espeon returns the nods with her own, then turning back to the ball, she opens her mouth, rays of stars shoot out, followed by a beam of colours. The two attacks mix, then, at last, they hit the ball, which, at first, asorbs the attack, but, finally loses, blowing up into coloured leaves, which float around.
"And this ends our turn!" States Luck, walking over to her pokemon and lifting her high, followed by a quick swirl, then a exit.
'And now we meet, my first, and best pokemon.' Thought Luck, of course, this pokemon was also an odd colour, and yet, she still didn't care, because all pokemon to her were the same, friends. Shaking, this would be her second shot at the Contest, and her first shot at being a Co-ordinator. 'Now lets see if we can beat our Last score.' She starts, Throwing a friend ball forwards, which erupts, a swirl of light forms, then, a pokemon.
"Lets go, Entice!" The girl calls.
Stars shoot upwards, again, like her other pokemon, Entice uses wish. "Let's change this from the last show!" Luck calls. A quick answer, "Esp." followed by a nod shows before Entice's body glows, then her eyes. Slowly, the Espeon raises into the air, along with the stars, she then starts twisting around, like a ballet dancer does. Her paws in the air, and torso lowered, the stars start to swarm around her body, soon enough, covering her fully.
"Okay, Lets double your proformance!" The Teenaged girl calls, watching the appeal.
Suddenly, three more Espeon's appear, twirling around, on the outside of the twister of stars. The three drop to the ground, their eyes glowing, they turn and face the scene, They start chanting and flicking their tails the same way, identically, at the same time.
"Good, Keep this up!"
The twister glows, before pausing, in the middle of the stage, like as if time itself had stopped. Then, the pokemon again start to chant, The twister starts again, before the other pokemon leap into it, causing the twister to expand, then explode, into tiny shards of colours.
The Espeon merge together, again, becoming the one Espeon that had started the show. Quickly, Entice lands gracefully on the ground, her eyes, no longer glowing, but infact, seem smaller. The shards have stopped, paused like clouds in the sky.
'Okay, Time to suck it in.' Thinks Luck. Her pokemon, being able to read minds, listens.
The stars and dust start to float down, all flowing into the radiant green coat of Espeon, her jewl, which is upon her head, glows. From the jewl, shoots a ball of black, a shadow ball, It shoots around the stage, controlled by the Espeon, of course.
'Let's see if you're a true cowgirl, shall we?' Luck laughs to herself, "Okay, You know what to do!" She calls.
Another nod, another attack. A long rope, made from grass, materializes from a light, which Espeon had shot from her thoughts themself. The rope starts to twist around like a snake, upon the ground, it curls, before raising up, like a Cobra. The vines thicken and the rope snake leaps higher, a hissing sound arises from it.
"Okay, Moving on!" Calls Luck, 'Just like the way we train..' She thinks, hoping her appeal, so far, has turned out well.
The rope starts to swing around, a lasoo forms, it twists faster, before shooting out at the shadow ball, which had been twisting in circles around the roof of the building.
The ball dodges, again, the rope shoots out, this time, hitting the Shadow ball and wraping around itself around the ball. Slowly, a ball of vines and black light floats gracefully to the ground, Espeon jerks her head to one side, the ball starts to spin, upon the ground of the stage. Then, Espeon dives down, through the ground, a few seconds pass, then, from the middle of the ball, Espeon bursts, causing a hole in the ball, which light seeps from.
"Let's finish this." Luck nods.
Espeon returns the nods with her own, then turning back to the ball, she opens her mouth, rays of stars shoot out, followed by a beam of colours. The two attacks mix, then, at last, they hit the ball, which, at first, asorbs the attack, but, finally loses, blowing up into coloured leaves, which float around.
"And this ends our turn!" States Luck, walking over to her pokemon and lifting her high, followed by a quick swirl, then a exit.
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fosterfossil
The prey bites back!
*throws a Luxury Ball*
Xatu come on out and use Future sight and wish
*glows for a second and git's a glint in it's eye*
ok now use shadow ball and then quickly teleport in front of it and use steel wing to bounce it back then teleport to the other side and launch another shadow ball.then jump to the front of the stage
*the to shadow balls crash into each other and dissapear in and purple mist of an explosion just then future sight comes from behind the explosion and hits xatu but just as that happen wish take effect and xatu is healed*
now use shadow ball then psychic to turn it into another xatu and walk off the stage.
