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Hi!This is my first FanFic,so please post saying if it's good;249; ;249-d; ;249;
CHAPTER 1 - SHADOWED, SNAGGED AND PURIFIED
I was flying above the sky, for pure distraction. I was feeling pure libert. Sometimes I stop flying and start to fall on purpose.Then when I pass through a cloud, I start flying again. It's so good. If you here reading this could fly one day, try this. You'll be scared on the first time, but when you try a few times, you'll like. I'll help you: don't worry. Just relax. But you can't do it. How bad. It's so good ...
I'm the Earth's guardian, the sea's beast, but you can call me Lugia, simply Lugia. For those who don't know who I am, I am silver(or white)and I have some sort of lance covering my eyes. I have some things in my back that go down when I land. I have plush feets and two spines in my tail, dark blue eyes and and a blue form in my belly. My wings have five fingers like things. I born together with the world, to protect it. I really protect it,because Pokemon 2000 was true, it happened(they were spying us)!
I'll tell you my history. One day, I was patrolling the skies when I seemed a Spearow attacking a poor Pidgey. I flyed at medium speed at the Spearow, hurting him a little. He became nervous. I underestimaded it, thinkink all it can do is peck. But it was with a shadowy aura involving it, then tackled right in my belly. I goed mad (because it hurted) and Aeroblasted him far off. The Pidgey thanked me, then flew far to somewhere, maybe to South, because it happened on winter. But I haved a question, why that Spearow attacked with a shadowy aura? The other Spearow don't use that Shadow Blitz(I think that was the name), I patrol then.
I landed in the ground to think, but I landed in a trap! Then, three misterious man appeared: a blue one with long hair (Ardos), a red one with short hair (Eldes), and a short one with big creepy eyes and no hair (Greevil). They said their names with no reason (that's because I know their names), while I was in a BIG net. I have been carried to their hideout in Citadark or Nickeldark Isle(I don't remember). That island was full of traps and cientists. It has magma and lava in the most places. They have some cipher admins: Lovrina, an apparently lovely girl that was a little mad and have a VERY long pink hair and thin arms and legs, plus it was very cute. Snattle, an ugly man with gray lips that use a gray and black coat and use swimming glasses, covering its eyes. Gorigan, it's name already says all: it was in an ape position and only have Pokémon of the humanshape class. It was using swimming glasses, a red shirt and black pants, and to finalize Ardos and Eldes, that I already described. They used a very potent (and big)boat to reach CitaNickelDark Isle (liked my new personalized name for Cipher Hideout? ), because the sky was full of storms and the sea was rough. I was in a white ball like thing in the top of the island. They put me in a machine. It was black. I was in a big glass thing (I am big, so their things to use on me were big too, of course). All my powerful attacks (in my opinion) were useless.
They turned it on, and I fell like I was dying. Then, when I looked to myself, I was black and my eyes were red!My dark blue details (tail's spines, eyes' lances, the things on my back and the form in my belly) becomed white! My plush feet become vicious look claws.
I'd regained the moves Shadow blast (a shadow type AeroBlast), Shadow Down (a move that sharply lowers the foe's defense), Shadow Shed (a move that removes Reflect and Light Screen) and Shadow Storm (a move that attacks two opponents at once).
They gave me a code: XD001. I was posessed! I was created as an inpurificable shadow Pokemon. I was pure evil. I helped to capture 82 Pokémon.
I hearded from Farfetch'd (my spy) that when the last Shadow Pokémon was made (Dragonite L:55), a child shut off the Shadow Pokémon Factory (Cipher Key Lair).
I have to fly very high, for anyone don't see me.
There's an old man in Agate Village that seemed me carrying S.S Libra(a ship),and I heard from Farfetch'd that he thinks it was a Wailord flying (fool).
Yes, I stole a ship named S.S Libra. It was larger than me!I think I used Shadow Blast to carry it. No, you're not deaf: The ship was larger than me! It was full of Pokemon that Greevil was planing to turn into Shadow Pokemon (82 Shadow Pokémon, an inpurificable one and he wants more?? Sinserely, he is obssesed for power)! But I woke up into reality in the middle of the way and dropped the ship in a desert! Greevil become furious, but I make the good thing.
One day, a child challenged Greevil. It's name was Michael. I was called to fight him. I underestimed he: he used a master ball and snagged me in the first turn (I don't stand a chance...)
Then Greevil become furious and fighted Michael. Greevil was winning(Greevil: 2 Pokémon Michael:2 Pokémon) but he slipped up, and Michael snagged ALL it's Pokemon: Moltres, Zapdos, Articuno, Tauros, Rhydon and Exeggutor.
One day Michael purified all it's Pokemon(82 in total), except for me. Then he discovered how to purify me (on Internet{it was a tip, but I think he realized that don't hurt try}). He had to made "Max tempo in all the 9 purify chambers". He did it with me as the "visitor" (the Shadow Pokémon in the middle of the chamber)and goed the purify chamber in HQ lab, and it worked! I was normal again!
After 1 month, he released me. I visit he every day now. We play every day.Vaporeon, Wolf (Mightyena), Doggy (Houndoom),Rose (Roselia), Loyal (Lapras) and Strongy (Poliwrath)too! I like to fly with him. Technically,he yet owns me. We defend the Pokémon under attack, or similar (we protect then, except on Pokémon battles, of course). Michael continues with his Snag machine (As decoration in home). When the day ends, we go home, but play again next time. When something bad happens, we help each other.
We continue to play over and over. I promisse, I will never forget that corageous guy named Michael, never.
The End
What do you think? It's good or not? Please post!;249-d; ;249;And it can have some ortography errors 'cause I'm Brazilian. An' this is only the first chapter !
