Pretty good...
It's original, but the whole plot is confusing
Also, it's faster to use imageshack. Just copy and paste the direct link that they give you.
Sometimes the text gets cut off on the speech bubbles, and there's a lot of blank space.
1)On 1st comic, one of the trainers was Coronis Red´overworld sprite. I could be wrong...but if I´m right, you didn´t gave credit
2)It could be more understable
3)Team Magma don´t uses Electric Pokemon, they use Fire types, Zubats or Poochyenas