Xatu come on out and use Future sight and wish
*glows for a second and git's a glint in it's eye*
ok now use shadow ball and then quickly teleport in front of it and use steel wing to bounce it back then teleport to the other side and launch another shadow ball.then jump to the front of the stage
*the to shadow balls crash into each other and dissapear in and purple mist of an explosion just then future sight comes from behind the explosion and hits xatu but just as that happen wish take effect and xatu is healed*
now use shadow ball then psychic to turn it into another xatu and walk off the stage.
HarleyScarow
Emerald Shinigami
Nimble Arcanine: 77
Nice synergy, and original way of giving commands. The judges are now going harder on the appealers, so anything MORE than 65 can be celebration.
fosterfossil: 6
No comment.
Nice synergy, and original way of giving commands. The judges are now going harder on the appealers, so anything MORE than 65 can be celebration.
fosterfossil: 6
No comment.
fosterfossil
The prey bites back!
wow u suck nvr mind then i was in a hurry the least u could do is give me advice.
HarleyScarow
Emerald Shinigami
- For one thing, it has to be an entire page. You gave six lines.
- You didn't capitalize what needed to be capitalized.
- The appeal was bland and choppy.
- From what you did write, there was barely any description.
- What makes your Xatu different from another Xatu?
- If you're in a hurry, then don't post.
Did you even read the appeal above you?
Everything was pretty self-explanatory...
...AT LEAST USE SOME COMMON SENSE...
- You didn't capitalize what needed to be capitalized.
- The appeal was bland and choppy.
- From what you did write, there was barely any description.
- What makes your Xatu different from another Xatu?
- If you're in a hurry, then don't post.
Did you even read the appeal above you?
Everything was pretty self-explanatory...
...AT LEAST USE SOME COMMON SENSE...
fosterfossil
The prey bites back!
ok thanx for the advice but just one thing i hate people who judge on grammer when can i post another appeal and how long is one page
Psychic
Really and truly
fosterfossil, clearly you don't know how to RPG. Please read the Stickies and check out the others to see how it's done- you'll see that it's supposed to be a STORY.
Now, does any BOOK look like that? In Harry Potter, is it written in this way:
harry walks up teh steps. He sais hi to ppl. malfoy chalnged him 2 a duel but he sed no. malfoy got angry and casted a spel at hary.
harry got hit and turnd into a chiken.
Um, NO. If it was written like that, it would be crap and NOBODY in their right mind would read it.
For the love of Mew, there is an entire set of rules for not only the RPG forum, but this thread as well. And they tell you what an appeal is and how to write one. Ignoring these rules will only get you in trouble.
Whether you like it or not, grammar is being judged. In fact, if you want to get anywhere in life, you should actually put in the small amount of effort to USE GRAMMAR PROPERLY. (And note how it's spelled 'grammar'.)
Whether you like it or not, writing style is being judged. Description is being judged.
You got a 6/100 because you put no effort into the appeal and completely ignored the rules of the appeal and couldn't even write one PROPERLY.
You are WAY out of line. You have no right to insult other members or ask why you got such a poor result. Only you are to blame, and hell, I have half the mind to give you an infraction for insulting others for no good reason and blatantly ignoring everyone and everything around you.
Watch your mouth or you'll get in trouble. And show HarleyScarow, as well as every other member, respect.
Or else you'll get none yourself.
~Psychic
Now, does any BOOK look like that? In Harry Potter, is it written in this way:
harry walks up teh steps. He sais hi to ppl. malfoy chalnged him 2 a duel but he sed no. malfoy got angry and casted a spel at hary.
harry got hit and turnd into a chiken.
Um, NO. If it was written like that, it would be crap and NOBODY in their right mind would read it.
For the love of Mew, there is an entire set of rules for not only the RPG forum, but this thread as well. And they tell you what an appeal is and how to write one. Ignoring these rules will only get you in trouble.
Whether you like it or not, grammar is being judged. In fact, if you want to get anywhere in life, you should actually put in the small amount of effort to USE GRAMMAR PROPERLY. (And note how it's spelled 'grammar'.)
Whether you like it or not, writing style is being judged. Description is being judged.