CHAPTER 1 - SHADOWED, SNAGGED AND PURIFIED
I was flying above the sky, for pure distraction. I was feeling pure libert. Sometimes I stop flying and start to fall on purpose.Then when I pass through a cloud, I start flying again. It's so good. If you here reading this could fly one day, try this. You'll be scared on the first time, but when you try a few times, you'll like. I'll help you: don't worry. Just relax. But you can't do it. How bad. It's so good ...
I'm the Earth's guardian, the sea's beast, but you can call me Lugia, simply Lugia. For those who don't know who I am, I am silver(or white)and I have some sort of lance covering my eyes. I have some things in my back that go down when I land. I have plush feets and two spines in my tail, dark blue eyes and and a blue form in my belly. My wings have five fingers like things. I born together with the world, to protect it. I really protect it,because Pokemon 2000 was true, it happened(they were spying us)!
I'll tell you my history. One day, I was patrolling the skies when I seemed a Spearow attacking a poor Pidgey. I flyed at medium speed at the Spearow, hurting him a little. He became nervous. I underestimaded it, thinkink all it can do is peck. But it was with a shadowy aura involving it, then tackled right in my belly. I goed mad (because it hurted) and Aeroblasted him far off. The Pidgey thanked me, then flew far to somewhere, maybe to South, because it happened on winter. But I haved a question, why that Spearow attacked with a shadowy aura? The other Spearow don't use that Shadow Blitz(I think that was the name), I patrol then.
I landed in the ground to think, but I landed in a trap! Then, three misterious man appeared: a blue one with long hair (Ardos), a red one with short hair (Eldes), and a short one with big creepy eyes and no hair (Greevil). They said their names with no reason (that's because I know their names), while I was in a BIG net. I have been carried to their hideout in Citadark or Nickeldark Isle(I don't remember). That island was full of traps and cientists. It has magma and lava in the most places. They have some cipher admins: Lovrina, an apparently lovely girl that was a little mad and have a VERY long pink hair and thin arms and legs, plus it was very cute. Snattle, an ugly man with gray lips that use a gray and black coat and use swimming glasses, covering its eyes. Gorigan, it's name already says all: it was in an ape position and only have Pokémon of the humanshape class. It was using swimming glasses, a red shirt and black pants, and to finalize Ardos and Eldes, that I already described. They used a very potent (and big)boat to reach CitaNickelDark Isle (liked my new personalized name for Cipher Hideout? ), because the sky was full of storms and the sea was rough. I was in a white ball like thing in the top of the island. They put me in a machine. It was black. I was in a big glass thing (I am big, so their things to use on me were big too, of course). All my powerful attacks (in my opinion) were useless.
They turned it on, and I fell like I was dying. Then, when I looked to myself, I was black and my eyes were red!My dark blue details (tail's spines, eyes' lances, the things on my back and the form in my belly) becomed white! My plush feet become vicious look claws.
I'd regained the moves Shadow blast (a shadow type AeroBlast), Shadow Down (a move that sharply lowers the foe's defense), Shadow Shed (a move that removes Reflect and Light Screen) and Shadow Storm (a move that attacks two opponents at once).
They gave me a code: XD001. I was posessed! I was created as an inpurificable shadow Pokemon. I was pure evil. I helped to capture 82 Pokémon.
I hearded from Farfetch'd (my spy) that when the last Shadow Pokémon was made (Dragonite L:55), a child shut off the Shadow Pokémon Factory (Cipher Key Lair).
I have to fly very high, for anyone don't see me.
There's an old man in Agate Village that seemed me carrying S.S Libra(a ship),and I heard from Farfetch'd that he thinks it was a Wailord flying (fool).
Yes, I stole a ship named S.S Libra. It was larger than me!I think I used Shadow Blast to carry it. No, you're not deaf: The ship was larger than me! It was full of Pokemon that Greevil was planing to turn into Shadow Pokemon (82 Shadow Pokémon, an inpurificable one and he wants more?? Sinserely, he is obssesed for power)! But I woke up into reality in the middle of the way and dropped the ship in a desert! Greevil become furious, but I make the good thing.
One day, a child challenged Greevil. It's name was Michael. I was called to fight him. I underestimed he: he used a master ball and snagged me in the first turn (I don't stand a chance...)
Then Greevil become furious and fighted Michael. Greevil was winning(Greevil: 2 Pokémon Michael:2 Pokémon) but he slipped up, and Michael snagged ALL it's Pokemon: Moltres, Zapdos, Articuno, Tauros, Rhydon and Exeggutor.
One day Michael purified all it's Pokemon(82 in total), except for me. Then he discovered how to purify me (on Internet{it was a tip, but I think he realized that don't hurt try}). He had to made "Max tempo in all the 9 purify chambers". He did it with me as the "visitor" (the Shadow Pokémon in the middle of the chamber)and goed the purify chamber in HQ lab, and it worked! I was normal again!
After 1 month, he released me. I visit he every day now. We play every day.Vaporeon, Wolf (Mightyena), Doggy (Houndoom),Rose (Roselia), Loyal (Lapras) and Strongy (Poliwrath)too! I like to fly with him. Technically,he yet owns me. We defend the Pokémon under attack, or similar (we protect then, except on Pokémon battles, of course). Michael continues with his Snag machine (As decoration in home). When the day ends, we go home, but play again next time. When something bad happens, we help each other.
We continue to play over and over. I promisse, I will never forget that corageous guy named Michael, never.
The End
What do you think? It's good or not? Please post!;249-d; ;249;And it can have some ortography errors 'cause I'm Brazilian. An' this is only the first chapter !
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You can't co-own a fic. You can co-own a club or even an RPG, but not a fic. You can co-WRITE it, but you wouldn't call that 'co-owning' it.