You got a 6/100 because you put no effort into the appeal and completely ignored the rules of the appeal and couldn't even write one PROPERLY.
You are WAY out of line. You have no right to insult other members or ask why you got such a poor result. Only you are to blame, and hell, I have half the mind to give you an infraction for insulting others for no good reason and blatantly ignoring everyone and everything around you.
Watch your mouth or you'll get in trouble. And show HarleyScarow, as well as every other member, respect.
Or else you'll get none yourself.
~Psychic
Nimble Arcanine
No Matter How Far..
Ah, Okay. *Sweatdrops.*
Lol, so am I free to post another appeal soon, or should I give them a rest? -I do them because IT gives ME something to do, heh.-
Lol, so am I free to post another appeal soon, or should I give them a rest? -I do them because IT gives ME something to do, heh.-
fosterfossil
The prey bites back!
I'm sorry harleyscarcrow and I am sorry to every one else too. I didn't mean to lose my temper.
"Finally- well let's go Venomoth, we have to go to arena two."
"Veno Venomoth"
David Stands up as he watched the latest battle finish up on the televison in the locker room.Irratated at that he had the final battle, he rushes of with Venomoth to arena two to find that there is the normal Judges panel, and a scoreboard- but everything else is changed. Instead of the normal arena, this field was a large battle floor, with white tiles, and a pool of water in the middle. As the referee Stands, he looks at David, then his opponet. As the flags are raised, two poke balls open to reveal a Hypno, and David's Venomoth.
"arrgh, a type Disadvantage, anyway- Venomoth, Sleep powder, then silver wind now!"
"what a newbie, Hypno, confusion then focus punch, you know what to do."
Venomoth moves first, launching a blue powder at the Hypno, who stands there unaffected. Venomoth stops the attack, confused until he sees that Hypno isn't effected. Angered, Venomoth fires a silverly twister at Hypno, expecting a retaliation. Hypno sighs, and swings his pendelum as the twister closes in on him. Then the twister stops, glows blue and twirls back into the stunned bug. Venomoth is trapped inside, as Hypno pulls the silver ball towards his glowing fist. Hypno punches the ball, causing an explosion, that sends shards of light right into Venomoth, who falls back down to earth with a crash. David Winces as his points are reduced by a third. Venomoth struggles to its wings, and immediately vanishes, slamming into Hypno as a bright flash stuns the psychic, causing him to stagger around
"Hypno, Hypnosis the water."
"Venomoth, gust"
"Hypno, change to confusion then focus punch again!"
Venomoth starts to spiral around, but just as the wind spins, it is caught by the confusion, and yet again an orb of wind envelops the bug. David then calls out to Venomoth.
"Venomoth, flash attack now"
suddenly the orb glows brightly, and the ball explodes, sending shards of light into both pokemon. Both slam down to the ground, and the events are shown on the scoring, with David's bar being slightly below his opponet's with 30 seconds left.
"Venomoth, Hidden power to finish, hurry"
"Hypno, COUNTER"
Venomoth flips in midair, and fires a flurry of orbs that land right on Hypno's head, engulfing it in a white orb that grew larger and larger until it almost exploded.....almost. Hypno suddenly teleports, and the orb just floats above him. Hypno swallowed the energy, and as the time ran down
7.....
Hypno's fist glowed brown
5.....
Venomoth flies upward, and fires another hidden power
4.....
Hypno's energy beam is launched
3.....
the orbs and the blast collide
2.....
the orbs are repelled towards the screeching Venomoth
1.....
a large explosion is heard, and a giant cloud covers the area where Venomoth had been seen. Suddenly a purple being floated for a few seconds, then fell silently to earth, His Trainer catching him, as the reminant of the blast explodes in light, sparking around the stadium, as the Judges announce
"the winner is Phillip Hasenritter of Violet City, and his Hypno, with a score of 55 points remaning, to David and Venomoth's 10 points. David will go to the losers bracket of this double elimination tournament in the next round. Congratulations to both trainers....
David looks down at Venomoth's friend ball as he sits next to its hospital bed, wondering who he would use in his next round........
"Veno Venomoth"
David Stands up as he watched the latest battle finish up on the televison in the locker room.Irratated at that he had the final battle, he rushes of with Venomoth to arena two to find that there is the normal Judges panel, and a scoreboard- but everything else is changed. Instead of the normal arena, this field was a large battle floor, with white tiles, and a pool of water in the middle. As the referee Stands, he looks at David, then his opponet. As the flags are raised, two poke balls open to reveal a Hypno, and David's Venomoth.
"arrgh, a type Disadvantage, anyway- Venomoth, Sleep powder, then silver wind now!"
"what a newbie, Hypno, confusion then focus punch, you know what to do."
Venomoth moves first, launching a blue powder at the Hypno, who stands there unaffected. Venomoth stops the attack, confused until he sees that Hypno isn't effected. Angered, Venomoth fires a silverly twister at Hypno, expecting a retaliation. Hypno sighs, and swings his pendelum as the twister closes in on him. Then the twister stops, glows blue and twirls back into the stunned bug. Venomoth is trapped inside, as Hypno pulls the silver ball towards his glowing fist. Hypno punches the ball, causing an explosion, that sends shards of light right into Venomoth, who falls back down to earth with a crash. David Winces as his points are reduced by a third. Venomoth struggles to its wings, and immediately vanishes, slamming into Hypno as a bright flash stuns the psychic, causing him to stagger around
"Hypno, Hypnosis the water."
"Venomoth, gust"
"Hypno, change to confusion then focus punch again!"
Venomoth starts to spiral around, but just as the wind spins, it is caught by the confusion, and yet again an orb of wind envelops the bug. David then calls out to Venomoth.
"Venomoth, flash attack now"
suddenly the orb glows brightly, and the ball explodes, sending shards of light into both pokemon. Both slam down to the ground, and the events are shown on the scoring, with David's bar being slightly below his opponet's with 30 seconds left.
"Venomoth, Hidden power to finish, hurry"
"Hypno, COUNTER"
Venomoth flips in midair, and fires a flurry of orbs that land right on Hypno's head, engulfing it in a white orb that grew larger and larger until it almost exploded.....almost. Hypno suddenly teleports, and the orb just floats above him. Hypno swallowed the energy, and as the time ran down
7.....
Hypno's fist glowed brown
5.....
Venomoth flies upward, and fires another hidden power
4.....
Hypno's energy beam is launched
3.....
the orbs and the blast collide
2.....
the orbs are repelled towards the screeching Venomoth
1.....
a large explosion is heard, and a giant cloud covers the area where Venomoth had been seen. Suddenly a purple being floated for a few seconds, then fell silently to earth, His Trainer catching him, as the reminant of the blast explodes in light, sparking around the stadium, as the Judges announce
"the winner is Phillip Hasenritter of Violet City, and his Hypno, with a score of 55 points remaning, to David and Venomoth's 10 points. David will go to the losers bracket of this double elimination tournament in the next round. Congratulations to both trainers....
David looks down at Venomoth's friend ball as he sits next to its hospital bed, wondering who he would use in his next round........
Pokenatic92
Im walking away now
Tiago walked out onto the stage. He looked around at the immense crowd then looked each judge in the eye. He reached for his belt and took out a pokeball. It expanded in his hand and he threw it into the air. "Go Clamp!" Out of the pokeball came a Crawdaunt clamping his claws.
"Ok Clamp send out a bubblebeam"
Clamp opened his right claw and shout hundreds of bubbles into the air.
"Now use crabhammer on the bubbles"
Clamp leaped into the air. His right claw glowed a bright shine and he punched each and every bubble. This caused thousands of drops to glisten in the light all the way to the floor.
"While you're in the air use surf"
Clamp shot out gallon after gallon of water which filled the entire stage.
"Now use Ice Beam and while your falling in use Protect"
Clamp then shot out an Ice Beam which began to freeze the water. He then used protect ceateing an orb around him. He splashed in the water which then froze.
After people could see the stage visibly the water was now frozen. In the middle there was a frozen splash in the shape of an egg. In the middle was a frozen Clapm in the middle of the protect orb.
"Lets finish off. Use rock smash"
After a few moments Clamp shot his arm throught the ice sending the ice fly everywhere.
"Now use Hyper Beam on the falling pieces of ice"
Clamp lept up and opened his mouth. He charged an orange beam and shot it out at the pieces of ice. After the series of small explosions disappeared, small rain droplets fell down over the crowd.
Clamp landed next to Tiago and they both bowed to the crowed. "Great job Clamp!" Clamp then yelled out happily" Craw-Craw-Dauunnnt!"
"Ok Clamp send out a bubblebeam"
Clamp opened his right claw and shout hundreds of bubbles into the air.
"Now use crabhammer on the bubbles"
Clamp leaped into the air. His right claw glowed a bright shine and he punched each and every bubble. This caused thousands of drops to glisten in the light all the way to the floor.
"While you're in the air use surf"
Clamp shot out gallon after gallon of water which filled the entire stage.
"Now use Ice Beam and while your falling in use Protect"
Clamp then shot out an Ice Beam which began to freeze the water. He then used protect ceateing an orb around him. He splashed in the water which then froze.
After people could see the stage visibly the water was now frozen. In the middle there was a frozen splash in the shape of an egg. In the middle was a frozen Clapm in the middle of the protect orb.
"Lets finish off. Use rock smash"
After a few moments Clamp shot his arm throught the ice sending the ice fly everywhere.
"Now use Hyper Beam on the falling pieces of ice"
Clamp lept up and opened his mouth. He charged an orange beam and shot it out at the pieces of ice. After the series of small explosions disappeared, small rain droplets fell down over the crowd.
Clamp landed next to Tiago and they both bowed to the crowed. "Great job Clamp!" Clamp then yelled out happily" Craw-Craw-Dauunnnt!"
Razor Shiftry
Cynthia = Porn Star
ok guys, i'm sorry but i don't have much time to judge the appeals above but...
apology accepted - just keep it cool ok?
lol, don't worry about it dude. just post an appeal whenever you like - and don't worry, i do the same thing as well - write contest appeals cuz i'm bored and exercises my creativity...
apology accepted - just keep it cool ok?
Ok I want to do some of this with um my Hitmonchan on a thoguh contest, here goes nothing.
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"Go Hitmonchan," Jade said as he summoned his hitmonchan from the dull life inside his pokeball. "Ok use your Earthquake attack," jade announced.
Hitmonchan then suddenlystarted punching the ground, it unsettled and displaced. Some boulders came out of the ground do to this.
"Now use strength to throw the rocks that came out and then follow it with a mach punch to destroy the rocks," jade said to Hitmonchan.
Hitmonchan used strength and threw the rocks in the air then one by one he broke using mach punch ending in a shower of rocks falling from the sky around Hitmonchan.
"Now use fire punch to one side, ice punch to the other, and thunder punch to the remaining rocks falling," jade said for the finnaly.
Hitmonchan fire punched one side of the falling rocks to burn them to dust, then he used ice punch to the other side freezing them, then melting, and fiannaly he used the thunder punch on some of the rocks left which fell to the water which was covered with burnt dust to create a barrier of lighting that covered Hitmonchan, soon it faded. Hitmonchan put on a fighting stance and then left with Jade.
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So how diid I do this is the first time I do this.
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"Go Hitmonchan," Jade said as he summoned his hitmonchan from the dull life inside his pokeball. "Ok use your Earthquake attack," jade announced.
Hitmonchan then suddenlystarted punching the ground, it unsettled and displaced. Some boulders came out of the ground do to this.
"Now use strength to throw the rocks that came out and then follow it with a mach punch to destroy the rocks," jade said to Hitmonchan.
Hitmonchan used strength and threw the rocks in the air then one by one he broke using mach punch ending in a shower of rocks falling from the sky around Hitmonchan.
"Now use fire punch to one side, ice punch to the other, and thunder punch to the remaining rocks falling," jade said for the finnaly.
Hitmonchan fire punched one side of the falling rocks to burn them to dust, then he used ice punch to the other side freezing them, then melting, and fiannaly he used the thunder punch on some of the rocks left which fell to the water which was covered with burnt dust to create a barrier of lighting that covered Hitmonchan, soon it faded. Hitmonchan put on a fighting stance and then left with Jade.
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So how diid I do this is the first time I do this.
HarleyScarow
Emerald Shinigami
The stereotypical Valentine/February Shipping Coordinator Contest is thrown.
EVERYBODY, GO THERE! It needs winners, you know?
EVERYBODY, GO THERE! It needs winners, you know?
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